Swasan SS - A Game Called Love - Chapter (9 &10 )PG13( Nov 1)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Chapter 8 - was surprisingly mild but then it hints at the storm clouds in the horizon.

Dadi and her plotting, which is a way is good for it appears to slowly clear a path for Laksh and Ragini and for a change there are no initial sparks - of love / like / lust, rather it is irritation. I like this better than they falling in love at first sight - sometimes it makes for a better journey, and since you indicated that they both would be good siblings / friends, it should make it a fun journey as they find themselves and help Swara and Sanskaar.

No comments on Kavita - clever of her to twist her father into proposing an alliance, but I agree with her mother's silent wish and practical assessment - both she and her father need an urgent and strong reality check. Guess the next update would be about Sahil's plans.

So the fires of hell are brimming, but then the taste and glimpse of heaven which the lovers have discovered should help them through.Waiting for the next update.

love,
Nyna

@ Nynu ...🤗

Laksh and Ragini ... yep you are right ,paving way for Laksh and Ragini. Kavita and Sahil are together in this ..plotting planning which would be clear in next chapter .

and last line .. you have put it so beautifully ...😳lets see if it would help them or psuh them more towards hell😉😈

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lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Nynu ...

I so want to update here .. but this double quotes things ... I am finding it damn irritating and since you know .I have more of dialogues... its just pain in neck ..😕 and may patience level is running low.. by the eod ..

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu ...
I so want to update here .. but this double quotes things ... I am finding it damn irritating and since you know .I have more of dialogues... its just pain in neck ..😕 and may patience level is running low.. by the eod ..

Just try what Yuvika suggested, copy and paste the whole thing into notepad (if you are using windows, I am not sure what the equivalent one for Mac would be😕) and then copy the same from the text file. let me try:

"Okay , so this sentence is from the text file"

And it works, my ending double quotation marks stay. The only problem I faced was the alignment, but then if you lots of dialogues then alignment adjustment is easier (it is only in certain space) Do try and let me know

Edited by Nynaeve - 7 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Hello all

Chapter 9 and 10 updated

Love

Lucky

PS; Nynu .. Note pad worked

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Hello all
Chapter 9 and 10 updated

Love
Lucky

PS; Nynu .. Note pad worked

Great, will read and get back. Was missing you and half fearef that you had abandoned us

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Great, will read and get back. Was missing you and half fearef that you had abandoned us

😳

never ever😊🤗

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Brief one, will be back for a detailed note.

So though Sahil and Kavita had a temporary victory, in hindsight it pave the way for their much deserved loss - not yet but soon. For despite all their planning and their gambling, which did yield the first round to them, the subsequent and the finals ones - definitely not theirs.

Laksh, with his brother, Ragini soon to be with her sister, Swara and Sanskaar together - what a lovely battle of love and wits, of insecurity and ill placed vengeance.

So how behind are we of the Wattpad updates. And how is life otherwise. I rarely get to speak to you now that your visits to this site are so diminished

love

Nyna

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Brief one, will be back for a detailed note.

So though Sahil and Kavita had a temporary victory, in hindsight it pave the way for their much deserved loss - not yet but soon. For despite all their planning and their gambling, which did yield the first round to them, the subsequent and the finals ones - definitely not theirs.

Laksh, with his brother, Ragini soon to be with her sister, Swara and Sanskaar together - what a lovely battle of love and wits, of insecurity and ill placed vengeance.

So how behind are we of the Wattpad updates. And how is life otherwise. I rarely get to speak to you now that your visits to this site are so diminished

love
Nyna

@ Nynu🤗

🤗

Things are going get complicated ..further but swasan will have siblings taking side .. I am far behind in IF .3 more parts ahead.That's why I posted two updates at once..and will do so .. again .. to catch up in IF ..

Life otherwise is good .. the usual routine stuff which bores me ..😆😆😆.PS .. I so want to learn something new ... tried one effect ...🤣still long way to go and don't worry nynu .. I am going to dwell here for long ..just getting lazy at times..😕

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Hi ladies...and lucky what a wait but so loved it. ...

Missing this story a lot and then blink a realiased I missed the update notice... :)

Wow so the cat is out if the bad feelings have developed lines have crossed and secrets revealed...yet I feel swasan have a long way to go...I see danger ahead in forms of trust issues which is to die to the lack of a make figure in swara life ...

They have this perfect romance but hardly talk...I see that these barriers ate still the be tested for love is only true when you share...

Sahil and kavi have played a twisted game but what a twist to the game this had come. ..

"A twinkle of light may be magical yet the darkness all around should be question for a spell cannot last forever "

Like this challenge they have become friends shared there passions bit never really had that formal date of getting to know each other...I see swara fears commitment of the hearty and hence talks with her mind rather then yet soul unlike sanskaar whom has removed his barrier to let her in...

Will he really walk away I just wonder ...

I just hope sheker becomes the father she needs and ragani the sister she never had...

Pious updates and we miss u here too...Visit more often lime nyna said :)

Take care

Razia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Before I forget love the last scene were he declared to her that he belongs to her. ...He let her in but I still feel she is not there yet...must say love th basket ball moments sneak there lovely talk were she shared her past...is see she trust him but I just feel there is another twis ahead...

Will we get to see her friend ajay soon too... I remember I'm prior updates that sanskaar can be a devil and wonder what he will.do know when he learns of all her pain...

So hooked and waiting :)

Okay over and out...

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