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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Ladies wow 🤗 dyuti di you pulled a 369 put of the bag after nivi di know I am just hooked..
You have said it well at the end hooked and waiting...

Loved this dark side of dp. .perfect twist and lakhs rocked too...

Caring sabskaar is nice ...so the flames have been set in motion.. .

All the best talia :)


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamreader



Yeah Nivi dear, I guess we were. Well, I meant Laksh betrayed Swara by taking a fake name. He is Not Laksh Mehrotra but Laksh Maheshwari. But it's upto Tani now what she does with the Story. She can make Sanskar a part of underworld or innocent. I left that part open.

By the way can you make a index with chapter name and writer's name? Do you have any PM list? I haven't sent any.

I would love Sanskar to be a part of underworld. Index is in the first page, Dyuti di. And yes I have a pm list. Shall I pm you the same list. Or you can create your own pm list.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Really Outstanding Both the Chapters Waiting for Tani to update Chapter 3 so that i can prepared Chapter 4
by that time

Really hope MY CHapter loves by CAPTAIN NIVI 😆😉

Hey new Nick name for Nivi - Captain NIVI

as she is the Captain of the Ship
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey buddies, lovely ladies, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed my reading and hats off to you guys.

Nivi it was a great start.

Hey doc(I think you won't bother me clkaing you doc), you pulled it to another level, when I was reading nivi's I was guessed that it'll be memory loss and Sanskaar will take her to his home there shell.meet her villain but this is super good.

Soo next is Tani, the Yasmin, then me. Hey I'm not giving closure. Let someone give it. Okay I'm not good at that. Let's see how can I pull some humor in it. I have some plans waiting for Tani and Yas to finish their work. And very eager to read it.

Nivi make it as a NOCOPY thread.

Truly,

Kam.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
omg girls and ladies, you all wicked ones applying your too wicked mind.
It will be awesome to read all lovly people work in ff.
Well i Don't mind whether Sanskar in in mafia man or not but love which he poses for Swara is above all.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: elsanna

Mai to gaya re baba🤪

Itna badiya chapter... Dyuti di😭

Kaha phaas gaya mai...😵bhag le tanu sab teri chutney banayege ab...Agar chap accha nai hua to


Give me 3 days...🤓



Wishing you all the best, Tani partner! 😉 Just play around. I think it as relay race. Run your part, pass the baton thend watch the game! You'll do great. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: raaz19

Ladies wow🤗dyuti di you pulled a 369 put of the bag after nivi di know I am just hooked..

You have said it well at the end hooked and waiting...

Loved this dark side of dp. .perfect twist and lakhs rocked too...

Caring sabskaar is nice ...so the flames have been set in motion.. .

All the best talia :)




Dear Razia,
Thank you, thank you, thank you! ( Taking a bow here! 😆 ) Well I'm actually satisfied with the Laksh twist. If I could I would make Laksh claiming like "Thanks bro for saving my fiance" and keeping his wicked play on. Anyways let's see what happens next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Seriously.

Hey buddies, lovely ladies, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed my reading and hats off to you guys.

Nivi it was a great start.

Hey doc(I think you won't bother me clkaing you doc), you pulled it to another level, when I was reading nivi's I was guessed that it'll be memory loss and Sanskaar will take her to his home there shell.meet her villain but this is super good.

Soo next is Tani, the Yasmin, then me. Hey I'm not giving closure. Let someone give it. Okay I'm not good at that. Let's see how can I pull some humor in it. I have some plans waiting for Tani and Yas to finish their work. And very eager to read it.

Nivi make it as a NOCOPY thread.

Truly,

Kam.



Kammo dear ( hehe just kidding 😉 😆 )

Dearest Kam,
Yup thanks to Nivi, she started the genre I'm used to write. Though I would loved historical genre, as I don't have experience with that. I guess like Nivi you're my soul sis too. I don't think it would close this soon possibly we all will get another chapter to write. I wish you make Laksh say, "Hey bro, thanks for saving my fiance!"I can't doubt your ability to make situation too funny.
You can call me doc, but I'm enjoying my amateur writer identity more.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Sushma98999

omg girls and ladies, you all wicked ones applying your too wicked mind.

It will be awesome to read all lovly people work in ff.
Well i Don't mind whether Sanskar in in mafia man or not but love which he poses for Swara is above all.



Thanks Sushma, welcome to this crazy circle. I wish my all other buddies would have joined. It would be a treat. All great writers writing one story.

Logically Sanky has little chance of being Mafia. As he read that KKN id card. That means he know his dad or uncle DP s plan and that 10 crore price. It means he was acting of being concerned and was going to take Swara to DP for killing.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Swasain

Really Outstanding Both the Chapters Waiting for Tani to update Chapter 3 so that i can prepared Chapter 4

by that time

Really hope MY CHapter loves by CAPTAIN NIVI😆😉

Hey new Nick name for Nivi - Captain NIVI

as she is the Captain of the Ship



Dear yasmin
Wishing in advance for chapter 4. 😊

Love,
Dyuti

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