'The Horns of Dilemma'--Light hearted SwaSan & RagLak 2S, Complete

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

From what you wrote about Ragini and what i thing of the ragini i feel her is a character which will let the thing that she cant get whither away rather than get to some other person

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Viji darling...

I m here early...thank God..mostly in every story of yours im last...

Soo coming to story..which have excited me soo much.BRILLIANT CONCEPT...it was super duper hit...with a cliff hanger...im chewing my lips...words fail me...it was perfect...

I had missed sanky in it...just mention of him brought biggest smile on my face...whole setting of ruling king durga prasad...his barbaric ways to punish..n reward too...made me all captivated..i thought sanky eould be in trial...strangely this time ..it was lakshya turn to face trial..his only crime was to love princess ragini...twist just scared me alot..what fate has ragini decided for lakshya...swara or tiger...first time scared for lucky cause of tiger...but if i see him near swara..i would kill him...where is sanky?????im curious as cat...excited...

Update next quickly...

One thing ...if a women is on trial??? she would be married too??n thrown in front of tiger????first i thought swara would be on trial...that why...hehe

Love

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: SwathyS
i would want tiger to eat him as well duh sanskar ki swara 🤪

😆😉 That certainly is a possibility. 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SwathyS
From what you wrote about Ragini and what i thing of the ragini i feel her is a character which will let the thing that she cant get whither away rather than get to some other person

Yeah she does seem very possessive and intense that way, na? Let's see whether that covetous instinct wins, or her immense love for Lakshya. And Sanskaar would not be sitting idle, he would have plans up his sleeve too. 😊

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Viji darling...
I m here early...thank God..mostly in every story of yours im last...

Soo coming to story..which have excited me soo much.BRILLIANT CONCEPT...it was super duper hit...with a cliff hanger...im chewing my lips...words fail me...it was perfect...
I had missed sanky in it...just mention of him brought biggest smile on my face...whole setting of ruling king durga prasad...his barbaric ways to punish..n reward too...made me all captivated..i thought sanky eould be in trial...strangely this time ..it was lakshya turn to face trial..his only crime was to love princess ragini...twist just scared me alot..what fate has ragini decided for lakshya...swara or tiger...first time scared for lucky cause of tiger...but if i see him near swara..i would kill him...where is sanky?????im curious as cat...excited...

Update next quickly...

One thing ...if a women is on trial??? she would be married too??n thrown in front of tiger????first i thought swara would be on trial...that why...hehe

Love
Talia

Hey Talia 🤗

So glad you liked the setting of Frank Stockton's shirt story adapted to Swaragini universe. 😆 Really touched by all your warm words yaar. Means a lot.

Well...if the accused was a lady, I guess a warrior knight would have been concealed behind one of the doors. And the other would have a tigress instead of a tiger? 😉😆 The barbaric king's way of dispensing justice was barbaric indeed.

More on SwaSan in next chapter. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Viji... ⭐️

Given the right angle and lighting 🤣 🤣 that was hilarious.

I have feeling that at the end sanskar will save the day...! (Of course its your story so he will) I have some crazy ideas how he can do... But they r to crazy so not posting here.

Coming to ragini what she would do...well she can do sham dam dand bhed...etc then she can blackmail her father by attempting suicide..but given his father's twisted idea of justice... She won't. 🤣 so when it come down to lady or tiger she would go for tiger I guess...and say the infamous aashiq dialogue "laksh aap humare Na hue to hum aapko kisi aur ka bhi nahi denge." 🤔

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Helee
Viji... ⭐️

Given the right angle and lighting 🤣 🤣 that was hilarious.

I have feeling that at the end sanskar will save the day...! (Of course its your story so he will) I have some crazy ideas how he can do... But they r to crazy so not posting here.

Coming to ragini what she would do...well she can do sham dam dand bhed...etc then she can blackmail her father by attempting suicide..but given his father's twisted idea of justice... She won't. 🤣 so when it come down to lady or tiger she would go for tiger I guess...and say the infamous aashiq dialogue "laksh aap humare Na hue to hum aapko kisi aur ka bhi nahi denge." 🤔

My Dearest Helee 🤗

So glad you loved it. 😆 Part 2 coming up in just a bit, so you would be able to see the conclusion there. And right angle and lighting indeed. 🤣😉 Happy to know you loved it! 😳

Don't worry about posting crazy ideas, go ahead yaar! I want to read it! My idea in Part 2 is completely crazy anyway! 😆

Loads of Love

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..👍🏼

Thanks a lot 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Hi Friends 🤗🤗

I have completed Part 2 and posted it on Page 1 (3rd post on the Page).

Please do read when time permits, and let me know what you thought. Your feedback means a great deal to me, and keeps me motivated to write more on SwaSan.

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Dear Viji,

Lucky's ambivalence was not present😉- he was quite "valent" luckily Sanskaar was valiant and the hungry tiger not so hungry🤣🤣

I like Ragini's astuteness and determination that her lord above all things, okay above a few things really needed to be taught the three Rs. The carrot she dangled (Amber fort😉) should enable him to pick up a few basics - especially which is right and which is left😆😆😆

Had a good laugh - should clear my monday blues.

love,

Nyna

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