Twinj 3shot: Controlling Desires part 3b page 13 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Zawra

OMG ian m offically dead now..

You just nailed it in every bit of it...

Kunj was sooo on a different level today in jealosy

Hyy jealous kunj was a treat to watch ... he look damn hot while being jealous☺️

Hiii karan kya kar diya tuny ... hosh hy orh gye mery tou aj..

Twinj dance And this kiss hiii

Ab ik or next chap ka wait karna hi ..i just cant wait yar...

Originally posted by: zaara610

Loved jealous kunj..😉

This update was worth waiting and thanks a lot for making this as Ss..eagerly waiting for your next update..please continue soon..😊

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

It was awesome
i cant wait for next part reading the precap
you are too good and need to update like daily 😳

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Finally uh updated.

Loved it.

Plz continue soon this time.

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Tht ws super awesome.. 👏

Loved the way ur story flowed away...

And the Aptly named title of ur story ...made it more and more intriguing...

Loved evry bit abt it...

Hayyeee Jealous Kunj...😳 U knw Sidhant wud have nailed it with his acting completely...if CV's had shown Jealous Kunj...

And yea.. In my stories also.. Coincidently.. I too tend to name Twinkle's friend as ' Karan ',😆 Such a universal name.

But Srsly controlling Desires to read more after reading the preacp..☺️

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

I come back and get the shock of my life seeing an update from you. Yes it was shocking! But i loved it.

What an update my crazy twin! You are wonderful. I don't know if i am more happy that this has now become a ss or sad that the ending is still far.

This update was nothing less than amazing

Hayye jealous kunj i love it when guy's get jealous.

And karan and twinkle are so cute. This makes me doubt if all best friends are just as crazy. Loved karan's dialogues.

And the precap has gotten me seriously excited.

Do continue soon

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Thanx jerry

Next part I am typing I also want it posted soon

Feel very bad for delaying this one

Aww that's so sweet Thanx jerry

Daily nahi but yes I will try to be more frequent.

The past week has been hectic the free time I get I typed it out hence missing in forum too

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Hi finally my twin sis read it

I know it was shocking but will try my best k zara delay na ho ab

Cheer up u will get to read all about the slow burn twinj go through

Agree I wanted to make karan twinkle atleast half as crazy as us lol

I was afraid ppl might hate karan's character glad u liked it.

I will ragini

Working on next update only.help me out should I continue karan's character or not???