The Swara Narratives--'Solaris Rising'--Part 2 UPDT PG 12 04/11/16 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Hi Viji,
Thanks. I've already read some of your works when I wasn't an active member on this forum. Really liked them. Would like to read more of your works, the ones which I haven't read yet as & when my time permits & will definitely share my feedbacks with you.
Your friend
Preet😃

Hey Preet 🤗🤗


Very glad to know you loved it. 😊 😳 Thanks for your warm words.
There's just the 2 parts yaar...the story concludes with part 2. I do not envisage further parts to this story arc.

If you are interested and time permits, I have written several other SwaSan fics. All my completed works are on my index. Link to my index is on my siggy, at the bottom of all my forum posts.
You could read when convenient, and let me know what you felt. Your feedback means a lot.😊

Cheers

Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Hey Aheli sweetheart 🤗


I will reply on that tomorrow. You made my evening with your warm words. 😳☺️

Lots of Love

Viji



My Dearest Aheli 🤗🤗


Caught up in some commitments today. Shall do my utmost to reply later today or else tomorrow.

Love

Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago


Hey Preet 🤗

That's nice to know, that you've read some of my previous work on SwaSan, and really liked them. 😊😳 No rush, read the others when convenient and time permitting.

Cheers

Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum




My Dearest Aheli🤗🤗


Caught up in some commitments today. Shall do my utmost to reply later today or else tomorrow.

Love

Viji



Yes Viji siso take ur time. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks a lot. 🤗🤗 Very glad to know you loved it. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi viji dear 🤗
How r u & how is family & kids.
part 2 also beautiful dear loved how u picturised both pov
like how swara trying to mend their relations & sanskar stand in sangeet .
their morning convo sanskar feel heart out his emotion
book lines which sanskar underline to read swara is beautiful dear i loved those line & its hits hard swara very much by her realisation how much & deeply sanskar loved her sanskar is very much right to expect she also loved him that way.
u know i wished cvs show 10% of u write😊 but cvs r champion of disappointing & destroy good track.
Take care dear
Bye.🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Showrav 🤗


So glad to know you loved Part 2; I will reply in detail as soon as I finish posting Part 2 of 'The Return of the King'. 😊


Loads of Love,

----Viji



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Posted: 9 years ago
Viji..first take a bow..and now wohh..i just can't describe ur writing..u r so incredible writer..i love to read ur fics..
coming to first part of solaris rising..loved the way you made swara to relises the importance of sanskaar & the flashback was soo 😳 ..swara went to raglak room & asked laksh to get whiskey for her..heheh..laksh's manifestation was so funny..first time loved the bond of swaragini & swara & laksh..swara went farmhouse to comfort sanskaar wooo..i can't see sanskaar in so much pain😭 The last part was something else to describe..really want swara to have the love , the ador , the faith in sanskaar the way he have them on her..the last but not the least point to notice swasan in eacother's arms..the most perfect place in the whole world..their own blissful world😳 i wish to get something like this in real show..
well have to read ur other fics also to rejoicing my mood..
loads of love..Viji
Keep writting like this😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Yes Viji siso take ur time. 😳



Getting down to my reply today, Aheli sweetheart. 😳 Its been quite hectic of late. 😊

Love,

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 2 Viji dear. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Viji, each and every time I read ur works, u make me speechless!! 😳 Such a wonderful and brilliant update. 👏 😉 I loved the slow but gradual progress in SwaSan relation and their reducing anger and ego clash. 😃 Now Sanskar was not that much angry at Swara and Swara took out opportunities to bump on Sanskar on the pretext of Uttara's wedding's planning. 😉 SwaSan staring at each other during Uttara's Sangeet day. 😉 OMG!! Their dress' description! I'm just imagining them in that dress. They will look heavenly in that attire! Oh god! That creepy Ronak!! 🤢 Loved they way Sanskar threatened and broke that creep's fingers for daring to forcefully touch his wife, his Swara!! 😉 Also loved his curt reply to Gayatri. 😛 Then SwaSan's early morning moment in MM's terrace. 😳 OMG! Sanskar's statement when he said that he was setting her free from...and then paused, I felt as if my breathing stopped for a while, thinking that whether he was setting her free from their marriage!! 😲 😳 But felt relief (not complete relief though) when he said that he wanted to give a break to their relation and want both of them realize each other's importance, love, trust and faith in either one's life. Those paragraphs from the book were delight to read. 😳 And Swara's reaction was awesome. I'm so happy with her matured and sensible answer. 😃 And I very much loved the way both were cocooned with each other under the morning sun after sorting out their differences with a new ray of hope from their relationship. I loved the ending very much!! ❤️
Will we get a epilogue too dear?? 😉 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.




My Dearest Aheli, 🤗


I always feel so very touched and blessed after I read your replies. The fact that you enjoyed reading my portrayal of SwaSan, their emotions and thoughts----that really is a lovely compliment. It is always a pleasure to have your take on my chapters & updates. 😳


In this chapter, I wanted to show the gradual rapprochement between SwaSan, the steady and incremental movement back from all that pain, anguish and betrayal; to the slow dawning of a new hope, a new dawn. After all, it is not so easy to put together trust and faith which has been so badly shaken. Things don't get solved so easily with just a sorry, it takes time and consistent effort---which the Swara in this Fic is more than ready to devote. After all, she adores Sanskaar so very much, its just that she took some time to realize her own priorities. 😳

Thriled that you liked the SwaSan moments during that creep Ronak's horrible behavior. Sunny is the dashing hero always na...and how can he tolerate someone trying to trouble his Swara. 😉 They handled Gayathri well----I was so happy to hear you say that. I feel in such cases, elders need to be tolf politely but firmly when their stand is wrong. No point in encouraging wrong beliefs and opinions.

I put a lot of my heart and soul into that SwaSan scene the next morning, at the terrace---the scene of so many of their tender and romantic moments. It made my day to know that you loved it so much, dear. 😳 Those lines from the book 'Ballad of the sad Cafe'---very glad you loved them. They are among my favorites, struck me as very apt for SwaSan and the situation they are now in.

As to epilogue---No Dear, haven't planned one. Decided to leave it at this juncture, with the warmth of a new hope streaming into SwaSan's lives. 😳


Lots of Love,

----Viji
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