TWINJ FF : THE HEART BRINGS YOU BACK, Imp Note- pg 104

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Superb update rags😊

Ailla kunj apne aap ko aaine me taad rha 😉

Don't worry kunj Teri haseena bole to Teri siyapa queen jaldi maan jayegi

Silver jacket😳

Der first date 😉...haye...wo to pakka kunj ko behra kr degi😉

Haaye restaurant me sari ladkiya use bhaav de ri thi🤣

Twinkle kinni j ho ri thi...ThankGod ki wo ladki chali gyi wrna twinkle to murder Hi kr deti uska🤣🤣

J twinkle ne juice fek dia uspe🤣

Finally twinkle n yuvi in party...twinkle kinni uncomfortable thi...us dress me but yuvi😡
Haaye wo kunj ka wait krri thi...kunj notices dat she is not comfortable...n his blinking eyes assured her n immediately she was feeling comfortable beautifully written👏

D way kunj notices dat her zip is opening n her dress was loosing balance d way he closes her zip...n d way she looked at him feeling to hug him n to cry in his embrace was awwweee...❤️

Twinkle ko kuch log ghur re the n yuvi was like😡kunj ne but drink girva ke kya mast kaam kia...duffer yuvi ko dress ki padi thi😈

Finally kunj nisha ko drop krra...d way he wrapped his jacket around her was aweee

U wrote each n every scenes so beautifully u connected me wid der emotions through d power of yr writing...😊

Do update soon n do pm me😊

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Duumps

@Duumps

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Loved it. You made my day with this update.

This is awesome Ragini.

The understanding between TwiNJ is killing.

Aww So sweet Kunj rescued Twinkle twice in one night.

Can't wait for what happens next.

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Amazing Part

Loved Twinj scene you wrote flashback and present both nicely

Hope they reunite soon

Cont Soon

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: kusharberry
wow loved it very much
awesome update dear
kunj really loves twinkle cares about her uv matlabi hai he just cares about the costly dress not twinkles comfort
i hope twinj reunite soon and what is the reason behind their seperation may be this uv have did something which causes misunderstanding b/w them
plzzz do continue soon😃

Aww thank u so much lina... Tum logo no dhamki de kar itni jaldi update likwaya mere se... 😆😆

Abhi i havent thought much on why they go separated and what or rather who casused it...

Time aane pe sab pata chal jayega🤗

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: itznimi003
Superb update rags😊

Ailla kunj apne aap ko aaine me taad rha 😉

Don't worry kunj Teri haseena bole to Teri siyapa queen jaldi maan jayegi

Silver jacket😳

Der first date 😉...haye...wo to pakka kunj ko behra kr degi😉

Haaye restaurant me sari ladkiya use bhaav de ri thi🤣

Twinkle kinni j ho ri thi...ThankGod ki wo ladki chali gyi wrna twinkle to murder Hi kr deti uska🤣🤣

J twinkle ne juice fek dia uspe🤣

Finally twinkle n yuvi in party...twinkle kinni uncomfortable thi...us dress me but yuvi😡
Haaye wo kunj ka wait krri thi...kunj notices dat she is not comfortable...n his blinking eyes assured her n immediately she was feeling comfortable beautifully written👏

D way kunj notices dat her zip is opening n her dress was loosing balance d way he closes her zip...n d way she looked at him feeling to hug him n to cry in his embrace was awwweee...❤️

Twinkle ko kuch log ghur re the n yuvi was like😡kunj ne but drink girva ke kya mast kaam kia...duffer yuvi ko dress ki padi thi😈

Finally kunj nisha ko drop krra...d way he wrapped his jacket around her was aweee

U wrote each n every scenes so beautifully u connected me wid der emotions through d power of yr writing...😊

Do update soon n do pm me😊

Awww thank u so much nimi🤗

I'm really happy that you loved it so much. I can't tell you how overwhelmed i am by all this love.

Will try and update soon

And i'll pm u without fail.. Don't worry about it..😳

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: Duumps
Loved it. You made my day with this update.
This is awesome Ragini.
The understanding between TwiNJ is killing.
Aww So sweet Kunj rescued Twinkle twice in one night.
Can't wait for what happens next.

Thank u so much nats🤗

I'm grateful to u guys for all this love and appreciation...

Will defintely try and update soon..

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Amazing Part
Loved Twinj scene you wrote flashback and present both nicely
Hope they reunite soon
Cont Soon

Thank u so much anam🤗

This is a huge compliment since its coming from such an amazing writer...

I'll try and update soon...

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

superb update

you just killed me i cant really wait for car scene n all 😔

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Res

Unres...

bole to mja a gya..uff Kunj.. He is drooling himself and I m happily imaging that scene.. Dono he drooling drooling khel rhe hai.😉. Loved the flashback and their first date.. O god twinkle ne vaha pe bhi siyapa kar diya😆😆😆..par I loved her jealous mode...If i were their did the same thing😆😆..

Loved everything... Yar toda Bda update nai milega..mann nai Bharta.. Just want to read more n more for Kunj

Thank u yar for updating n pm.love u.

Edited by Aalina. - 9 years ago