Swasan Story Circle [CH 3 updated] - Page 3

Tani dear and NiVi dear.. Awesome start... I loved it.. Reporter nice idea NiVi dear.. Thriller I like it too Tani dear .. So next chapter will be dyuti.. Great can't wait to read.. And I am sure you will do great job as well Yasmin dear.. Loving the circle idea..

All the best ladies I am sure you all well rock this ship. ...sorry tale ;)

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Tani dear and NiVi dear.. Awesome start... I loved it.. Reporter nice idea NiVi dear.. Thriller I like it too Tani dear .. So next chapter will be dyuti.. Great can't wait to read.. And I am sure you will do great job as well Yasmin dear.. Loving the circle idea..

P. S:" I Know you asked me about it NiVi dear.. I was planning to reply back soon.. I love the idea.. It just I lack spontanity.. And my timing always gets delayed.. I don't want anyone else waiting for my update.. But will love reading it though.. Already intrigued so much.. "

Love

Nita

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Originally posted by: raaz19

All the best ladies I am sure you all well rock this ship. ...sorry tale ;)

As for part one it was amazing nivi loved the twist and turns...finally they have become reporters...nice touch...

Take care

Razia

Originally posted by: iamreader

Poor girl, you have to bear my first blow... 😛 But I know you'll handle it nicely... But you to wait a day or two. I wrote half. But my own story is keeping me busy... I hope that's okay wid you.

Chapter 2 updated guys.Check it out.

Originally posted by: elsanna

How will I do this di...😕

On the scale of 10 your writing skills come on 10 and me on( -)10 😭 there's no way I will be able to handle your blow😭 *crying miserably*

Tani dear, Neither I'm 10 nor you're -10. Don't worry kiddo... I know you'll do well too.😃

Dyuti di, were we soul sisters in past? I seriously have this doubt when I read the second chapter. Gosh, I imaged Durga Prasad as the villian of the story when I started writing. But who's this Laksh Mehrotra? Reading his last dialogue (i felt he was being saracastic and witty),I feel he is also involved with Durga Prasad in his underworld business. Sanskar doesn't even know he is taking Swara to that only place where she wasn't safe.

Originally posted by: Nivijo

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Dyuti di, were we soul sisters in past? I seriously have this doubt when I read the second chapter. Gosh, I imaged Durga Prasad as the villian of the story when I started writing. But who's this Laksh Mehrotra? Reading his last dialogue (i felt he was being saracastic and witty),I feel he is also involved with Durga Prasad in his underworld business. Sanskar doesn't even know he is taking Swara to that only place where she wasn't safe.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">And Tani di, wish you all the best for next chapter. My excitement levels are high, right now.</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">Nivi</font>

Yeah Nivi dear, I guess we were. Well, I meant Laksh betrayed Swara by taking a fake name. He is Not Laksh Mehrotra but Laksh Maheshwari. But it's upto Tani now what she does with the Story. She can make Sanskar a part of underworld or innocent. I left that part open.

By the way can you make a index with chapter name and writer's name? Do you have any PM list? I haven't sent any.

Mai to gaya re baba🤪