The Swara Narratives--'Solaris Rising'--Part 2 UPDT PG 12 04/11/16

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: showrav24
Hi viji dear 🤗
How r u & how is family & kids.
part 2 also beautiful dear loved how u picturised both pov
like how swara trying to mend their relations & sanskar stand in sangeet .
their morning convo sanskar feel heart out his emotion
book lines which sanskar underline to read swara is beautiful dear i loved those line & its hits hard swara very much by her realisation how much & deeply sanskar loved her sanskar is very much right to expect she also loved him that way.
u know i wished cvs show 10% of u write😊 but cvs r champion of disappointing & destroy good track.
Take care dear
Bye.🤗

Hey Showrav my dear pal 🤗🤗

I am doing quite well, yaar, thanks. All well with my family also, touch wood. 😳

I am so happy to know that you loved the portrayal of both Sanskaar and Swara's emotions. Those lines from the book are among my favorites, I was really thrilled to know that you found them very apt for SwaSan, for this setting. I was going all 😳 ☺️ at your very warm words about my writing.

You really made my week very special with your warm words.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: luana
Viji..first take a bow..and now wohh..i just can't describe ur writing..u r so incredible writer..i love to read ur fics..
coming to first part of solaris rising..loved the way you made swara to relises the importance of sanskaar & the flashback was soo 😳 ..swara went to raglak room & asked laksh to get whiskey for her..heheh..laksh's manifestation was so funny..first time loved the bond of swaragini & swara & laksh..swara went farmhouse to comfort sanskaar wooo..i can't see sanskaar in so much pain😭 The last part was something else to describe..really want swara to have the love , the ador , the faith in sanskaar the way he have them on her..the last but not the least point to notice swasan in eacother's arms..the most perfect place in the whole world..their own blissful world😳 i wish to get something like this in real show..
well have to read ur other fics also to rejoicing my mood..
loads of love..Viji
Keep writting like this😊

Hey Ramisa 🤗🤗

So very touched by your feedback, and thrilled to know that you loved this 2S a lot. I really wanted to make Swara realize Sanskaar's importance in her life; the fact that she needs to prioritize his emotions and interests as well.

Happy to know you liked Swara's idea to make Sanskaar stop drinking. 😆 😉 I thought this would be among the very few things which would actually make him stop. Poor guy used to abhor the smell and taste of alcohol earlier, but he had slipped into this habit to dull that constant, sharp heartache which was plunging him into a maelstrom of anguish.

So glad to know you loved the concluding scene on the terrace as well----the spot of so many tender and passionate memories for SwaSan. 😳 Very true, Swara needs to place Sanskaar's interests and feelings first in her list of priorities a lot of the time----I really wanted to make her realize that she adores him and has as much faith in him as he does in her; its just that somehow she always tended to take their relationship a bit for granted, in her pursuit to make things right for others. With her newly dawned realization, I would like to believe she would not do that again. 😳

Your warm words really made my day. 🤗🤗

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Viji...sweety

I have bookmarked this story on mobile for sooo long...it feels great to read it...i know im commenting late...only your stories i kept pending.n delaying..coz i dont have enough words to give justive to your master pieces..but i will try to give my few words...

This 2s was stupendous...all flashbacks...the determinatoon of swara to set everything back was cleverly handled n penned.. serial swara has disappointed us alot..but yours swara covered it all...she realised n tried to amend her relationship...i l adore sanky coz he gave her chance...n time ...all he wanted her to keep him her's first priority like he does...he was calm n gentle in explaining his point...liked swara reaction..n her promise to try to love him like he do...ahhh sweetest scene..

It touched my heart...highlight was whisky part..aww i enjoyed reading that...love u for this...do give more..your stories are addictive...

Talia