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Nyc part.
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Wonderful update dear⭐️
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Well written update 👏 👏
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Chp 5 of 20

Shekhar walked towards Ragini and cupped her face. 'I m sorry gurya, I neglected you my whole life but I swear that I have loved you more than anyone else in this world, you're no less than Swara in anything, you're also my daughter just like her, your pain is on one side and your talent on the other side, but nothing can change the fact that you will be my child no matter what, please forgive your stupid father, please forgive that father who never hugged you and made you feel different, please beta, I am sorry,' he apologized.


'No baba, please don't say this, nothing can change this fact as well that even after your neglection I never hated you and I have already forgiven you, but baba, you forgive me that I m born like this and have become a burden on you, I can never be independent and see this world,' she replied and tears fell from her eyes and he wiped her tears. 'No laado, please don't you dare say this, I will give you your eyes by the best doctor, and if you don't get your eyes, I will give you mine,' he said.

'No baba, I don't want to give you pain, you're talking to me, that's enough,' she said and hugged him while shedding tears of happiness.

Jeevan yeh suro se sajati
Rishtey yeh suro se banati
Bajti hai to pyar ki dhun
Ek dhup chanchal hai
Ek chandani
Phir bhi hai ek duje ke liye bani
Dilo mein hai pyar bhara
Suro se saji hai swara
Rago se rachi hai ragini
Swaragini swaragini
Swaragini swaragini
Swaragini swaragini.

They broke the hug and Swara came to Ragini and hugged her, she hugged her back. 'Thank you Swara, you are the best.'


'It was about my sweet sister, so I had to do all this and if I won't do then who will do?' Swara replied. 'I am lucky to get a sister like you,' Ragini said. 'Me too,' Swara replied. Sharmistha too hugged them, they had dinner and went to sleep. Some days passed and the day came for their singing competition. Ragini woke up Swara. 'Di please, I want to sleep some more,' she said and was smiling in her sleep. 'But singing competition,' Ragini said. She woke up accepting her defeat. 'Di what yar? I was dreaming about him,' she pouted.








'Who is him Swara?' Ragini asked. 'Sanskaar, he also can't see just like you, but love happens, and I m in love with him, and he thinks that our family won't accept him,' Swara told her sadly. 'You should talk to Maa and Baba about it, but after this competition is over,' Ragini suggested. 'Di, you're so nice,' she replied and hugged her. 'OK, now we should get ready,' she said and Swara helped her with her clothes and makeover and then she got ready and did breakfast, took blessings of Shekhar and Sharmishtha and went for Singing competition.

The first turn was of Ragini. She went on stage with the help of Avni, their singing teacher. She played her sitaar and started singing.


Haan aa o...

Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon (x2)

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye
(Ragini recalled all the moments with Laksh and smiled)
Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

Aa o... aa...

Kya khoob Rab ne kiya
Bin maange itna diya
Warna hai milta kahaan
Hum kaafiron ko Khuda (x2)

(She recalled Laksh saying that if she would've seen how beautiful she is, then she would've got a crush on herself)

Hasratein ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye

O...
aa... o...

Everyone clapped for her and she bowed down and went from the stage. Next was Mukti's turn who collided with her. 'Blind girl, can't you see I m here? Idiot,' she scolded her. 'I don't have my eyes but you have, and you know which way to go, so move.'

Ragini said and was about to go but Mukti stopped her. 'Don't think that you will win,' she said. 'We'll see, and if you're first or Aliya is first, and if any one from Swara and me is second then you will give us your trophy to us, and if any one of us is first, we will do the same, deal?' Ragini said forwarding her hand. 'Deal,' Mukti said joining hand with her and went on stage. She performed well and then came Swara's turn. She went with her guitar on the stage.

Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...
(Tears fell from Swara's eyes recalling Sanskar)

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein
(Swara closes her eyes and imagines him coming to her and kissing her forehead)

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main (x2)
(She opened her eyes and realized it was her imagination)
Yaara...

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main (x2)
(She got up and went from the stage wiping her tears)

After Aliya's performance, results were announced. 'First position goes to Aliya Saxena,' announced the judge and Aliya came on stage and took her trophy and shook hands with the judge. 'Second position goes to Ragini Gadodia,' announced the judge and she went on stage with the help of Avni and she thanked the judge. 'I would like to say that only I know how I do all this, its very tough for me, credit goes to Swara, ma and Baba,' she said and went down the stage. Third position went to Swara and she went onstage. 'So Miss Swara Gadodia, would you like to say something?' he asked and she nodded. 'Love isn't just a word but binding of two hearts, and if you get your true love, imprison that person in your heart and never let him go,' she said and was going but Aliya asked her to stop. She went onstage and gave her trophy to her. 'Congratulations, according to the deal, I m supposed to do this only,' she said and went.


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Superb awesome update dear
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Awesome update!!
Loved it.
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ragini's father accepting her n apologizing was emotional.ragini swara n their father scene was very touchy.family hug was nice.shocking that sanskar is also blind.i'm waiting 4 sanskar's entry.loved ragini facing mukti boldly.nice dialogues.swara's dialogues about love were too good.alia giving d trophy was nice.would like to see swara ragini alia friendship scenes.also waiting 4 raglak scenes
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Awesome update...
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Awesome part.
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Chp 5 of 20

Swara and Ragini came running inside the house happily and hugged Sharmishtha. 'Mom, we won, today once again di proved that she's no less than anyone else in this world,' Swara said prasing Ragini. 'Aray wah, I knew my shona and Ragini will win, come give me a hug,' Sharmishtha said and the duo hugged her. 'Is baba at home?' Swara asked. 'No beta he's at his shop, you both go take rest, I will make something for you,' she said and went and Swara too went taking Ragini from there along with her to their room. They sat together.

'Did Mukti or Aaliya give you their trophy?' Ragini asked. 'Yes, its here, feel it,' Swara said and she felt by her hands and smiled. 'Swara, I think we should end our stupid enmity with them and become friends,' Ragini said. 'Di, the ones who insult you can never become friends with me, I love you the most, what did Mukti say? Take care of your blind sister? Idiot, I won't ever befriend her,' Swara said and pouted. 'OK OK now don't blow your face,' Ragini said laughingly. 'You can't see then how you knew?' Swara asked. 'I can feel you idiot, now let's change our clothes.'

Aalia was walking to her home when she stopped when a bike stopped by her side. She turned to see who's it and smiled seeing the guy on the bike. 'Dhruv, you?' she said and hugged him. 'Yes, actually I saw you going alone so I thought to take you with me,' he said and she sat behind him. He was about to ride off from there but stopped hearing a voice. It called Aaliya's name. She turned and saw another guy running to her. 'Sameer?' she said. 'You said we're going to walk back home together.'

'Next time soon,' she said and they rode off from there. 'Aalia,' Dhruv said on the way and she hmmed. 'We both are members of fab5 and so we all never keep secrets from each other, right?' he asked. 'Yes,' she said. 'So tell what's going on between you and Sameer? You both are getting so attached day by day,' he said. 'Dhruv when the hell did we vow not to make any other friends beside fab5?' she asked. 'You felt bad? Sorry,' he said and rest of the ride was quiet as they didn't talk. They reached Aalia's house and stepped down.

'Listen Aalia?' he called out and she turned with a questioning look on her face. 'Why did you give your trophy to Swara?' he asked. 'Uffo, we had a bet in between. Poor Ragini is blind but so talented, I was happy to see her sing, I feel happy by helping her. The sisters are so sweet, Mukti is so rude to them, anyways bye, everyone might be waiting for me,' she said and went bidding him bye. He rode off from there. Sanskaar comes at Swara's house with his mother Sujata.

Swara gets happy seeing him and takes him to her room. 'Sankiii, I am so so happy that you came,' she said and hugged him. He hugged her back.
'I m also happy but not so much as I have a desire to view your beautiful face, I want to make a sketch of you, there's a competition actually, the one who wins gets 2 lacs, in that much money I will get back my eyes,' he told her. 'Really? Happy for you but,' she said, her voice trailed off.

'But what Swara?' he asked. 'How will you make a sketch?' she asked. He held her hand between her palms. 'I fully trust you and I know you can help me Swara, I want to see this world, I want to be independent, you will help me na Swara?' he asked and she kept her hand over his hand. 'Of course Sanskaar, since when did started being formal to me? We both love each other and you can ask anything from me,' she said and hugged him, he hugged her back. 'Thanks Swara, lucky to have you in my life, I love you Swara, I love you,' he said in the hug.

'I love you too my mastermind Sankiii,' she said breaking the hug and pulled his cheeks kissing them. Aalia entered her house and was welcomed with warm hugs. 'You came? I wanted to tell that Sanjana is coming back today, oh, and Harshad and Piyush were waiting for you,' her mother Simar told her and she smiled and went to her brothers' room. 'Bhai, Piyush,' she said and hugged both of them one by one. 'Missed me?' she asked and they pulled her cheeks. 'Whenever you aren't at home, its as if the walls are crying and calling out for you,' Harshad said faking to cry and Aalia laughed.


'Yes Aalia, its as if you have went marrying someone, when you'll marry, we'll also come with you,' Piyush said and she laughed again. 'OK OK you can come, you love me so much, love you too,' she said and hugged both of them again. Later Swara tells Ragini about the competition. 'If it is so then don't you think I should also take part,' Ragini asked excitedly. 'Of course, why not? But how will you..?' Swara was cut in between. 'I can and I will, just take me to Laksh.'
Piyush


Swara took her to her office to make her meet Laksh. As she saw him, they walked to him. 'Ragini di, he's here in front,' she told her and she hugged him tightly. 'Laksh, I have a very good news by which I can get back my eyes, look God made a way for me,' she told him. 'Really? Then my brother Sanskaar should also take part, he also can't see like you,' he said. 'Sanskaar? I know him, he told me, I got to know by him only, we love each other,' Swara told him. 'And you're the same girl he loves? What a coincidence, then I pray to God to give both of you your eyes back,' he smiled.


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago

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