Twinj TS: I Want You With Me, Part 2 updated on page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone.
Maybe next week my exams will start so thought i ll update a little bit, rest i ll update may be tomorrow or later.
Plz suggest some title for this story.

Surjit said "kunj, twinkle ko yeh ghar chodna hoga"
kunj pleaded "bas ek last bar ise maf kardo tau ji plz. Bas ek last bar agar next time kuch hua toh main khud ise punishment dunga" twinkle stared at him shocked.
Surjit replied "bas last time"
kunj nodded and twinkle left the place .
Kunj came in his room, and heard her voice. 'tumhe bhi lagta hai ki main galat hu?'
He was fed up of all these things somewhere he knew twinkle was right but he cant do anything. He need to stop her because these people are not at all good.
He shouted faking anger 'bas twinkle. Ab agar tune or kuch bhi galat kia toh i swear main khud tujhe is ghar se bhej dunga' he left after completing.
Twinkle was in tears her husband didnt trusted him, her mother dont trust. Why the hell is she alive? She will not live in this house.
If every single person is ashamed of her than why is she troubling them by living here.
Kunj in bathroom 'sorry twinkle bht rude tha main. Par main nahi chahti ki tu in logo se compete kare. Tujhe in jaisa banne ki zarurat nahi'
after full 30 mins he came out to find whole room dark, he called her out. Twinkle. Twinkle.
He switched on the lights and found noone in the room he was about to go check the balcony but his gaze fell on a paper on bed. He opened it and read.

Main ab yaha rehkar tumhari problems nahi badana chahti. I guess mera aap sabki life se chale jana hi best hai. Plz ab care karne ka natak mat kar sab ke sab, i know puri family mein kisi ko meri parvah nahi. So i am leaving from your lives.
From
Twinkle Kunj Sarna
(for the first and last time is nam ko likh rahi hu)
kunj was sweating reading the letter. It was 9:30 in night and twinkle left the house at this odd time.
Kunj dialled leela's number. Maybe she went there.
After few rings leela picked up the call and spoke in sleepy voice 'ha kunj. Sab thik hai na beta'
kunj asked worried 'maa twinkle vaha ayi hai?'
leela shocked 'yaha ayi hai matlab? Vo vaha nahi hai kya?
Kunj narrated her the whole scenerio. Leela got tears in her eyes'vo yaha nahi aegi, uske hisab se vo meri kuch nahi hai. Plz kunj meri bachi ko dhund, vo koi galat kadam na utha baithe.
Kunj replied 'maa main use kuch nahi hone dunga. Aap bas yeh batao uska koi favourite place jaha vo jati ho?
Leela thought for a second before replying 'ha. Vo Gurudware jati hai jab bhi gussa ya naraz hoti hai'
kunj 'aap fikar mat karo maa.. Main apko update karta rahunga'
leea said ok and the cut the call.
Kunj opened the main door ignited his bike and went to Gurudwara Harmandar Sahib.
Gurudwara is a big place full crowded. Kunj reached there saw people chatting taking selfies but his gaze was finding that bubly girl his syapa queen.
He went inside and didnt found her, than he searched her near that lake, his tension was growing more and more. He was about to leave the place when he saw a fragile form sleeping in a corner with support of wall. She was sleeping like a baby, face pale with crying. He guessed she didnt ate anything since morning because of last night.
He went to her soon anger took over him. 'had hai teri twinkle' he shouted to wake her up.
Twinkle got scared with sudden voice, she got up rubbing her eyes soon anger taking over as she realized everything.
Twinkle asked rudely 'tu yaha kya kar raha hai?'
kunj replied in same tone ' tu yaha kya kar rahi hai? Akal nam ki chiz nahi hai kya tujhmein. Kya zarurat thi itni rat ko aise ane ki? Kabhi toh kisi ke bare mein socha kar. He than held her by arms but she winced in pain, he left her and melted. Kya hua hai twinkle tujhe? Tu thik toh hai na. Kuch hua hai kya?
Twinkle didnt wanted to melt this time so she retorted back 'kiske bare mien sochti kunj. Tere bare mein, jisko apni biwi pe trust nahi jo khud mujhe ghar se bhejna chahta hai? Ya maa ke liye jo mujhe ek nazar dekhti tak nahi. Nahi ana mujhe kunj tum dono ke pas. Manti hu galtia ki hai, par tumhe hamesha meri galtia ku dikhti hai,, kabhi samajhne ki koshish ki, ki twinkle ne choti dress pehni toh ku pehni, kya vo drink maine khud ne pi thi ya kisi ne spike ki thi. Nahi aap dono ko dikhta hai ki twinkle ne sharminda kia. Are kabhi toh samjho, sabke samne mujhe support karte ho kabhi us room ki char diwari mein bhi kia karo, kabhi socha ki yuvi ko lekar main thik bhi ho sakti hu. Nahi kunj tune or maa ne mujhe bht hurt kia, main chahkar bhi tum dono se nafrat nahi kar paungi. Par ab tumhare pas bhi nahi rahungi.
Or mujhe kya hu, main thik hu ya nahi? Ab in baton ka tum dono se koi matlab nahi. Ek mere Baba Ji hai jo mujhe accept karte hai or meri galtia bhi maaf karte hai. Ja kunj plz'

Thats it for now.
I dimt want to stop here par mere is mobile mein limit hi itni hai. And ya main chahti hu ki twinkle ab stand le kuki har galti ki mafi hoti hai.
Bye. Tale care.


Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Really amazing!!!
I wish this happens yaar...thank you so much for this.
The precautions really hurt me but your story made me happy again
And pls yaar update soon, I can't wait for you to continue this.
Update soon okay
Oh and thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it!
Your too good. Please continue soon
I hope aisa kuch sach mei ho and kunj gets paranoid to find her...
I cant wait to read the rest of it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is amazing excited to know what will happen next.
It would be a nice track for the show.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing update
i wish twinkle does think in tv serial
plzzz do continue soon
tfs
and all the best 4 ur upcoming exams😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update...really like twinkles POV i hope something similar to this happens...Kunj should realise what he did was wrong...but lets wait for the whole scene tomorrow...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant!!!!
Want somethin' like this tomorrow
Kunj shud regret even i wud luv 2 see him running behind her and asking apologies.plzz cont. Soon
All the very best 4 ur examzzz👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii guys.
So this is the last part before leaving because my exams are starting so will update this and other os after 3rd January. Plz do keep sending pms i will read them.😊
Hope you guys will like it.
Thanku so much for your comments. Your comments are so genuine, thanku.😳
Thanku ragini for the title. Big huggie🤗
And ya if anyone want pm than plz send me request.😛
Enjoy reading.

Part 2

Or mujhe kya hua, main thik hu ya nahi? Ab in baton ka tum dono se koi matlab nahi. Ek mere Baba Ji hai jo mujhe accept karte hai or meri galtia bhi maaf karte hai. Ja kunj plz'
Kunj pleaded " plz twinkle ghar chal na. Plz"
Twinkle said sternly "no kunj. Ab or nahi, main bhi insan hu mujhe bhi dard hota hai. Or main yeh sab isliye nahi keh rahi kyuki main ek modern ladki hu toh main bado ki bat nahi manungi. No kunj. I am a modern girl, agar mujhe tum sabse pyar mile na toh main tum sabki dant bhi seh sakti hu. Kyuki obviously jab koi pyar karne ka haq rakhta hai toh dantne ka bhi rakhta hai. Par sorf dantne ka or bezti karne ka haq kisi ko nahi hai. Atleast maine yeh haq kisi ko nahi dia"
Kunj never saw this side of twinkle, he never tried to k ow what she feels. But today he want to hear what's in her mind and heart. "I am sorry twinkle"
Twinkle replied irritated "nahi jana mujhe ghar kunj."
Kunj replied "maine toh sirf sorry bola meri galtio ke liye, maine kab kaha ki ghar chal."
Twinkle was confused "chal mujhe ek bat bata tere sorry bol dene se vo sab batein thik ho jaengi? Kya tu yuvi ko chodke mujhpe trust karega? Yuvi chod, kunj tu mujhpe choti baton ke liye bhi trust nahi karta. Main aise bande ke sath kyu jau?"
Kunj replied "tu toh aise bol rahi hai jaise tu mujhpe pura trust karti hai"
Twinkle replied looking in his eyes (sajna ve) "azma ke dekh lo."
Kunj was lost in her reply. He didn't know what to speak or what not?
Twinkle spoke "par tujhe hai mujhpe trust?"
Kunj spoke "tu bhi azma ke dekh sakti hai twinkle"
Twinkle replied "agar har gaye toh?"
Kunj replied "or agar jeet gaya toh?" Dono ki punishment honi chahiye na"
Twinkle replied "agar tu hara toh tu yaha se ghar jaega or mujhse contact karne ki koshish nh karega or nahi kisi or ko bataega ki main yaha hu"
Kunj replied confidently "done. Or agar main jeeta toh tu mujhse abhi vo sab share karegi jo tere mind mein hai"
Twinkle thought for a second "done"
Kunj said "toh phir bol. Main kaise apne qpko prove karu"
Twinkle thought for few seconds "tujhe pani se dar lagta hai na? Ja vaha holy lake mein jump kar shout mat kario help ke liye. Agar trust karta hai toh wait kario main aungi tujhe bachane"
No doubt kunj trusted her but shis fear was bigger. But he has to prove that he trust, it's a do or die situation for him. But he decided to face him "chal thik hai done"
Twinkle smirked, she knew he will not jump because he is scared of water but his smirl faded as she heard his reply. Her smirk turned into awe but she wanted to make sure if he will go there or not.
Kunj got up followed by twinkle, he went near the lake. Scared as hell, heart beats racing but for a second he forgot everything closed his eyes and extended his foot.
He waited for water to drown him but in return he felt the strong floor and voice of someone's falling in water.

Kunj was about to jump but twinkle held his arm with force,but in the process she herself fell in the lake throwing kunj on floor.
Kunj got up and saw her in water he screamed "twinkle" and without thinking for a second stepped in.
Twinkle felt the water with a thud, she was about to come out when she heard another noise,her name. She was about to say him no, but he jumped inside.
Kunj didnt knkw swimming, he was struggling hard to not drown but was failing miserably until his syapa queen ca.e in the frame.
Twinkle swam to him.
(Note:- i clearly dont remember if itsa allowed to got in lake or not, i googled it but didnt found anything. So if any fact is untrue than don't get angry because i didn't mean to hurt anyone's sentiments. I myself is Punjabi sp can't think of insulting any culture, so this is toh mine own culture)

Twinlle was angry on him, she went to him and grabbed his colors. "Pagal hai, dimag nahi hai? Jab khud ko swimming nahi ati toh kyu kuda anadar" she said shivering due to cold.
Kunj was shocked only this girl can scold him in this situation he was no less he too replied "tujh mein akal nahi? Jab kudna maine tha toh tu kyu kudi?"
Twinkle "haww ek toj tujhe bachaya. Main konsa tujhe sach mein kudne deti, ek trust game tha vo thats it. Vo toh main galti se giri. Par tu kyu kuda"
Kunj replied sincerely "kuki tujhe kisi problem mein akela nahi chod sakta." (Sajna ve)
Both were shivering with cold, people surrounding came for there help and got them out.
One man "putar ji aap thik ho?"
Kunj replied "ji uncle ji. Apka bht bht shukria"
Man "koi ni putar ji. Aap dono bhig gaye ho vaha washroom mein jake Change karlo"
Both nodded.
Twinkle went to her bag and took it. Kunj said "main kya pehnu. Kuch hai hi nahi. Aise hi rehta hu"
Twinkle replied "umm. Main kuch kar sakti hu lekin badle mein tu koi question nahi puchega. Promise kar"
Kunj replied not getting her "promise"
Twonkle opened her bag and took out one black shirt and denim for him and gave it to him "yeh le
Pehen le ise"
Kunj was amazed now he had a smirk on his face "yeh.."
Twinkle cut him off 'promise kia tha tune. Ja change karle"
Kunj couldn't say anything and both went to washroom

Within 5-10 minutes both came out. Twinkle drying her hair and kunj also setting his hair.
Twinkle sat on floor followed by kunj.
Silence took over, both didn't know what to say.
Twinkle had one shawl, she wrapped it on her and extended the other end to kunj. Kunj was also feeling cold so took it. Both were sitting close to each other.
Both were quite waiting for other to speak.
Finally after good 5 minutes twinkle spilled the beans "jab itna trust hai toh dikhata kyu nahi?"
Kunj didn't know what to say, he himself didn't know he trusted her that much. "Sach kahu toh mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki main tujhpe itna trust karta hu ki apni jan khatre mein dal dunga"
Twinkle stared at him and spoke after a pause "pata hai kunj har ladki ka sapna hota hai ki uski life mein ek prince charming aye use pyar kare uski care kare orr vo dono happily rahe. Mera bhi yeh sapna tha, main yuvi se bht pyar karti thi matlab bht zada. Mere hisab se main kuch galat nahi kar rahi thi. Kyuki maine aaj tak usko kiss tak nahi karne dia, koi galat kam nahi kia. Or time aane pe maa ko batana chahti thi, par mere us pyar ne mujhe dhoka dia. Tut gayi thi main us din lekin apni maa ke liye tujhse shadi karne ke liye tyar hui.
Kunj maa ko khud bataya maine sab kuch phir bhi maa ko laga ki maine unhe dhoka dia. Maine toh sirf pyar kia tha kunj ab meri kya galti ki mere us pyar ne hi mujhe dhoka dia mere pyar ka mazak banaya.
Pata hai kunj jab us din teri date pe main ayi thi na toh teri date dekhkar mujhe first time laga ki kabhi yuvi ne vaise kuch kyu nahi kia. Vo time chahe fake tha lekin special tha mere liye.
Phir tujhse shadi hui or sath sath maa ko pata laga. Mana galti ki maine unka bharosa toda par isla matlab yeh nahi ki vo mujhe mara hua manle. Kunj main janti hu maine ajtak koi aisa kam nahi kia jisse prove hota ho ki maine kuch galat kia. Masti bht ki par apni limits mein rehkar. Maa ne mujhpe bharosa kyu nahi kia, ki unki twinkle kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakti. Kyu?
Phir tu aya aya life mein, har point pe sath dia sabke samne. Starting mein nahi chahti thi yeh shadi lekin phir dil se is shadi ko chance dene ki koshish ki. Lekin vo anita aunty ne ek pr syapa khada kar dia. Yuvi ne pagalpan ka natak kia.
Kunj bht salon se si hu uske sath uski rag rag se vakif hu, samajhtj hu ki yeh sirf natak hai. Lekin tu manta hi nahi.
Manti hu kunj tujhse galti hui us din, lekin agar tu us din usse na ladta toh vo mera rape karta kunj. Samjhta hai is bat ko.
Kunj achai or bewakufi mein fark hota hai, tu itna acha hai ki uske natak ko sach man raha hai. Tujhe apni biwi ki bat nahi sunni, yeh teri bewakufi hai. Obviously vo mujhse bht shatir hai itni jaldi expose nahi hoga lekin try toh karna padega na.
Kunj life time maine sath rehna hai(dont know why but kunj loved this line) usne nahi. Agar hum use expose nahi karenge toh vo mujhe hurt karega, tujhe hurt karega. Nahi dekh sakti main un maa bete ko tera fayda uthate hue. Nahi dekh sakti yar. Kyu nahi samjhta tu.
Jaise tujhe bura lagta hai koi mujhpe finger uthaye toh mujhe bhi lagta hai. Nahi pasand vo anita aunty tujhe naukar ki tarah treat kare.
Pata nahi kyu par nahi dekh sakti tujhe aise. Vo log tujhe dhang se treat nahi karte or tu phir bhi kuch nahi bolta."
Kunj spoke when he felt the need "bht ajeeb rishta hai hamara twinkle, main bhi nahi dekh sakta ki vo tujhe hurt kare. Vo sab tujhe galat samjhte hai, maine tujhe isliye nahi danta ki main tujhpe trust nahi karta balki isliye danta kyuki main nahi chahta ki tu unki nazro mein aye or vo tujhse badle le. Or teri jaan khatre mein dale. Biwi hai tu meri twinkle, kabhi tujhe hurt nahi karunga par phir na jante hue bht hurt kar dia. Par mera point sirf itna hai ki tere yeh sab karne se yuvi ka sach bahar nahi aa raha lekin gharvalo ke liye problems bad rahi hai. Makn nahi chahta ki tu usko expose marte karte khud sabki nazro mein gir jaye. Tu bhi toh samajh. Hamari ladaia apni jagah hai, maine kisi ko right nahi dia ki koi teri insult kare. Baki ha meri galti hai mujhe tera point of view bhi samjhna chahiye tha after all tu apna sab kuch chod ke is naye ghar naye logo ke beetch ayi. Mujhe maf karde." Twinkle said "its ok"
Twinkle and kunj stared in eachother's eyes.

There moment was disturbed by a voice.
Uncle came a d spoke "chalo beta ji. Visiting time khatam. Ghar jao"
Both came out of there moment and got up.
Twinkle spoke "kunj tu ghar ja. Mujhe nahi ana"
Kunj replied "mera itna samjhane ke bad bhi nahi"
Twinkle said "tu samajhta kyu nahi, mujhe break chahiye. Main nahi ana chahti vaha. Main nahi dekh paungi apni shadi ko aise barbad hote."
Kunj replied "bol. Kya chahti hai yuvi ko expose karne ke liye?"
Twinkle replied moving "rehne de kunj. Tu ghar ja."
Kunj too walked with her " nahi ab toh tu bol. Agar is plan se kisi ko koi nuksan nahi hoga toh main tere sath hu"
Twinkle replied "kisi ko koi nuksan nahi hai. Bas tujhe yuvi ke samne mere sath romance karna hai. Kal dekha na kaise usne gusse mein bed jala dia."
Kunj didn't know what to say but he need to support her "done. Ab toh ghar chal"
Twinkle said "abhi man nahi hai kunj vaha jane ka"
Kunj held her arm and stopped her but she again winced in pain "aah"
Kunj got scared "tujhe kya hua hai twinkle?"
Twinkle said "pehle promise karo dantoge nahi"
Kunj was now getting agry "nahi karunga bol"
Twinkle replied "vo meri ek car se takkar ho gayi thi toh main gir gayi or thodi si shoulder or arm pe lag gayi chot"
Kunj was about to blast on her but twinkle spoke "tune promise kia tha"
Kunj calmed himself down "acha bata sachi sachi kaha lagi"
Twinkle like a baby told him showing her arms and shoulder and knees "yaha pe lagi, yaha bhi and thodi si yaha bhi"
Kunj too asked in a baby's voice 'dard ho raha hai?"
Twinkle replied "thoda sa." Suddenly she got emotional and hugged him, "mera tere siva koi nahi hai kunj. Please mujhe dant lia kar lekin aise ghar bhejne ki bat mat kia kar. Plz kunj, yeh duniya bht gandi hai tu sirf acha mere liye ban gande logo ke liye nahi"
Kunj kept his arm on her waist and hugged her "nahi bolunga. Promise. And twinkle mere siva is duniya mein teri maa hai tere mamu hai, bubbly hai, or bebe bhi hai"
Twinkle didn't say anything just kept her head on his chest and got the warmth from his body. Nothing can't be more awesome than being in his arms in this cold chilly wind.
Kunj said "kuch khana haj?"
Twinkle just nodded her head in yes.
They than went to a dhaba and filled there tummies. Kunj messaged leela that twinkle is safe with him.

At 2 in midnight finally twinkle agreed to return home.
They reached home on his bike, kunj opened the door luckily noone was awake.
They headed to there room and found bebe inside.
Twinj got shocked, now they ll have to face her anger
Bebe asked "kaha gaye the tum dono?"
Kunj replied "vo bebe hamara ice cream khane ka man kar gaya tha toh bas chale gaye the"
Twinkle said 'ha bebe"
Bebe asked "bag leke?"
TWINJ disnt know what to say.
Bebe asked kunj to close the door and came near twinkle, she held her hands and made her sit on bed.
Bebe said showing her the letter "tujhe lagta hai ki tu hamari life mein problem hai? Tujhe lagta hai ki hume teri parvah nahi? Putar agar parvah na hoti toh main khana leke tere kamre mein na ati. Mujhe pata tha ki tune kuch nahi kHaya isliye khana lai thi, lekin yaha ayi toh mujhe toh kuch or hi dekhne ko mila."
Twinkle cried "mujhe maaf kardo bebe. Mujhe laga ki aap mein se koi mujhpe bharosa nahi karta. Vo dress maine yuvi ka sach bahar lane ke liye pehni thi, or maine sharab nahi pee thi bebe. Main kabhi koi aisa kam nahi karungi jisse ap sab sharminda ho, lekin meri bhi majburi thi bebe"
Bebe replied "kya maine tujhe koi saza di? Kya maine tujhe thoda sa bhi danta? Nahi na. Kyuki main janti hu ki tu aisi vaise ladki nahi hai. Bharosa hai putar tujhpe. "
Twinkle hugged her and said "thanku bebe."

Hush. Thats it for now.
Hope you guys like this update.
Plz leave back your likes and comments.
Bye.
Take care.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow loved it dear
i just wished if all these happend tv series it will be just
awesome update
all the best for ur exams
and do pm me
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Awesome update made me emotional in the end.
Very sweet TwiNJ bonding and cute Bebe scene.
All the best with ur exams.

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