FF: Whimsical Corporation [Completed] {New cover by Nyna} - Page 37

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

That's great to know, dear! ❤️

It's going to be an all out attack (I hope!)😉

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

That is the best editing that I like, when a story is edited a bit, to have a sequelAnd I trust you that you would not leave an unnecessary cliffhanger. We have anyway got more (22 chapters instead of 20) and the promise of a sequel.

We will wail, though how patiently, is anybody's guess.

Best,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

That is the best editing that I like, when a story is edited a bit, to have a sequelAnd I trust you that you would not leave an unnecessary cliffhanger. We have anyway got more (22 chapters instead of 20) and the promise of a sequel.

We will wail, though how patiently, is anybody's guess.

Best,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And I am first, did not even go to read it, not giving up this position. Will get back after I read in peace, later in the night.

Unres, almost a week later.

So Ragini and Laksh sort out their differences / misunderstandings / intentions over lunch and you made us miss the whole conversation. I was sort of looking forward to it, especially since I know the spoiler (walking into the sunset).

One quick question, okay make that two - who was the earlier CEO who agree that Fican had to be dismissed and why did he seem hesitant / uncomfortable to let Ragini know if whom he suspects of helping Fican? Does it tie up anyway as a surprise / not so surprise element in the magical war?

Magic tricks and true magic - beautifully explained - which leads me to wonder, maybe there is magic, you know sometimes when we feel a slight change in the air or a subtle shift in the light (maybe that is the day dreaming me, hoping that there is indeed a magical world around us as though the everyday common place miracles are not enough.)

I am now all agog for the "rocket sized" surprise planned for Fican - trust Sanskaar to do the maximum damage and Laksh can be depended upon for the fireworks. Magical war, here we come😆

Best,

Nyna

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Wow amazing update

Originally posted by: Anahita_Leve

Dear Sharon,

That was one hell of a fight. It was well written, crisp, and I was imagining the beach and the scene whole reading. I imagined Fican as someone like Loki, his appearance is just like that. I wish someone to make a movie on this book. I would watch at least for the magical fights.

Thanks for this marvellous attempt.

Love,
Dyuti