The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16 - Page 46

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum




Hey Veena 🤗🤗


Hope the chapters were the treat you were expecting. 😆 I will be back with an alternative solution to the mystery which I had initially thought of at the time of conceptualizing the story. I didn't proceed with that particular solution, chose another person(s) as the murderer(s). 😉 Now I thought it might be fun to just prepare the final draft of some scenes I had in mind initially, when I was running the original solution through my head.

I should be posting it in a day or two.


Love

Viji


Definitely dear, anything from such a great author is a treat. And thrilled to know you are planning to post a draft of original too. That will be a twist in the tale.
Waiting eagerly
Veena

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



My Dear Showrav🤗🤗


I am so very happy to know that you loved this chapter. You saying that you could envision the scenes while reading about them, really made my day. That was a wonderful compliment.😳😊

Yup, that was SwaSan's plan all right...bring out the truth by pretending to suspect Lucky, and thereby make Ragini confess.

I will be posting an 'alternative solution'...a track I had initially thought of, when I started conceptualizing this story. Hope you would like that. Yes, that would have some SwaSan romance.😉 ☺️

Love

Viji



But I want a chapter full on swasan & their romance 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well done swara...so Ragini is the one..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Viji update de de. Viji update de de baba
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Showrav and Ri...🤗🤗


Will do my utmost to come back soon with the next chapter. 😊😳

Wish you and yours a Very Happy New Year. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
My Dearest Manisha and Sneha 🤗🤗

So thrilled to know that you loved this chapter. 😊😳

Lots of Love


Viji
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear...waiting for the alternative plot...happy 2017
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi my dear sis,
I know I'm super late with this comment, but since you know how busy my schedule has been I won't waste time in breaking the sunny boy's rule by making an apology.
Can't tell you how absolutely spellbinding a ride this journey had been. With the flavors your masterful writing adds to it and the twists finally revealing itself. Be it the secret of Sanskar's birth or the actual murder itself everything clicks together like an amazing jigsaw so seamlessly fitting that it's breathtaking.
I had my doubts on AP's child being swapped but I could not nick on the tiny fact that Sanskar could look like his mother . That was brilliant.
While I knew Lakshya cannot possibly murder the people very close to him...I actually liked the dude here...I didn't doubt Ragini either.
It was all thanks to the confident and composed way she faced the interrogating that just like Swara I thought she was genuine. However when the golf club was discovered I had a nudging doubt in a corner of my mind but I did not press it you had me engaged otherwise in your awesome word traps.
I must say something about Lakshya he is a wonderful character. Although not as strong as Sanskar is or witty as Swara he has certain admirable qualities too. I liked it especially how he dealt with Ragini. You know how he said he would arrange a lawyer for her but she had to plead guilty. That man knows where his responsibility lies and how to differ right from wrong. Kudos for you to creating that image for someone I never bothered about much.
I loved how the equation changed for Swasan, it was very believable just how the curiosity turns to attraction and to friendship and later love. I felt myself falling in love with the pair once more.
I'm so glad I chanced upon this forum met a lovely soul like you and had the fortune to read the extraordinary works from your pen. Waiting for you to wrap this up and many many folds of fair winds for your sails!
Loads of love,
Saku
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Viji baby..

Unres @ 57..late..

Talia


Hey Talia 🤗🤗


Hope your bro's wedding went very well. Shadi mubarak to him from me. 😊

So very touched by your comment dear. Shall revert in detail as soon as I have some more time on lappie. You really made me feel so very touched and blessed by your warm words.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Hi dear...waiting for the alternative plot...happy 2017


Hi Achu...sorry I've not managed to keep up with my planned timelines, was on a few days holiday around Xmas and New Year; and then got swamped at work. 😆

Will be back soonest I can.

Love

Viji

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