SwaSan / RagLak Vignette - Litost - Uptd. Page 5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: elsanna

Finally I completed this one also😆

Well nynu di...how do you always manage to give such a brilliant piece👏

The agony of 4 leads you described very well...most painful was of...well not able to compare here as each one of them have suffered a lot...there life was so twisted from beginning to the very end...😳

Tani

Originally posted by: ria2794

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Harpreet,

Thank you. As I wrote in the preface it was an experiment for me too and I was worried if I could do justice to RagLak. With your words, I am content.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Nynu. 😳

Read it dear. It was so beautifully written about all the 4 - Swara, Sanskar, Ragini and Laksh. 😃
Will unres tomorrow dear. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Sanskar :-
What he feels about his Bade Papa and Bari Maa is really very true. He loves and respects them more than his own parents (not that he doesn't loves and respects his own parents), but his Bade Papa and Badi Maa is always partial towards him and his cousin bro Laksh. 😭 All Sanskar wanted was a brotherly bond between him and his cousins Adarsh and Laksh, but he didn't get that too. 😔 After Ragini's evil deeds and heinous allegations against him, he realized that they can be friends anymore. 😔 Nothing to say about Kavita! 🤢 And Swara?? 😭 The one person, whom he loved so much, left him due to misunderstandings between them! She mistrusted him for her sister, that sister, who tried to kill her twice and even performed her 'shraadh'!! 😭

That was true, finally Sanskaar realises that irrespective of how much he loves anyone in his life, he is never the first in their affections - it is such a tragedy for someone who gives his all and more, in every relation, he never gets either an equal or equivalent return of that love and faith. When it comes to choose, for whatever reason, he is never the chosen one.😭 That is why I always see the shades of Karna (from the MB) in him.

Laksh :-
In order to take revenge from Ragini, he married Kavya (wrong descision), who wrercked his family. And also due to his wrong decision, SwaSan's relation were at risk! 😭 He misunderstood Swara that she ran from their wedding, he himself married Ragini. Although he couldn't accept Ragini as his wife, he didn't believed Swara either. 😕 Due to his mistrust, he lost her friendship. 😔 He even used his cousin sister Uttara as his pawn to take revenge from Ragini and poor Uttara had to bear the burnt. 😔 His parents always supported him in his each and every decision, but still he couldn't be the son they wanted.😔 Sanskar, his cousin brother, his idol, but still he didn't even think twice to mistrust him. 😔 Its true that he can't love Ragini like the way she loves him, although had grown to love her, after she changed, she even almost gave her life for saving him, but still he left her alone. 😔

Laksh - he is a tragedy created for himself, blessed with always being the first choice, of his parents, brothers, Uttara, his Chachi and Chacha, Ragini and even Swara for that matter, and yet is never able to be true to any of them. Impulsive and brash, he does have remorse and tries to make up for his lapses, but somehow ends up hurting everyone.

Swara :-
What she thinks about her Maa and Baba is absolutely true. 😔 She always believes and trust her sister Ragini, more than what she should, even more than Sanskar, who was always there for her through thick and thin. 😭 She realized that what she felt for Laksh was not love, but a mere attraction. And the most important person in her life, her Sanskar, whom she should have her trust and faith, she didn't trust him when he needed her the most and she regrets her decision of not having faith in him. 😭

Swara, IMO, is one confused soul, not sure if she should choose the right love or the right thing. She is so desperate for a family that she cannot understand that sometimes the definition of family differs from person to person and at other times, your family is your biggest enemy. Till she realises that there does not appear much hope for her.

Ragini :-
She schemed against her own sister, Swara, for her love for Laksh, who in turn betrayed her by marrying Kavya. And when Swara and Sanskar supported her, she understood how she had wronged them before. 😔 What she thinks about her Maa is true too. And she also realized that how she lost the right to be Sanskar's friend anymore. 😔 She also realized that her Dadi hated Swara and Shomi more than she loved her, that's why she always supported her when she wronged Swara. 😕 And Laksh, for whom she did her evil deeds before, went against her own sister too, left her when she needed him the most, but she still feels that she will always love him, no matter what. 😕 She also regretted that she wronged SwaSan again when she along with Laksh performed SwaSan 'anteem sanskar.' But it was too late then. 😭

Of all the four, she is the only one who knows what she wants, just does not realise how wrong she is in choosing for to get it. She gives it her all, and still it is too little because of the way she goes about it. And she does try to set things right but then it is always a case of :too little, too late.

And finally all the 4 realized that
Sanskar :- No matter what, he could never let Swara go away from him. 😳
Swara :- Even after Sanskar being her rays of light, she regretted that she have actually let him go from her life. 😭
Ragini :- After what Laksh did to her, she reluctantly thinks that she should let him go away from her for some time. 😔
Laksh :- He remorsefully thinks that even after Ragini loves and support him before anyone else, he have let her go away from him, which he shouldn't have done. 😔

Their retrospection was nice, right, they finally understood where they had gone wrong. Just hope it lasts long enough for them to start working towards making amends.

Nynu dearest, I really loved the way how u wrote and described about all 4, i.e., Sanskar, Swara, Ragi and Laksh's agony. 😃 I loved reading it. ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃

Aheli, darling, and I loved the way you summed my tale, beautifully done, I read your comment and found it so lovely that I went back to read my own story😳
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: preet_907

Dear Nyna,

You don't need to worry. Cause you've absolutely nailed this concept.😊

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed @7. 😃

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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<font color="#3300ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Replied in blue above,</font>

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<font color="#3300ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love,</font>

<font color="#3300ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Second that ..👏😳 A superb one

Edited to add 😉I love that stormy BG and B& W just gives it the required depth .. and those lines absolutely suit ..Wish I was this quick and good in my inItial stages of PS😆