The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16 - Page 45

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello Viji dearest🤗

Another fabulous update i like how u elaborate & picturised is very well👍🏼
i knew it when u mention swasan plan last update they will do something like that 😛 to cought real culprit they will blame others & teer noshane pe laga hai.
what i will say about ragini she is such a out of the world creature bas aur kuch nehi u assume rest.
like straight forward sanskar with ragini actually with everyone.
one question is we will get swasan romance😉next update pls pls
Bye
Take care
loads of love❤️🤗


My Dear Showrav 🤗🤗


I am so very happy to know that you loved this chapter. You saying that you could envision the scenes while reading about them, really made my day. That was a wonderful compliment. 😳😊

Yup, that was SwaSan's plan all right...bring out the truth by pretending to suspect Lucky, and thereby make Ragini confess.

I will be posting an 'alternative solution'...a track I had initially thought of, when I started conceptualizing this story. Hope you would like that. Yes, that would have some SwaSan romance. 😉 ☺️

Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Zephyr8

Yes, it was always going to be Ragini. A wonderful tale you've spun here. I absolutely enjoyed it, intriguing. Looking forward to reading the last chapter. Thank you for the mention in the end of this chapter, Viji. Always loved your stories, you know that.


Hey Sagarika 🤗🤗


Really happy to know you loved this tale...and yeah, there were a few clues pointing at Ragini. 😊😉Really touched by your warm words about my writing...and you are absolutely welcome about that mention, I truly meant it.

Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji

Does that mean we are in a treat for tomorrow?
Hope you enjoyed your travelling ...
Veena.
Sorry did I hack your space in between?





Hey Veena 🤗🤗


Hope the chapters were the treat you were expecting. 😆 I will be back with an alternative solution to the mystery which I had initially thought of at the time of conceptualizing the story. I didn't proceed with that particular solution, chose another person(s) as the murderer(s). 😉 Now I thought it might be fun to just prepare the final draft of some scenes I had in mind initially, when I was running the original solution through my head.

I should be posting it in a day or two.


Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Viji dearest. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Yes yes yes! I knew it was Ragini who committed all those heinous crimes!! 😡 Swara and SK trick for making Ragini reveal her crimes by her own by making Laksh their bait really worked! 😉 My god its not her love but her obsession for Laksh, which made her commit these crimes! 😡 She didn't even think that what Laksh, for whom she's committing all the crimes, wants! 😲 And she went on to harm all the near and dear ones of Laksh! 🤢 And whoa!! Even after committing so many crimes, she still had the audacity to shout back at Swara!! 😲 😡 U know after Ragini blurted out her deeds, I really wanted Lucky to give a tight slap to his 'Ragu'! But unfortunately that didn't happen...😆 😛 And hats off to my Swara for cracking the mystery! 😉 And of course to SK too. 😳 Loved their li'l moment at the end of this chapter. 😳 Update soon dearest. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Viji,
Read all chapters at a go. When you first started this story, I decided to read this one without waiting.Patiently held myself for the mystery to be unveiled completely. Though predicted the killer beforehand, this one was thrilling read. Terribly sorry as I didn't give chapter by chapter review for this one... but some stories are meant for binge reading...


Waiting eagerly for chapter 7. 😃
Love,
Dyuti
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Hey Aheli 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dear Viji,
Read all chapters at a go. When you first started this story, I decided to read this one without waiting.Patiently held myself for the mystery to be unveiled completely. Though predicted the killer beforehand, this one was thrilling read. Terribly sorry as I didn't give chapter by chapter review for this one... but some stories are meant for binge reading...


Waiting eagerly for chapter 7. 😃
Love,
Dyuti


Hey Dyuti 🤗


So glad to know you found this SS a thrilling read. 😳🤗 I'd written another suspense/ thriller 3S quite some time back, titled 'Old sins cast long shadows'.

Yes, I had put in a few hints pointing at Ragini as the perpetrator...though there were a few red herrings pointing at Lucky too. 😉😊 Good to know you guessed Ragini as the killer. The fact that there were 2 murderers, with 2 disconnected motives; and Ragini not being responsible for the first murder, might have been a surprise in that case. 😆😉

Please don't say sorry and stuff for not leaving chapter wise reviews dude...I'm happy that you read when time permitted. Binge reading certainly is pleasurable. 😆

Cheers

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago

Unresed @60 darling. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Viji dearest. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Yes yes yes! I knew it was Ragini who committed all those heinous crimes!! 😡 Swara and SK trick for making Ragini reveal her crimes by her own by making Laksh their bait really worked! 😉 My god its not her love but her obsession for Laksh, which made her commit these crimes! 😡 She didn't even think that what Laksh, for whom she's committing all the crimes, wants! 😲 And she went on to harm all the near and dear ones of Laksh! 🤢 And whoa!! Even after committing so many crimes, she still had the audacity to shout back at Swara!! 😲 😡 U know after Ragini blurted out her deeds, I really wanted Lucky to give a tight slap to his 'Ragu'! But unfortunately that didn't happen...😆 😛 And hats off to my Swara for cracking the mystery! 😉 And of course to SK too. 😳 Loved their li'l moment at the end of this chapter. 😳 Update soon dearest. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.




My Dearest Aheli 🤗🤗🤗


Really thrilled to know that you loved the chapter, my dear. Yup, Swara and SK had this plan all along----deflect the blame on Lucky and thereby make Ragini confess. They knew he was her weakness, the reason why she had committed those heinous crimes...

I do feel a bit of pity for her, however. She is so immensely, madly, intently in love with Lucky, she has lost all sense of perspective and rationality. She desperately covets and brabs things which she thinks will make Lucky content and happy in his life---not ever thinking of what he would feel about her actions, the implications and consequences of what she has done. She doesn't even pause to reflect whether he would really want that power and prestige obtained at such a blood-soaked price!

Glad to know you loved the little SwaSan moment at the end. 😳 Its been a bit challenging weaving in the mystery/thriller/suspense aspect of the plot, as well as the romance aspect. Very touched to know that you loved both. 😳

Loads of Love,

----Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Unresed @60 darling. 😃



Replied above. 😊 🤗🤗

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