Yuan-Fen: A SwaSan OS (B'day gift for Lucky) - Page 2

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

A very happy Birthday Lucky dear🤗 Belated I guess [Wasn't active] I am so sorry for that.

Wishing all the happiness, good health and a bright future for you😳

Much Love

-Harshada😳

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Bangaram🤗

Mine .. and I loved it😳🤗 will be back for more

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

A very beautiful read Nyna🤗

Its been quite a while since I have read anything by you.

This work by you, is as lovely as your every other ones.

My most favorite part in your shot, was the description of what Sanskar wore, in the start of the OS. Light woolen scarf around his neck

Sanskar Maheshwari was the first television character, I fell in love with and I never thought I would find any else character who could make me fall again but I found❤️

I recently happened to watch a Korean Drama, named Descendants of the Sun and I absolutely am in love with the main lead, Shijin Like head over heels in love😆😳

I rambled a lot. Sorry for that😆

It was great to read something by you again, after a long.

Love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Ahhh im excited ..res

OMG nyna...

Just total 3 scenes in the update..and it described the whole story with perfection...remarkable update yaar..u made my day n night...sweety..

Yes, three scenes and if I managed to describe it well, guess O'Henry can rest in peace.

Swasan meeting each other coincidently (yuan-fen)...loved it..

Yuan-fen, as I mentioned (here or on my index, not sure😕), I have been dying to use this word ever since I came across it. And when I recalled this story, I decided that this word would be perfect - fateful coincidence😊

dear im super happy with climax..first i thought that girl getting married could be kavi or swara..was nervous...why my stupid mind always thinks negative..that swasan will get seperated...but nothing such happened.. it was a simple story..with awesome end...when they both decided to live their life forgetting that brief encounter with someone...clueless that theyboth were tied by destiny to each other again..it just made me sooo..im not getting exact word. Thrilled ...amazed...thank u for this.

The climax - I actually was not sure if I should write the final paragraphs, the ones where they hold hands, each pledging him / her to the other, but then, it just flowed and I let it be.

Believe me that was the exact reaction I had when I read the original story, even today I love the butterflies this story gives, a little like the ones when you are riding a giant wheel - a little fear and loads of exhilaration.

...i hope some day in future swasan will tell their deep secret to each other...it wil lbe a sight worth watching...ahhh...enjoyed loads...

Have fun, imagining their reactions, but since they vowed to move on, they would never actually confess, maybe it would come out accidently😉

Love u dear

Talia

N lucky onceagain Happpiest Birth Day Darling...muahhh

Originally posted by: iamreader

Nynu dearest,
Seems like we had a late birthday party! I had a bonus party in WP too! All of my favourite writers updated! 😃

So, Lucky's birthday turned out to be quite...lucky (okay that was a very cliched one, but the Libran me has to show off😳)

Coming to O. Henry, his stories are quirky and almost all of them have last moment twists. Even if you're saying this is an Swasanian adaptation, I'm finding our own Nyna too! The description, the language,gradual buildup to the highest point the way you feel for Swasan and picturize them... it's a Nyna-O.Henry collaboration for me!

And I am over the moon, especially since I am convinced that O'Henry will not be rolling in his grave, screaming curses at me😉. I finally managed to hunt down the story and read it, quite surprised my flow is quite similar though I forgot the title. A

I liked the way you finished the story.. They finished the mementos of their old flames in the holy flame. And found each other unknowingly as new flames. Kind of reincarnation. Incomplete lovers found their way home in their alternate universe.

nd yes, the last two paragraphs were completely mine - it gave a hint of hope. The original story somehow leaves a taste of wistfulness as both the protagonists enter into matrimony with no hope or promise of love.

When your OS was in RES stage, I've got a death wish! A new idea clicked and now it's pestering me a lot! All because of you! Tell me what to do when something like this happens! 😕

Start writing, if the time is right, the words will flow, or else you will at least have a draft in place.😆

Love,

Dyuti