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Originally posted by: NitaReid

I am here and will read first thing tomorrow ..Too sleepy

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Wow .. I am literally in awe with the insightful approach given to each character .. and how you weaved it across those lines for each one of them. Vignette .. a small illustration which fades into its background without a definite border and its brought out so so well👏 👏 and those siggies how well you combined those with little fade effect ⭐️👍🏼...Wish Cv's know there characters this well ⭐️⭐️

Falling short of words .. I am never good at them😆...This is such lovely piece of writing banagram ..❤️❤️🤗

Love'

Lucky

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Nynu .. 🤗

P.S

Please forgive me for the below words if I wrote something not right .. I was shocked and surpised when I wrote it .. my jaw did reach the floor .. 😲

Do not worry, I am going to take it as a compliment😳😳

OMG , OMG , OMG .. I can't believed Nynu , you did write every idea I thought about , you know the one I said before .. technically you added more parts and ideas than mine .. but the thing that you did write all my thoughts and everything .. OMG

And the song " Let Her Go " .. for God sake ,, I took some part of it for Sanskar and Swara's parts in mine but chose other one for Laksh and Ragini .. but the fact you used it .. OMG

I am totally shocked .. they way how they feel and their thoughts .. it the same How I imagined it ..

😲😲

It is an amazing coincidence, I am surprised too - but I did not change the verses, somehow the complete verse fit each character quite well, as I interpreted.

You played on the same notes as me ..

BUT ..

To tell the truth yours is amazing .. and way better than mine .. I wouldn't had write it like this .. I am so happy cause of that ..

I am not sure that mine is better than yours, because I have not read your version. But even then, most importantly, I am sure there would never be a question of which is better, both would be equally nice, though very different😊

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Oh .. I just loved it so so so much ..

I loved the title of the story , Loved every Picture , Loved every word you wrote .. loved everything

my favourite parts was Sanskar and Laksh parts .. but all of it was so great ..

I loved the parts of the song you choose for each one , and it did fit ..

I really loved the ending ..

I am so happy you loved it and especially about Laksh (he is great to write in my fics or in Viji's but the serial version is very tough to write about). The ending, is actually a sort of in the air, but that should be what each of them realises, right?

Actually words are not enough for this magnificent work of yours .. * a bow down *

👏

And I am quite speechless with your praise too.😳😳😳

Love

Khushi

P.SS

If you don't mind I am ready to PM you some of the parts of my OSs that I draft .. I would love to have a long discussion with you about this .. I never in my life met someone think in the same way as I am as you did ( come to think of it , it did happen 3 time .. right ?! ) ..

Go ahead, send it over - we can have as long a discussion as we want. 😊