'The Horns of Dilemma'--Light hearted SwaSan & RagLak 2S, Complete

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Viji,
Lucky's ambivalence was not present😉- he was quite "valent" luckily Sanskaar was valiant and the hungry tiger not so hungry🤣🤣

I like Ragini's astuteness and determination that her lord above all things, okay above a few things really needed to be taught the three Rs. The carrot she dangled (Amber fort😉) should enable him to pick up a few basics - especially which is right and which is left😆😆😆

Had a good laugh - should clear my monday blues.

love,
Nyna

My Dear Nynu 🤗🤗

I am so happy that you loved it. 😊 I was giggling a fair bit to myself when I thought of the various permutations and combinations between what Ragini could indicate, and what Lucky would understand. 😆 🤣

Glad I could make you smile through your monday blues. I am feeling a fair bit down myself, hopefully the laughs writing this brought me, should steer me through. 😳 😊

You made my day----you know exactly how much your feedback means to me.
🤗

Loads of Love, ❤️ 🤗

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hi Friends 🤗🤗

Please feel free to contribute your own versions/theories of which door Lakshya would have opened. 😆 😉

Please bear with me for some delay in my individual replies to your comments from now till tomorrow. I am squeezing in time in between some onerous work commitments, to type out final proof of The Maheshwari House Murders, Chapter # 3. Will get back to each of your lovely and motivating comments, the very soonest I can. I guess I have already caught up with all comments for Chapter 1 and the Preface, already.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

your laksya reminds me of mikesh, a web series character. i seriously now like your lakshya very much. first sid then mikesh, wow😃

why are ragini and sanskar siblings here, in your story whenever you describe sanskar and ragini in detail( except serial tracks), i end up wanting them together😆

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Originally posted by: soumya04
your laksya reminds me of mikesh, a web series character. i seriously now like your lakshya very much. first sid then mikesh, wow😃
why are ragini and sanskar siblings here, in your story whenever you describe sanskar and ragini in detail( except serial tracks), i end up wanting them together😆

Soumya my dear pal 🤗🤗

I quite like Lakshya too, now. Bumbling and juvenile he may be, asinine and rather fickle. But still, he has his pluses. 😉 😆 He really is a cuddly poo, sweetie koo sometimes, no? 😆

😆 On Ragini and Sanskaar. Baap re, you run the risk of being tarred and feathered even saying such a thing, tauba tauba! 😉 🤣 But seriously, I never get why a SwaSan fan is sometimes almost 'required' to dislike Ragini. Of course, she's done some horrible crimes, committed several sins. And the serial screwed up her redemption track royally. But just IMHO, she is such a fascinating, layered, compelling character. Next only to Sanskaar in the sheer depth, shades and facets to her persona.

I guess that sentiment of mine brushes off on how I describe Ragini in several of my fics. 😆 I don't see Ragini and Sanskaar as a romantic pair though, for me, that will always be SwaSan and RagLak. I would love to envision (and have done my best to write), Ragini and Sanskaar as wily and formidable adversaries, who have a hell of a lot of respect for each other.

Or even as prickly frenemies/ allies, who have some wariness and 'coopetition'---a blend of competition and cooperation 😆, in their friendship/ cordial rivalry. 😆

So this time, I decided to make them cousins. 😉

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Hi Viji,

A nice story. Enjoyed it. I knew that Sanskaar would eventually win the day. I was also quite sure Ragini would not harm Lakshya. Nonetheless, I like your take on everything. I also love love love Mehrangarh fort, more than Amber or Amer fort. Thank you for a different story. Refreshing to read. Take care.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Awww gowwwd ...Acha cha cha ...🤣🤣

Viji .. You cracked me up darlin I broke out laughing all of sudden and had to subsidize my smiles😆 givem the weird looks by my colleagues ..Laksh is so capable of doing it , Ragini and the bonus of Swasan 21 days ...ahem ahem😳

This is totally out of box..Genius ho aap 👏😉

Love

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Hi Viji,
A nice story. Enjoyed it. I knew that Sanskaar would eventually win the day. I was also quite sure Ragini would not harm Lakshya. Nonetheless, I like your take on everything. I also love love love Mehrangarh fort, more than Amber or Amer fort. Thank you for a different story. Refreshing to read. Take care.

Hey Sagarika 🤗

Thanks yaar, so glad to know that you loved it. Yeah, Sanskaar would win the day, he is such a determined and capable individual after all. And yeah---I do feel that Ragini, obsessively fascinated as she is about Lucky, would not be able to countenance him being ripped apart before her eyes. She would hesitate, perhaps. She certainly would not want to lose him to another; she might even consider whether his death might not be the better option. But ultimately, I feel, she might choose to not have him harmed. IMO, at least. 😉

The Mehrangarh fort is superb na? One of my favorite places, I've been there 3 times and am ready to visit again. 😆 Amber fort is lovely too---and I agree with you, Mehrangarh is more awe inspiring. I would say Amber/ Amer comes a not-so-close second, and both are better than Jaisalmer fort.

I am very touched by your support and warmth across a number of my fic threads. 🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Awww gowwwd ...Acha cha cha ...🤣🤣
Viji .. You cracked me up darlin I broke out laughing all of sudden and had to subsidize my smiles😆 givem the weird looks by my colleagues ..Laksh is so capable of doing it , Ragini and the bonus of Swasan 21 days ...ahem ahem😳

This is totally out of box..Genius ho aap 👏😉

Love
Lucky

Lucky 🤗🤗🤗

So thrilled that you loved it and that it made you laugh. 😆 I was going all 🤣 when I wrote it, too. Feeling quite distressed at some onerous work pressure and this was a good stress buster for me. 😆 😉

Aooow Gaawwd I can totally imagine Lakshya confusing Ragini's left for right. 😆 Banda hai hi aisa, na? 😉

SwaSan 21 days in Mehrangarh fort---'christening' each well appointed and luxurious apartment---honeymoon made in heaven. 😳 ☺️

I can't help but wonder about RagLak honeymoon in Amber fort after a month. Once Lakshya learns the signs and signals well. 😉 After all he has to realize when Ragini means 'left' and when she means 'right'. 🤣

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Hi Guys 🤗🤗

Leaving for a very late lunch. 😊 Will catch up with pending reverts later in the day.

Loads of Love, ❤️

---Viji

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

I loved it sanskar is indeed very intelligent he managed everything not only he got married to swara but also he managed to convince dp for raglak marriage the best was laksh messing left and right 😆 totally expected for laksh to do this sanskar even thought about the tiger and send it to jungle and the final ragini hiring teacher for her bachcha 😆 I was laughing so much loved it

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