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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

I am first...

...and I loved it. Will be back, soon.

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: kriti_sologar
okkk so this is something different that I am reading but nevertheless sounds very interesting, you have managed to put the original characters into this story with the addition of some new ones as well...so Swara is basically the same kinda person in the show but more independent and modern...ohh her boss Karen is really a witch...she is such a meanie...welll well so Swara finds Sanskaar handsome and calls him soo...soo the connection between them is already there...hahahaha Laksha was not so discreet when following her, she noticed him alright...the email part kinda reminded me about the HP movie when he is continuously getting letters because he is not responding...moving on so Swara finally meets them as is not as surprised as they expected her to be after meeting so many magical creatures...so Swara is extraordinary ordinary person...hope that sounded all right...hahaah...it sounds to be an very interesting story and I cant wait to read further...

Hi Kriti,

This is totally a different universe setting. Except for the four, Swara,Sanskaar, Ragini and Lakshya, rest are all new.. well I have added Uttara because she is just a cutie and I loved her character until the CV butchered her

Swara only noticed Lakshya on the train. However, they have been following her much before that. Just imagine someone stalking you for weeks and you didn't know how and where they found information about you.. that's creepy..

Well, yes.Swara is extraordinary ordinary. Until then, she has been thinking she is just another fly in the big city but now she is more special than she knew.

The chapter is up. Hope you will like it.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear Sharon...
Wow what a magically introduction to this chapter this whole corporation meeting was awesome...

Seemed that award is truly unique and that Mr handsome is truly out there to impress her like she is by him...

I loved the whole killer conference interview setup it add so much spice to the story...and her answer to lakhs looks had me in stiches seems she is still witty...

The ending or cliffhanger was amazing for I hope she takes the job because she is curious to learn more...mossed evil Karen. ..

Update soon..

Raz

Hi Razia

Thank you dear..😊

Haha I like the phrase "killer conference interview setup". This chapter is the key to the whole plot as this is where we are introduced to the world of magic and MSI. Glad that you like the concept.

Cheers

Sharon

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: StarySKY
Dear Sharon

Finally I got to read all the chapters ..
Sorry got busy in the last to weeks and I was saving the story for the Sunday morning ..

I loved every bit of this story .. it is intriguing and thrilling story ..
I love this kind of stories , the one with magic and so on ..

All the characters seems interesting .. Sanskar, Lakshya and Ragini

And Swara is one of rare humans whom magic can't affect them , Wow
( hmmm not sure which one I would choose not been affected by magic or having the ability to use magic .. it really hard to choose )

Waiting for next ..
And hopefully I would write more detailed comment ..

Love
Khushi

Hi Khushi

No worries dear.. we all have our commitments.

I am happy that you like the concept with the supernatural elements.

That's a dilemma Swara is facing too. Being utterly without magic doesn't seem to be special, and in fact boring and depressing. Then again, if it's that boring why does Lakshya and the rest of MSI treat her as a rare gem? Swara would find an answer to that as we move into a couple of updates.

Will wait for your detailed comments.

Cheers

Sharon

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Wow amazing update after a killer interview to a intense showdown loving this magical update...

Loved the bold swara and how she told Karen to get stuffed...seems that sanskaar has woven his magical charm on swara once again...roses I see have made another return...

Seems that swara is indeed curious to know more about him as he is worried about her...

Loved lakhs convo and the gentleman manner he cleared her worry although I have a feeling her true guardian is none other then sanskaar...

Beautiful speltastic update...

Wairing to read more...

Razia

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

woohooo she finally quit d job...i guess d last straw broke d camel's back...ohhh I am excited about her joining MSI...loved d update dear...thnx fr d pm...

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@__nidhi__

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

I am liking the story so far.

The way you have described Swara's emotions in every situation is awesome.

I am waiting for your story to be unfolded soon.

And one more thing I'll not be able to comment on your work regularly due to my work. but once in a while I'll do

Update soon

And do pm me.

Love,

Nidhi.

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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

nice chapter loved it...woah swara actually ditched evil karen...awesome superb ... love Moumita

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
I am first...

...and I loved it. Will be back, soon.

Wow Nyna.. I hadnt even sent my pm and you reserved..

This is a long read, I know. So i will wait patiently for your comment 😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: raaz19
Wow amazing update after a killer interview to a intense showdown loving this magical update...
Loved the bold swara and how she told Karen to get stuffed...seems that sanskaar has woven his magical charm on swara once again...roses I see have made another return...
Seems that swara is indeed curious to know more about him as he is worried about her...

Loved lakhs convo and the gentleman manner he cleared her worry although I have a feeling her true guardian is none other then sanskaar...

Beautiful speltastic update...

Wairing to read more...

Razia

Hi Razia,

Glad you like it, dear!

It was a totally non magical showdown 😉

Sanskaar is a mystery I am trying very hard to not disclose everything.. however his actions do speak a lot.

Who is whose guardian, we will get to know. More coming up soon..

Cheers

Sharon