Twinj 3shot: Controlling Desires part 3b page 13

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Oh the update was captivating

I dont know if i am glad its an SS because it means more or upset its not a 3shot because I wanna know who falls first

But whatever it maybe I love it and I love jealous Kunj

cant wait for the next

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RUBAB

@Rubab_Naqvi

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

OMG ian m offically dead now..

You just nailed it in every bit of it...

Kunj was sooo on a different level today in jealosy

Hyy jealous kunj was a treat to watch ... he look damn hot while being jealous☺️

Hiii karan kya kar diya tuny ... hosh hy orh gye mery tou aj..

Twinj dance And this kiss hiii

Ab ik or next chap ka wait karna hi ..i just cant wait yar...

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zaara610

@zaara610

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Loved jealous kunj..😉

This update was worth waiting and thanks a lot for making this as Ss..eagerly waiting for your next update..please continue soon..😊

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#94

It was awesome
i cant wait for next part reading the precap
you are too good and need to update like daily 😳

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Finally uh updated.

Loved it.

Plz continue soon this time.

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Tht ws super awesome.. 👏

Loved the way ur story flowed away...

And the Aptly named title of ur story ...made it more and more intriguing...

Loved evry bit abt it...

Hayyeee Jealous Kunj...😳 U knw Sidhant wud have nailed it with his acting completely...if CV's had shown Jealous Kunj...

And yea.. In my stories also.. Coincidently.. I too tend to name Twinkle's friend as ' Karan ',😆 Such a universal name.

But Srsly controlling Desires to read more after reading the preacp..☺️

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

I come back and get the shock of my life seeing an update from you. Yes it was shocking! But i loved it.

What an update my crazy twin! You are wonderful. I don't know if i am more happy that this has now become a ss or sad that the ending is still far.

This update was nothing less than amazing

Hayye jealous kunj i love it when guy's get jealous.

And karan and twinkle are so cute. This makes me doubt if all best friends are just as crazy. Loved karan's dialogues.

And the precap has gotten me seriously excited.

Do continue soon

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Iansomer1

@Iansomer1

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
love the fact you are extending this tale, awesome update!

Thanx for encouragement

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Iansomer1

@Iansomer1

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: hailly
Amazing update. Loved it.
Continue soon please.

Thankyou 😃

I will

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Iansomer1

@Iansomer1

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Oh the update was captivating
I dont know if i am glad its an SS because it means more or upset its not a 3shot because I wanna know who falls first
But whatever it maybe I love it and I love jealous Kunj
cant wait for the next

Aww don't worry will update soon then u can know who falls first.

Thanx so glad u liked it