Hi my dear sis,
I know I'm super late with this comment, but since you know how busy my schedule has been I won't waste time in breaking the sunny boy's rule by making an apology.
Can't tell you how absolutely spellbinding a ride this journey had been. With the flavors your masterful writing adds to it and the twists finally revealing itself. Be it the secret of Sanskar's birth or the actual murder itself everything clicks together like an amazing jigsaw so seamlessly fitting that it's breathtaking.
I had my doubts on AP's child being swapped but I could not nick on the tiny fact that Sanskar could look like his mother . That was brilliant.
While I knew Lakshya cannot possibly murder the people very close to him...I actually liked the dude here...I didn't doubt Ragini either.
It was all thanks to the confident and composed way she faced the interrogating that just like Swara I thought she was genuine. However when the golf club was discovered I had a nudging doubt in a corner of my mind but I did not press it you had me engaged otherwise in your awesome word traps.
I must say something about Lakshya he is a wonderful character. Although not as strong as Sanskar is or witty as Swara he has certain admirable qualities too. I liked it especially how he dealt with Ragini. You know how he said he would arrange a lawyer for her but she had to plead guilty. That man knows where his responsibility lies and how to differ right from wrong. Kudos for you to creating that image for someone I never bothered about much.
I loved how the equation changed for Swasan, it was very believable just how the curiosity turns to attraction and to friendship and later love. I felt myself falling in love with the pair once more.
I'm so glad I chanced upon this forum met a lovely soul like you and had the fortune to read the extraordinary works from your pen. Waiting for you to wrap this up and many many folds of fair winds for your sails!
Loads of love,
Saku