Swasan FF :A Cinderella Story(Epilogue pg 29(23/5/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Wow all secrets open
Lovely update

Thanks dearest.. Really happy to know you liked the update 😃

Love

Nita

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

I res

And what do mean another story? You only have one SS, and I am so used to reading your tales, I need one more, maybe two more, for the time being😊

And I am now going to unres - very late but better late than never, right?

What can I say, a beautiful fairy tale ending to the retelling of the fairy tale. I liked that bit about Sanskaar's father being like him, strong, a little short tempered, quick to judge but never slow to apologise. Glad that Annapurna here is a strong woman with a good sense of fairness.

The twist about Ragini cheating to get married to Laksh, was a good one, both deserve each other (that they do, irrespective of how we sketch them).

Finally after a rain drenched proposal (I am watching it rain from my bedroom window as I write, the monsoons have arrived and I think a raining proposal is good too, even more excuses to keep kissing😉) where Swara not only completed the question but also answered yes.

And thank you for starting another tale, I have to get back to it, and I will. I do not want to rush reading it so will take a little time.

love,

Nyna

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aamias

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

i havent read it fully u ended it 😲 i will try my level best to write an comment

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
I res
And what do mean another story? You only have one SS, and I am so used to reading your tales, I need one more, maybe two more, for the time being😊

You do know me well.. I have started another one.. But it not on swasan.. So I don't know where to post it ..

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: NitaReid

You do know me well.. I have started another one.. But it not on swasan.. So I don't know where to post it ..

If it is not fan fiction post it on the WC forum - but that is quite a dead place - so maybe you would have to change the names to the popular OTP if you want it read😊 But you are also on Wattpad, right?

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

If it is not fan fiction post it on the WC forum - but that is quite a dead place - so maybe you would have to change the names to the popular OTP if you want it read😊 But you are also on Wattpad, right?

Yeah I am in wattpad.. And I am posting it in wattpad. It just I know you are not in wattpad.. So I made not sure where you can read it..

Are you in wattpad.. I should have asked that first

Well I don't want to change the name to an famous otp.. If I wanted an fanfiction I would have used swasan itself 😆 no other couples managed to hold my heart yet

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Yeah I am in wattpad.. And I am posting it in wattpad. It just I know you are not in wattpad.. So I made not sure where you can read it..

Are you in wattpad.. I should have asked that first

Well I don't want to change the name to an famous otp.. If I wanted an fanfiction I would have used swasan itself 😆 no other couples managed to hold my heart yet

I agree, I can think of no other couple, and you are a sweetheart.

No I am not on wattpad - I cannot meander over so many online sites, IF is addictive enough. Post it in the WC (writers' corner,) I will read it.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

@Nyna :" Will post in WC then.. "

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Hey Nita..my doll...

Fantabulous update...well I'm pretty late...sorry about that...but trust me from chapter 10 ..11 and finally 12 and sadly last too..it was a rollercoaster ride...which I cherished truly...at the start of this tale I was not sure about Povs style of writing but after few updates..I seriously enjoyed it...it's amazing to read people Povs...so different from each other...two person in similar situation but observing completely different things...thinking even grasping entirely different thing..which I loved most about this story..

your lifestyle ...upbringing ..your friends etc all contribute to your way of thinking...and behaving...both swaragini and sanlak..brought up together...but were poles apart...well twist were indeed terrific...few made me all panicky...but it was worth it...

made story spicy and captivating. ..

baby thank u for this brilliant swasan journey...again we all witness swasan emerging stronger after all hardships..their love withstand all storms...I loved Sanky's maturity which I'm in love with all over again...sometime I wonder if actually such person exist which is so perfect. ...how I wish I get someone like him...pray that I get someone like him...plzzz

Swara was adorable too here...I liked how she handled every hardship...n was upfront in terms of sharing thing with Sanky...she hide some things from him..but majorly she revealed about laksh..which was important...ram..annu dp..we're great..laksh..shekhar and ragini were important for story..but as usual were disappointing. .u seriously crafted them such..I hated them till the end...hehe

So here I'm ending my blabbering. ..thank u again for this beautiful journey..kissy for this...muahhh

love

Talia