Sail Through Styx A SwaSan SS complete pg 1 (12/20) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Coming

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Res for 1a and 1b. 😊 Just got back to home base Saku. Will revert on the thread, soonest I possibly can. 🤗

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Sanya 😃

Originally posted by: iamreader

Unres.

Swara went to coma for 2 years, and Lucky gave up on his love it seems. But my other mind says may be Lucky is Sunny only. The intensity of love and heartache, his musical connection, the promise. Kind of Orpheus feel... as usual beautiful portrayal of emotions!

Next parts will say my other mind is right or not. 😃

Amazing work again, Saku dear! 👏

- Dyuti

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Something is amiss there is something about lakshya we are unable to see everything regarding lakshya seems very very confusing and this lakshya is not the lakshya we know he is way too different in this story his nature his way of talking it is very different not like lakshya he is so different that it is making me wonder is that really lakshya ????? And woodsy Colonge , dark brown eyes ??????to describe lakshya?????? Song ,guitar I remember you have mention sanskar plays guitar I think you have guessed what I am trying to say by now but I won't say directly till you clear the confusion 😉

The question is why and what exactly he is trying to do ?? We would understand if lakshya gave up on his love because that would be expected from lakshya and that is the lakshya we know but lakshya in this story doesn't seem like the one to give up the problem is he doesn't sound like lakshya at all and if he is not lakshya but sanskar giving false hope and then getting vanish that is so not sanskar and the way he talked it doesn't seem like he was lying be it lakshya or sanskar he does seem to love swara a lot I am confused and why I am getting a bad hunch that he is not alright he did something which saved swara but put him in danger

Swara has almost give up the hope of living She almost don't wanted to live till she met him on the park is he trying to give her a hope to live????

In part 1a when he was trying to tell something to swara but swara stopped him was he trying to confess his feeling or was he trying to tell something else oh god you write story in such a way that every little thing have clues and hints

normally I can guess what is going on and which way a story is going but I am completely confused here

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Sanya dear,

Love you for this long comment and the excitement it brought me🤗. well I can't really answer those questions, it will spoil the fun.

Why, Lakshya is a handsome dude too, no? And can't he have a good heart once in a while? But yeah, reading it again even I found him unconvincing😆😉

Yes, the hints are scattered through out the updates. Perhaps you might pick up on the real deal. However I am going to hold on to my cards. Good luck with the detective work. 🤓

Will see you with the next chapter and hopefully some answers.

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Something is amiss there is something about lakshya we are unable to see everything regarding lakshya seems very very confusing and this lakshya is not the lakshya we know he is way too different in this story his nature his way of talking it is very different not like lakshya he is so different that it is making me wonder is that really lakshya ????? And woodsy Colonge , dark brown eyes ??????to describe lakshya?????? Song ,guitar I remember you have mention sanskar plays guitar I think you have guessed what I am trying to say by now but I won't say directly till you clear the confusion 😉

The question is why and what exactly he is trying to do ?? We would understand if lakshya gave up on his love because that would be expected from lakshya and that is the lakshya we know but lakshya in this story doesn't seem like the one to give up the problem is he doesn't sound like lakshya at all and if he is not lakshya but sanskar giving false hope and then getting vanish that is so not sanskar and the way he talked it doesn't seem like he was lying be it lakshya or sanskar he does seem to love swara a lot I am confused and why I am getting a bad hunch that he is not alright he did something which saved swara but put him in danger

Swara has almost give up the hope of living She almost don't wanted to live till she met him on the park is he trying to give her a hope to live????

In part 1a when he was trying to tell something to swara but swara stopped him was he trying to confess his feeling or was he trying to tell something else oh god you write story in such a way that every little thing have clues and hints

normally I can guess what is going on and which way a story is going but I am completely confused here

By the way I knew you had fascination about sanskar's eyes since when you started mentioning lakhya's eyes and the way he looks at swara ?????😆 and I can't believe I am saying this but I am loving lakshya swara here otherwise laksh swara scene always make me cringe and the funny thing is the only time I have loved laksh swara laksh has turned out to be sanskar