The Swara Narratives--'Solaris Rising'--Part 2 UPDT PG 12 04/11/16

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Late Again😕 but I am here ..

Solaris - I love it😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m
Late Again😕 but I am here ..

Solaris - I love it😳

Lucky my dear... 🤗🤗

Not late at all darling...I haven't posted the OS yet. 😆 The Preface and A/N is up, setting out the theme of the OS.

I hope to be back later today evening, but time is a little tight as I have a concert to go for. And I am doing inky-pinky-ponky, heart versus head, with two alternative endings. 😆 Most likely, I might land up posting it tomorrow. 🤔

I love that you loved 'Solaris'. 😉 😆 Another possibility was 'Apricus'...also means 'Sunny' in Latin. 😳 But I thought 'Solaris Rising' had a better ring to it than 'Apricus Ascendant'. 😉

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Post both alternative endings? 😆 😉 Hmmm...Ok let me think. But they may contradict each other, so I am kind of veering towards choosing one now. Or maybe a mix between the two alternative extremes. 😳 Glad you loved the title. 😊

Saal mubarak to you, too. 🤗🤗

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

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mix between the two alternative extremes where it's not happy or sad but hopeful...I love when u do that... 😳 or u can post whichever wins the bettle between heart and mind... They both will be beautiful on their own way I m sure... 😳

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Nupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Now how am I supposed to wait for the OS, Viji?

Seriously I can't wait to read THIS Swara who will work on her most important relationship with the most deserving person of her life! Instead of her running behind some unworthy, undeserving, worst creatures, Swara will spend & invest her time, love, adoration, care, devotion & all emotions on that one & only person who loves her more than anything & everything, for whom she is the whole world - Her husband, Sanskaar!

I will try to wait for the OS as patiently as I can manage Bt still I'm praying that you will come up with this sooner than soonest!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Helee
mix between the two alternative extremes where it's not happy or sad but hopeful...I love when u do that... 😳 or u can post whichever wins the bettle between heart and mind... They both will be beautiful on their own way I m sure... 😳

I have fixed on the hopeful alternative. 😳 😉 Will be back soonest I can.

Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Now how am I supposed to wait for the OS, Viji?
Seriously I can't wait to read THIS Swara who will work on her most important relationship with the most deserving person of her life! Instead of her running behind some unworthy, undeserving, worst creatures, Swara will spend & invest her time, love, adoration, care, devotion & all emotions on that one & only person who loves her more than anything & everything, for whom she is the whole world - Her husband, Sanskaar!

Nupur sweetheart 🤗🤗

I will certainly make her devote her heartfelt care and adoration on the most important relationship of her life; with the person who loves her above all else, more than life itself. 😳 Its time she reciprocated the intensity and depth of that emotion.

I will try to wait for the OS as patiently as I can manage Bt still I'm praying that you will come up with this sooner than soonest!

Feeling really bad I'm making you wait. 😕 Just that I am juggling multiple commitments today. Will be back soonest I can. 🤗

My Dearest Nupur 🤗🤗

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Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey Viji,

The title of this story is beautiful, just like the concept..Swara who is ready to take every punishment,go down any length,do anything,sacrifice anything,put at stake her very being to see him happy,to get him back,even stay away from him if this is what he wants,always wanted to see this Swara who loves Sanskar with this much depth..
Would love to read how Swara shows the intensity of her love and faith..that she will keep him above everything just like him with all her being..

If possible please post both the alternatives..coz I know each one will be written in their own way..and also because everything you write has an unexplainable beauty to it..

Love,
Piya

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

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After two papers, heaps of revision and an eye throbbing headache making its presence known...I'm ready to drawn myself in some fictional elixir...what could be better than your writing? Pour me a pint, no wait, let's make it half a dozen😛