The Maheshwari House Murders-Chap 6 PG 50, 26/12/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: NitaReid
I read it and I am sticking with my suspect it ragini.. If not maybe Durga Prasad.. Who wants his family secret to be an secret.. Not sure about him.. Anyway.. Will come back for detail comment later. Until then just letting you know I loved it.

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Nita

Nita Darling 🤗🤗

How are things in Chennai---I hope slowly getting back to normal now. Trust you and yours are all fine and not facing very onerous conditions. Take care, my Best Wishes with you always.

Am so very touched to know you loved this, my dear. So you are sticking to your suspect...😳 😉 Well, I won't say much more whether you are right or wrong for now; there's just a chapter more to go to unwrap the whole mystery, with possibly a last one to close out the story arc. So it would be clear within the early part of the coming week. 😉

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Aww gaawd ..Now laksh also plays golf ...and the golf headers changeable😲 I have so much doubt on this miya biwi Raglak ,... joint partners they might be 😆..how do u manage to get such twisted ideas viji😲...how would I sleep now 😕..wait ..I guess I can focus of last part of Our detective duo😳..needless to say ..I loved it .. suspense and love .. killer combo I say ..😆👏😉 and you are awesome like always

Will be back for more and cant tell you how good it feels to see u back 🤗

love loads
lucky

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Am so very thrilled to know that you enjoyed chapter 5 a lot. 😳 🤗

He he...very glad that you liked both the mystery bit and the romance bit. 😉

Lots of Love

Viji

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phoenix27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Hi Viji,

The way you described the culpability of Adarsh in Megha kaki murder case was amazing. because at the start I was thinking that both the murders were related but it was a good twist. It was so nice to see that both the murders were unrelated.But I am really not able to understand what was the reason behind the other two attacks and murder of Adarsh. I can understand that Uttar was attacked because she knew something related to Sanskar's connection with the family but why she is been attacked at that time, Sanskar was living there for quite some time if the murderer was afeard of getting this secret out then he might have killed Megha Kaki before itself.

Why I am feeling that Lakshya is also not the real culprit its someone else. he might be sidekick but why I feel someone else is the mastermind of this machiavellian plot. Might be Durgaprasad's Brother as he is connected to the past as well.

nevertheless, i loved your post I was waiting for it and now I feel the wait was well paid off :)

Kudos,

Ria

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Hello viji dearest
just finished both chapters & I tell u it's beautiful & it keeping me into it till last. I said it earlier & say it now also that u r a one brilliant writer i come to know in this forum I can see ur hard work how much u research for information & facts.
Thanks u for entertain us dear.
swara did lots of research for background of the events & find out the baby swiped thing what we assumed that sk is maheshari.
I can understand the reaction from both sk & lakshya & I love how swara comfort sk give him support & then the magical moment for swasan & their fans the kiss. How fiercely they kissing I loved it full on emotional & then their feelings for each other. swara want more but Mr.mode breaker like aaj ke liye bas baki sab khatam hone ke baad I like his teasing i can imagine his grin face. u all girls drooling him comments reply about it but I can't u know as a boy it not look good but I can drool or tak jhak swara.
is it their plan to catch real murder they accused laksh for all happenings.
& others stuff others very well analysed so skip those but I love those revelation & facts.
update soon dear
Take care dear
Bye
love u buddy

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chemgirl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Hi Viji,

This story is just awesome...I came across this yesterday evening and have been reading it all night.

I am a fan of thrillers and mysteries but nothing ever gives me the satisfaction of reading a Agatha Christie mystery...I have read most of her books every time she leaves me surprised...a perfect plot starting with one murder ...then the introduction of the various characters...then some words from those involved...then the murderer's move again...and then our detective strikes...the murderer is caught with all the proofs..and this story is just like that.

From the beginning I had a feeling there are 2 muderers involved...somehow there is a difference between the first murder which seemed kind of sudden and the other 2 planned out rather well...with Uttara and Adarsh the murderer seemed ready to wait...but I wasnt sure...maybe they were less of a threat than Megha Kaki.

My suspect is Ragini... a woman has better access sometimes to the happenings in a home...She could have overheard something said by Kaki and got to know the truth...now if this truth should come out it wouldn't be good for her husband ...Adarsh is already trying to throw Lakshya out of the party ...he is new to the party and the biggest strength he has is that he is Durga Prasad's son...once that is lost Lakshya would suffer...the first chapter we were told that Ragini fell in love with him very quickly...so it seems she would do anything for him...Ragini has the opportunity too...the first morning she could have called Kaki to the shed and got held up with her duties..She said Laksh went swimming but Sanskaar says the floor was not damp.. .so maybe Laksh was somewhere else...She was late at the table for dinner when Uttara was attacked...maybe Durga Prasad was never supposed to die..

Just a distraction to attack Adarsh...she would have access to both the kitchen and DP' s room.

Anyway I am dying to get the next update...i guess the reply is too long...just my random theories.

Plz update soon.

And please write more of these kind.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#416

My Dearest Ria, Showrav and @Chemgirl (sorry yaar, don't know your name/nick yet 😊)...🤗🤗

You guys really made my day, my Xmas weekend so very special with your wonderful comments. Really touched by the extremely analytical and insightful takes, I've enjoyed myself thoroughly, reading through your warm words again and again. 😳🤗

I would like to retain some measure of suspense for the penultimate chapter which I'm writing now, but I must say that your reasoning is very astute and perceptive indeed. As to which reasoning is closest to the solution I had in mind, and which alternative is perhaps not precisely on the same lines I had planned; I shall keep to myself for a bit longer. 😉😳

Love you guys loads, and wish you and yours a Very Merry Christmas 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#417

Finally unresed both ch-5.A and 5.B @54. 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#418

Hey Friends 🤗🤗🤗

I have updated Chapter 6 on Page 50. 😊

Do read when convenient, and let me know what you felt. Your feedback means a lot. 🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

---Viji

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JungleeBilli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#419

AHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHHAA I knew it! Rags wasn't doing yoga! But didn't get the swimming pool thingy. Sanky after/before finding Uttara mentioned how pool looked none used it for few days but lucky said he did use it?!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
AHAHHAHAHAAHAHAHHAA I knew it! Rags wasn't doing yoga! But didn't get the swimming pool thingy. Sanky after/before finding Uttara mentioned how pool looked none used it for few days but lucky said he did use it?!

Not pool itself re...he saw that the pool lockers/ shower room was grimy and didn't look as if it had been used in days. Not the swimming pool itself. 😊😛

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