New Twinj SS (Ch 2 on Pg 4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: hailly

Nice start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

It was a great start. I cannot wait to read more. And don't worry about your Hindi. It's very good.

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Thank you that means a lot. And that means a lot bcuz I was so scared that my South Indianess or me not living in India or something would come through.

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

In that case i think u can breathe a sigh of relief as it was amazing.. I didnt find any faults in it..

I didn't know you were a south indian, i'm one too

So where are u from?

Originally posted by: kusharberry

loved it dear

nice concept

plzzz do continue soon

i wished like this would happen but nothing of the sort happend

Chapter 2: the reveal

Sid and Roshni are on stage

Happy Birthday Twinkle. Hum sab ke liya yeh din bahoot special he (for everyone today is a very important day). Because it is Christmas and your birthday .

S: all these years you have got double the presents how lucky are you? This year some of the presents are for us too right?

R: Ussr chod Siddharth (leave her Siddharth). Anyways twinkle we were so happy when Kunj invited us. And we have another present for you. This year has been a whirlwind for you.

S: Haan, nayi shaadi, nayi paarivar, nayi ghar (yes, new relationships, new family, new house)

R: so we thought why not to put together a slideshow with all the best times you have had

S: So Chalo dikte (so come on let's see)

Slide show starts with a baby photo of a Twinkle and everyone's aws. As more photos pass Twinkle and Kunj's first ever photo during the party in the Sarna Mansion appears (the one where he caught her from falling)

S: pati or patni ka pehla meeting (husband and wife's first meeting)

Twinkle looks at kunj but he still refuses to look at her and has an angry face.

Next is the picture of there reception of Kunj wiping Twinkles tears

T (to herself) : chinky was right, before shaadi everything is nice. Look at Kunj he was perfect. He was with me and trusted me. Pur shaadi ke baath (but after the wedding) he is always angry and beloved I did everything wrong

Then there are more pictures of the wedding

S: after all the obstacles *everyone looks at Yuvi for a couple of minutes*

Kunj notices this and feels guilty thinking Yuvi is innocent he says then shaadi hogi (then the wedding happened)

S: haanji, then they became Mr and Mrs Kunj and Twinkle Sarna

R: A married couple take Saath pheras, Iska matlab kya tumhe pata Siddharth (a married couple does all the rituals, do you know why Siddharth?)

S: Nahi

R: the rituals symbolize that they will stay together, that they will trust each other. Stay together during times of Khushi (happiness), dukh (sadness), madness (gusa) sab kuch. Everything exists, Tashan, pyaar, between them but everything but together

Twinkle and Kunj look at each other. Twinkle looks at Yuvi then back at Kunj with watery eyes and then turns around

K (to himself) : Kaise vishwas Karun Twinkle, Yuvi ek bacha hai but tumhari siyappa katam nahi hoowa. Har action galati hogi Twinkle (How can I trust you Twinkle, yuvi is a kid but you want to prove him wrong which means your siyappa/dramas will not end. And all the actions being proven wrong) with consequences.

Then a picture of their honeymoon appears and then a picture of yuvi comes up

Sid explains ab ek new experience Twinkle ke liya. Sid explains the whole story revealing Yuvi being Twinkle's ex and how he tried to molest her and kill twinkle multiple times. While Sid is talking there are many gasps in the audiences. Bebe yells "Ay Bhagavan"

Kunj gets worried but then he sees Twinkle unaffected by the revelations to the rest of the world. She was simply staring at Yuvi with a stern look on her face. And Kunj knew it was her plan. Kunj pulls her by her arm away from yuvi and near him, harshly hurting her

K: kya naya siyappa eh Twinle? (what is this new drama Twinkle). The full force of his hands on her feeble weak body hurt her and she was wincing in pain

T: Kunj dard horahai (Kunj it hurts)

Kunj does not listen to her and instead strengthens his grip making her let out a sharp cry

K: Twinkle Kitni bar meh bol rahi hoom! Samaja nahi. Yuvi. Ek. Bacha. Q past ko reveal kare ho? Bebe ko dekh, who shock pe he (Twinkle how many times have I told you. Do you not understand? Yuvi. Is a. Small. Boy. Why do you want to reveal the pasts. Look at Bebe she is in shock)

T: through her crying Nahi Kunj

K: No twinkle, I have had it! After the party is over. Go back home!

Twinkle looks up in shock

Tumhari ghar (your house). Everyones life has been in danger since the day I met you. And I thought I could handle it but you go and bring the trouble and I cannot see my family hurt!

Twinkle is without words just tears streaming down her cheeks uable to believe that Yuvi has succeeded in breaking her Tashan - e - shaadi

Seeing Kunj holding Twinkle Sid: dekho dekho kaise publicly flirting kare tum done (look look at you two publicly flirting) * breaking the awful mood *

Twinkle wiping her tears goes back to her seat. Roshni looks at Twinkle who signals her with anod to go ahead with the plan

Next the selfie Yuvi took with Kunj and twinkle is shown and yuvi acts as a kid and everyone believes him

Y: Ye me hoon or dost or Twinki

Kunj smiles while Twinkle is annoyed

Then the video plays from the terrace where Twinkle acts like se is going to commit suicide by jumping of the terrace.

There Yuvi reveals: Haan twinkle me pagal nayi hoon, ue sab act tha. Me tumhara pyaarsa pati komaarna jati hoon (yes twinkle I am not crazy, this was all an act so I can kill your loving husband). I failed twice I was not gonna fail this time. What better way to get rid of him then by getting close to him. It is like the saying "keep you friends close but your enemies closer" And he is my enemy because he stole my love from me. I made sure you and that kunj were always under my watch to make your lives miserable. And it was so easy making those Sarnas believe me. How gullible are they. Even better with Surjeet Tauji of Kunj's he married mom. I had to lie to her at first but she figure it out and so did you. You know why and how twinkle? Let me tell you it is because you still love me and I love you. Haan saath sal ke me natak karat ha, ma ku plan ka vajase phir tumhara shaadi pe realization hoga. Me tumse saach me pyaar karti hoon. Chalo mera saath hum shaadi karte (Yes I was acting for 7 years. It was all mom's plan. But during your wedding I realized I really love you. Come with me lets get married) Leave not or I will destroy each and everyone of the Sarnas

T: Yuvi mujhe pata tha! Chod mera hath (Yuvi I knew it. Leave my hand!

Lights come back on

Yuvi tries to sneak out but Sid stops him saying "Kidhar jaariyo mera bhai?"

Kunj, Bebe, Surjeet, Anand, Usha, and Manohar are still realizing

B: yeh sab ek natak tha? (This was all an act?)

Surjeet: Mejhe nahi pata Bebe, Anita yeh kya hai? Batao! (I don't know about this bebe, Anita what is all of this? Spill it!)

A: Nahi yeh...yeh...

Surjeet: Bol! Abhi! (Say it! Now!)

A: Yeh jhoot!... Han jhoot!... Yeh video photoshopped he (This is a lie!...Yes a lie!...This video was photoshopped)

Bebe slaps Anita Tum ek laki keti ho? Nahi! (You call yourself a women? No way!)

Y: How dare you slap my mom? Grabs Bebe

Kunj comes there and slaps Yuvi

K: Bus! Ek natak? Mera guilt natak nahi tha me saach me...sach..me (Enough! An act? My guilt was an act. I actually thought...actually thought...) I actually though you lost your memory ecause of me. But because of you I yelled at Twinkle, I fought with everyone.

Surjeet also comes and slaps Yuvi

S: Tum dono ka vajase yeh paarivar takar rahi thi abhi ke abhhi tum dono jail ja rai ho (Because of you two this family kept fighting. Right now you two are going to jail)

T: Nahi tauji, yeh party hai . Already sabse bada drama hogaya (No Tauji, this is a party. Already a big drama is over). Lets not call the police or everyone will talk about us even more. Lets go home and we will talk this through.

B: Bahu sayi key rahiye par Saaza zaaroor milega (Twinkle is right but a punishment will definitely be given)

Everyone continued for and hour or so

Kunj thought to himself: Twinkle I am sorry I can't believe me phirse galat socha (again thought wrong). You were right about Yuvi all those times. Uhh! I cannot believe myself. I should have believed her. Even after all those times I was rude to her, mom and surjeet tauji were rude, I told her to stop she still cares about the Sarna's izzat. And after all the gande harkat (awful things) Anita Aunty does to her she still does not want to send her to jail. Kya ladki he?! Ladki nahi. Sherni. Sherni. He smiled to himself

Precap: Yuvi and Anita kickedout. Yuvi and Kunj war of words with Twinkle present in the room.

Note: In my version Surjeet and Cherry are not evil they like Kunj and Twinkle as family

Sorry for the late update I was on vacation. This is an ongoing story hopefully you guys like it. Please tell me what you think I value your guys' comments. Thanks

Originally posted by: priyanvs

Pls continue soon dear