Twinj 3shot: Controlling Desires part 3b page 13 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Aww Zawra plz don't die yet read ending first

I love hero being jealous and sid would take such scenes to another level

Is baar I wont keep u waiting

Thankyou dear

hyy ian plzz continue soon..i want cvs to read this...as the alreasy taken the cockroach idea frm ragini's os..

loved it dear

Totally support the idea of making this a SS. Loved the way Kunj had his eyes on Twinkle the whole time in the party. A big Thank You to Karan for making Kunj even more jealous so that both Twinkle and Kunj can realise what they are feeling for each other. Can't wait to see what happens next !

Iannn... yeh kya likha hai boss.. I finally made time to read it after hearing of it and am kicking my self for not having seen ur story yet..

Khatarnak is the word that comes to mind .. Right from the beginning to the angry jealous kunj. Holding her close n dancing . The tension is maintained thru ur story and Im blushing at the visual of the end of the evening even befor u have penned it, its that good...

pm me plse if u r sending it.

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Part Ian

Glad your extending the story its way better than summing everything up in the last part

Jealous Kunj was a treat to read about ☺️

Karan and Twinkle bonding was nice his comments on Twinj were awesome you should defo keep his character as long as he is positive

Cont Soon

Originally posted by: priyanvs

loved it dear

wow kunj is jealous

eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Totally support the idea of making this a SS. Loved the way Kunj had his eyes on Twinkle the whole time in the party. A big Thank You to Karan for making Kunj even more jealous so that both Twinkle and Kunj can realise what they are feeling for each other. Can't wait to see what happens next !

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

Iannn... yeh kya likha hai boss.. I finally made time to read it after hearing of it and am kicking my self for not having seen ur story yet..

Khatarnak is the word that comes to mind .. Right from the beginning to the angry jealous kunj. Holding her close n dancing . The tension is maintained thru ur story and Im blushing at the visual of the end of the evening even befor u have penned it, its that good...

pm me plse if u r sending it.

Lol u r talented no doubt. When I get time at a stretch I will check ur index .. Waiting for your next update.

Please update 😭
You promised