New Twinj SS (Ch 2 on Pg 4) - Page 2

It was a great start. I cannot wait to read more. And don't worry about your Hindi. It's very good.

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Amazing start

U should write more

Continue soon👍🏼

Thank you. And I'm writing it and I'm not home till Monday so I'll probably update then.

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

I actually liked this. And let me tell you, for someone whose not well off in hindi, u nailed it! It was actually spot on.

And lovely start.. Looking forward to it..

Do keep writing. I'm already eager to find out what happens next..

Thank you that means a lot. And that means a lot bcuz I was so scared that my South Indianess or me not living in India or something would come through.

Originally posted by: Abhiya2ishveer

It was nice😊continue soon

Thank you Will try to soon

Originally posted by: priyanvs

Nice start
continue soon ...
Eagerly waiting for the next update :)

Thanks 😊
Will try to as soon as I can

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Amazing start...Really urs is nice...much better than what cv's did...pls continue soon

Haha by the looks of it CVs does not want to make us happy at all. hopefully my story will bring some of what we are expecting.

Originally posted by: Duumps

This is wonderful please continue.

Thanks means a lot. 😊

Originally posted by: Zawra

Great dear continie soon

Thanks Hun! 😊

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

Nice
i liked it
pls continue soon

Thank you. I'll try to update whenever I can 😊

Originally posted by: Shiva4201

Wow LOVED IT'

Am i a bad person for wanting to kick both Yuvi And KUnj in the face?

Please continue

and that too soon

Yay thank you. And right now I would rather punch/kick CVs for what they are doing to Yuvi and Kunj. And I'll try to