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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: raaz19
Hi sharon
Loved the complete update seems the plot is getting deeper and the magic streams and getting tighter...loving the twist and turns...

Loved ragani a lot in the update...

Beautiful penned as always

Razia

Hi Razia,

I am glad that you liked it. While I had a lot of misgivings about the turn of events, I had to update something before I lost my precious readers, and my interest in giving this story a worthy ending.

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Sharon,

Finally unresed on page 49 first post, as of now, once the safai abhyan is done, not sure where the post would end up😆

Anyway, I wrote my request for 19A before I read your reply to Aheli, so it is quite redundant now. But glad to note that we would have two more chapters

Best,
Nyna

Hi Nyna,

I just realised that I had been linking the posts. So I don't have to redo my index due to safai abhyan.

Well, you made me think, dear. I am still thinking about the sequel idea and right now I am 60% sure of the storyline for that. So quickly want to move over to that.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
And I res for 19😊😊

And finally I get around to unres😳 the safai abhyan of IF shifted your update to page 48.

Finally, Ragini is on board, I like her quite a bit here and even in the danger of being lynched by the die hard SwaSan fans (I am one too), I feel that individually she had more shades and greater potential than Swara did, in the serial. So when Ragini is portrayed as a well rounded character in FFs, I just love them.

The encounter between the four was surprisingly quite calm, no fireworks, but then each had there own reason to keep the emotions on a tight rein - Sanskaar worried about Laksh and Swara worried about Ragini. And Ragini slipped into the business mode to deal with the mind boggling idea that magic not only existed, if they were not capable, it could lead to a war. That must have been tough too accept, though she accepted her past with Laksh quite quickly.

Swara is such an open faced book, I liked the way, Sanskaar almost read her mind - he could read her face very well. And even I think a restrained Sanskaar is very hot, though I cannot wait to read about his fiery avatar and unrestrained self in the magic war.

And do write out 19A - very very curious to know about Ragini and Laksh. Hope your studies are going well and do not leave you too exhausted.

Best,
Nyna

Hi Nyna

It's always a pleasure to read the comments especially when they are unreserved. Gives me something to look forward!😳

Ragini was a character that, I think, most of us Swasan fans had a love-hate relationship. Mostly when she was trying to bring them closer but at times when she was playing an antagonist, her style made me like her. When I see her journey from the shy girl to whatever she became towards the end of the serial, I remain stunned (sometimes the unsarcastic way!😉)

That chapter reminded me of my SS Ignorant Crossroads. That SS was unnerving me when the idea formed. The same feeling I experienced when writing this update. The face-off came at a time when each had their interests at stake. So I didn't want to add any unnecessary drama. This world of Whimsical Corporation talks about being logical and practical and professional, where emotions don't matter within MSI though there are everlasting bonds outside the office.

We will surely see a different Sanskaar in the climax. He will remain restrained until his blood oozes out and Swara gets to see his anger for the very first time.

My second semester starts from next week. So planning to complete this by then.. *fingers crossed*😊

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Dear Sharon,

Good to hear from you and great to know that you plan to wrap this up before you semester starts (next week you said, so we get the whole story up by weekend😊 - greedy me)

Yes, even my index is safe though the posts I reserved for my future updates disappeared as did the Res on some other FF. But you should hear some of the members cry murder, they are behaving as though they have been stripped of rank and are demoted. Absolutely hilarious.

But the one good thing I have learnt, do not use the word "Res"😆

All the best for your studies.

Best,

Nyna

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Sharon dear...

Unres @ 49...

Love u

Talia

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res dear...
Unres..

Hey Sharon...dear

Apologies darling..I'm very late...busy schedule. ..u are also missing from forum???do give appearance. ..

Chapter 19 was awesome...I have bookmarked it for so long..I was waiting for it to get completed ...

I enjoyed this chapter..totally...finally it revealled that raglak had past...I guess it was not an ugly break up...ragini was confused with everything happening around her...and could not share it with lucky.she thought he would not understand...hence they parted..but Destiny again crossed their paths...
Meeting of ragini with MSI went quite well..I'm wondering how she will give possible solution to the problems MSI are facing...after all it is a magical world...will wait for that now...

Thank u for updating...
love
Talia

Hi Talia,

Yes dear, been MIA nowadays. I will try to be more regular now that I really hate to stop writing about this magical world. 😆

I should have messaged you when the post was completed.. Sorry dear..

Regarding RagLak, I am glad that you liked it. They were together for like one month and just went their own ways. But Lucky felt his heart broken when Ragini didn't respond. Now that they are all fighting for the same cause, they will come up with a solution for sure.

Will message you when I update next, Pakka!

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Sharon,

Good to hear from you and great to know that you plan to wrap this up before you semester starts (next week you said, so we get the whole story up by weekend😊 - greedy me)

Yes, even my index is safe though the posts I reserved for my future updates disappeared as did the Res on some other FF. But you should hear some of the members cry murder, they are behaving as though they have been stripped of rank and are demoted. Absolutely hilarious.

But the one good thing I have learnt, do not use the word "Res"😆

All the best for your studies.

Best,
Nyna

Will be back with an update on your comment, Nyna!

My laptop is dying out of charge...!!😭

Edit:

Hey Nyna, too lazy to charge my laptop. So just texting from mobile. Much more efficient way than forgetting the Res comments😆

I can imagine those cries. But it does hurt to see your Res posts gone and you don't know which chapter you are yet to read and comment. I had liked your idea of keeping all updates in a row but with this cleaning regime, looks we have to search for the updates.(Note to self: I am yet to read FM updates post Chapter 7.2)

My studies are going well. Just that the deadlines are crazily set on Sunday midnight. So not able to concentrate on anything else over those weekends. Well, time slips away when we are not looking. Need to be more watchful (pun intended 😉) Hope your work life is going smooth.

Yes, over the weekend, you will have the climax, promise. 😊

Cheers

Sharon

Edited by Sparkler8 - 8 years ago