RagLak TS~Kheenchay Mujhe Koi Dorr Teri Ore

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Hi, so introducing my new story and because of this new story, my old stories won't be affected. Note that Ragini is blind in this ff and this is my first ever ff on Raglak..happy reading!
Chapter 1
He was getting ready to go to office. He was really handsome, well built body, a nice hairstyle, chocolate brown eyes in which any girl would love to drown in, cute jawline and trim facial hair, he had a great dressing sense, but something was missing. Smile. That's what his handsome face lacked for. Something was there that was disturbing him. The new girl who came in his office the previous day, he didn't knew why he was attracted towards her so much. She was very beautiful, bright red lips, beautiful eyes, long hair and cute smile.


Laksh Mathur, the helpful guy, attracted towards girls, but not every girl, in fact he hadn't fallen for any girl till now. He was a business tycoon. He worked under his father. He was a very loving and kind man, a sincere friend, a person who lived a humble life, no pride. As he looked at himself in the mirror, he recalled the previous day. He was working on his desk when he heard footsteps of heels that were really slow. Somehow it distracted him. He turned his head to look in the direction. There came a girl with her eyes down, her long hair in front of his shoulder.


She was wearing kurti and leggings. She had a stick in her hand. Laksh stood up from his seat and his feet moved towards her automatically. He watched as she walked forward and kept on walking towards him, Laksh too walked towards her with baby steps and he was lost in her beauty. He didn't realize there was no more gap between them and she collided with him and he held her before she fell. Her eyes still remained somewhere else. She straightened herself and gulped her saliva. 'I am sorry, actually I can't see.'

'Relax, no problem, can I help you?', he asked and she nodded. She forwarded her hand as if asking him to hold her hand and he held her hand, they were too soft and beautiful. 'May I know where you want to go?', he asked while making her walk in the correct direction. 'I want to go in the cabin of boss,' she replied. He started taking her there. 'By the way what's your name?', she asked. 'Laksh Mathur, you can call me lucky in short if you want,' he replied and she smiled. 'And you are?', I asked.


'Ragini Khanna,' she replied. 'You can also call me rags in short if you want,' she continued. 'OK,' Laksh replied with a smile and they reached the boss's cabin. He took her inside. 'Dad, here's a new girl, she can't see, so if any help is needed, you can tell me,' he said and went. 'Laksh, beta come down for pooja,' his mother called out and he rushed downstairs. He kept thinking about her during the pooja and a smile was always plastered on his lips. His mother distributed prasad, she gave one to an elderly woman, Anita Mathur.

Then she gave one to his husband, Naveen Maathur and the last one to Laksh. 'Arey Maa, you also take,' Laksh said and made her eat half of his prasad. He kissed his forehead and smiled at her. Soon his dad and he was ready to go to office. As they were on their way, Laksh saw Ragini walking in the middle of the road. He stopped the car and ran to her. 'Ragini ji,' he called and she turned. 'You're in the middle of the road, you will get hurt, you shouldn't risk your life, come with me,' he said and held her hand.

She came with him willingly, something in her allowed her to trust him, he was the first ever man whom she trusted. She felt a rakhshak in him. He made her sit on the backseat. 'Thanks for helping,' Ragini said. 'Welcome, so did you got the job?', he asked while driving. 'Yes, luckily I did, luckily I got a friend as well, a friend in you,' she replied. Laksh smiled. 'Laksh beta, you are friends with her already?', asked his dad. 'Yes dad,' he replied. 'By looking at you both, I can tell that God has made you both for each other only.'

Ragini blushed so did Laksh. He drove all the way to office and his dad made his way inside the office while Laksh helped Ragini. 'So friends?', he asked. 'Yeah sure,' she replied. 'Who do you live with?', he asked. 'Mom and dad,' she replied. 'How many siblings you have?', he asked. 'One little sister, that's it,' she said smilingly. 'Don't mind but your parents should help you reach office, you would've ended up in an accident,' he told her. Her smile vanished hearing this and now her face had a mature look.

She didn't say anything till they reached inside. 'My parents are way too busy to do that, but thanks to you that you helped me,' she smiled. 'Its ok, no thanks and sorry in friendship, will you mind if I ask how will you work here? I mean all the work is of computer, and you can't see,' he said in a fear that she might feel bad. 'Actually, I can type very well, my caretaker told me how to type, she told me about each and every key, so I can do this much that I will submit all the work, no editing.'

'Wow great, salute to you that you have so much hope that you can do it, but remember I am always there for your help,' he said and she smiled. He guided her to her desk and continued working glancing at her every now and then. She stood up and was going somewhere but collided with the ward boy, the tea and the coffee fell on the floor. Everyone stood up seeing this. 'Can't you watch where you go?', he asked. 'Jee sorry I can't see,' she replied hesitantly. 'If you are blind then this is not the place for you, go be at your home,' he replied rudely and Laksh came and stood before her glared at him.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sahi h boss
Very nice
Continue soon
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I am very happy that you are writing raglak ts.I love ragini though i havent watched swararagini.ragini as a blind girl is so unique.loved how you described raglak's look.loved raglak meeting and how laksh helped her to reach his dad's cabin.loved her helping her to cross the road saving her life.guess his dad has no problem with ragini union though ragini is blind.wonder why ragini's family doesn't care for her.ragini is so smart that though she is blind she can type.sad that ragini got scolding because of her blindness.liked laksh supporting her.perfect pics
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Awesome start !!
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Plz continue soon.
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Congrats on new story dear
Interesting start !!
Loved it.
Raglak scene was penned beautifully and loved the way Laksh helped Ragini.
Lovely pics !!
Thanks for the pm!
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Very nice update keep going
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Chapter 2

Ragini was going somewhere but she collided with the ward boy who was carrying a tray of coffee and tea which fell on the floor. She hesitated whenever she collided with someone. She gulped her saliva and felt a lump in her throat. 'Can't you watch where you go?', he scolded. 'Sorry jee, I can't see,' she apologized. 'No apologies, if you're blind then this isn't the place for you, go stay at your home,' he replied. Laksh came and stood before her giving a sharp glare to him. 'Yes, talk to me, what were you saying? Can you repeat?'


The ward boy got quiet. 'Tell tell, you called her blind, am I right? Look my father is the head of this office. My one complain and you will be out of this office, got it? So if you want to stay, apologize to her,' he said sternly. 'Sorry jee,' the ward boy said plainly. 'Not like this, do it properly, hold your ears and say sorry ma'am,' he ordered sternly. 'Sorry ma'am,' apologized the ward boy. 'Its OK jee, mistake is mine, I collided with you,' she said. The ward boy left from there. 'Don't apologize if its not your mistake.'




'Laksh, dad always says that by apologizing, none becomes small, it was my mistake only, I shouldn't have walked, because of me it happened so I apologized. None knows how frustrated I feel by this darkness by which I m surrounded since birth, sorry you got disturbed because of me,' she continued with tears in her eyes. 'This darkness will surely go one day, a change will come in your life,' he assured. 'Laksh how can you be so sure? If it had to come, it would have come long ago, I would have found a donor,' she said with defeat clearly visible in her voice.


'Just trust on God, OK, you haven't seen how beautiful He has created you else you would've been your own crush, I mean who won't accept you,' he said trying to cheer her up. A smile slowly spread on her lips and she wiped her eyes. 'Thanks,' she said in a soft voice. 'You forgot, no thanks and no sorry in friendship,' he reminded with a smile. A childish giggle escaped her throat. 'OK I m back to work, its my first day,' she said and he guided her towards her desk.


After making her sit and watching her type, he walked back to his desk. Somehow it was heartbreaking for him to see her like this. Though her eyes never met his eyes, but somehow he could sense her pain. Just then, phone rang on Ragini's desk and she reached out to receive it. Before her hand touched the phone, Laksh kept his hand on the phone and their hands connected with each other. Ragini felt a tingle of excitement and butterflies in her stomach. He looked at her face which had a tiny smile. 'Raginiii.' She startled at the sudden voice.

'Laksh, what is this? Why are you calling like this?', she asked faking anger. 'I called you fifteen times, you're just smiling on God knows what,' he replied and her smile dropped. 'Oh sorr...,' her voice trailed off. 'I can't see but I can feel, so I can tell you're angry as I said sorry,' she said softly in a sweet voice. 'I m, but not on your sorry, phone is ringing, please move your hand out of the way, I can't jerk it na, they're so beautiful,' he said and she smiled lifting her hand from his hand.


He received the phone. 'Hallo,' he said. 'Ragini di, I m missing you so very much, please come early na,' said a girl's voice on the other end of the phone. 'Wait, I will give her the phone,' saying this, he kept the phone on her ear and left it as she held it, their hands again connected with each other. 'Hallo,' Ragini said. 'Hallo di, I m missing you so very much, please come early na, won't you come to singing class today?,' said the girl. 'Swara I will come after an hour, there's much work left,' Ragini said.

Swara is the little sister of Ragini who loves her more like a mother than a little sister. That is why her parents never got tensed for Ragini as Swara was always there for her. But inside, they were always worried for her future, the reason for their worry was who will marry a blind girl like Ragini? She was too fragile. 'Uh oh di, salute to you that you're so confident, you sing, you play sitaar without seeing, how cool, if I would've been in your place, my life would've ended the day I was born,' Swara replied praising her.


'Chup kar, kuchh bhi bolti hai, I m used to it, its a long time experience,' Ragini replied with a cute smile which was admired by Laksh secretly. 'You're a talent house di, OK now keeping the phone, but come after one hour ha, I will come to pick you,' she said. 'OK baba I will come, bye.' The call got disconnected and she was keeping the receiver down when Laksh took it from her hand and kept it correctly. 'Laksh,' she spoke knowingly. 'Hmm?', he asked. 'You were listening?', she asked. 'No, actually I stood here so that I could keep the phone correctly,' he said.


She laughed a little. 'Just joking,' she said and sat down getting back to work. Laksh too laughed and got back to work. After one hour, Ragini finally stood up to leave and Laksh approached her. 'Wait Rags, I will drop you,' he said. 'Thanks but my sister is coming to pick me,' she said. 'Ok, then I will drop you outside,' he said and she smilingly forwarded her hand and he held her hand. 'Thank you so much Laksh, you're a pal,' she said. 'No problem, but don't you think you spoke thanks and sorry so many times today?', he asked and she giggled.

'Now if I say sorry so your ears won't accept,' she said and they laughingly went out. They collided with Swara who was coming inside for Ragini. 'Arey di, you came, who's he?', she asked. 'Friend, his name is Laksh,' she said. 'Hi Laksh,' she said forwarding her hand for a handshake and he shook her hand. 'Come di,' she said holding her hand and pulled her along but Ragini didn't leave his hand even though. As they reached the car, Ragini hugged Laksh. He hugged her back. 'Bye Laksh,' she said and sat in the car. They still had hand in hand even though and Swara drove the car and they left each others' hands.




Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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I was waiting for it eagerly since I saw its ishra version on tu 2 days back.loved laksh supporting ragini and making that guy apologize to her.loved ragini saying that by apologizing one doesn't become small.loved laksh consoling and giving confidence to ragini. hand touching scene was romantic. happy to see swara as the loving caring sister.loved their scene. happy to know that ragini is a singer and can play sitar well.hopefully there will be a song sequence on ragini singing
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Nice update.
Loved it.
Thanks for d pm:)

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