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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
So awesome idea Khushi dear. 😉 Update soon. 😳
And a belated Merry Christmas and a advanced Happy New Year to u dear. 🤗
With love,
Aheli.

Dear Aheli .. 🤗

Thank you .. I am glad you like it ..

happy new year in advanced ..

and updated .. I will wait for your feedback

love

Khushi

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Dear Friends .. 🤗

The First Chapter ..

Chapter (-6 ) is up on page 1 , the third post on the page ..

waiting for your feedback ..

Love

Khushi

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Res Khushi. 😊
Unresed. 😃
It was very intriguing dear. 😉 But I'm confused with the characters. I mean who got killed and by whom, which characters r Sanskar and Swara (Mr. and Mrs. Maheshwari) here and who is the one who's talking as a first person?? 😕 Hope to get it cleared in the next chapter. 😳 Update soon and thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Khushi. 😊
Unresed. 😃
It was very intriguing dear. 😉 But I'm confused with the characters. I mean who got killed and by whom, which characters r Sanskar and Swara (Mr. and Mrs. Maheshwari) here and who is the one who's talking as a first person?? 😕 Hope to get it cleared in the next chapter. 😳 Update soon and thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Dear Aheli .. 🤗

Thank you for the very lovely words ..

You made my day ..

Yeah it was confusing .. sorry for that ..

I think I can help you a little .. 😉

Swara is the first person as the whole story is from her side ..

And Sanskar well .. their was no Sanskar in this chapter ..

And the others characters you have to guess they are four .. 😉

You will get to know them in the next chapter ..

Thank for Dropping by ..

Love

Khushi

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Aheli ..🤗

Thank you for the very lovely words ..
You made my day ..

Yeah it was confusing .. sorry for that ..
I think I can help you a little ..😉
Swara is the first person as the whole story is from her side ..
And Sanskar well .. their was no Sanskar in this chapter ..

And the others characters you have to guess they are four ..😉
You will get to know them in the next chapter ..

Thank for Dropping by ..

Love
Khushi

Hey Khushi dear, 🤗
Thanku so much for clearing my doubts. Okk so the first person reference is by Swara, and there was no Sanskar in this chapter. And there r more 4 characters, right?? So among those 4 characters only, 2 of them r Mr. and Mrs. Maheshwari, right?? 😕 Plzz clear this one too sis. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi khushi dearest,

Typing from mobile.. So don't mind the length of the comment.. Just know I really loved it.. So we are going to get just six chapters.. As I told you even when you told about the theme about how I find it interesting.. And it really is interesting dearest.. And by luck my guess for Viji story came right this time.. So I randomly guess who is who or try too.. The Mr and Mrs Maheshwari can be either ragini and laksh or parineeta and Adarsh.. I bet on the former one first than the latter.. I deeply inclined to believe the last person who entered the scene and the one who had an confrontation with Swara is sanskar.. Well that what I think as for now.. But I am totally clueless on the one who died.. I was really interested by your idea and chapter one made me want to read more and more.. So do update soon.. As I can't wait to read the next chapter.. Hopefully as the chapter progress I can guess correctly as for now I am just shooting with whatever names that pop up.. I really loved it khushi dear

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Khushi dear, 🤗
Thanku so much for clearing my doubts. Okk so the first person reference is by Swara, and there was no Sanskar in this chapter. And there r more 4 characters, right?? So among those 4 characters only, 2 of them r Mr. and Mrs. Maheshwari, right?? 😕 Plzz clear this one too sis. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

You are welcome dear .. any time ..

And about your questions ..

Yes .. Mr. And Mrs. Maheshwari which are mentioned in the chapter are among those four ..

In the chapter ..

A long with Swara there are 4 more people .. 3 him and 1 her .. 2 of them are Mr. And Mrs Maheshwari ..

I can't say more than this .. I hope I helped in clearing you doubt ..

Love

Khushi

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: StarySKY

You are welcome dear .. any time ..

And about your questions ..
Yes .. Mr. And Mrs. Maheshwari which are mentioned in the chapter are among those four ..

In the chapter ..
A long with Swara there are 4 more people .. 3 him and 1 her .. 2 of them are Mr. And Mrs Maheshwari ..

I can't say more than this .. I hope I helped in clearing you doubt ..

Love
Khushi

Khushi 🤗 🤗
Now I completely got it dearest. 😃 Thanku so much sis. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: StarySKY

You are welcome dear .. any time ..

And about your questions ..
Yes .. Mr. And Mrs. Maheshwari which are mentioned in the chapter are among those four ..

In the chapter ..
A long with Swara there are 4 more people .. 3 him and 1 her .. 2 of them are Mr. And Mrs Maheshwari ..

I can't say more than this .. I hope I helped in clearing you doubt ..

Love
Khushi