The Swara Narratives--'Solaris Rising'--Part 2 UPDT PG 12 04/11/16 - Page 13

Hello viji dear
what can I say about update I already said in ur new thread that anything u write swasan I will loved it to core.
Just finished part 1 and it's beautiful.u describe swara side nice what I want in the show but I have doubt about it on the show ever show it.loved her trying to bring back sanskar & I loved her dhamki typical wife & sanskar dare to override it after all she is Mrs.sanskar maheshari.
& I like u & Nita convo about swara & sanskar & I agree almost every things.
sorry dear for late reply & my word I not good in talking or convey my feeling I m introvert type person.
Will forgive me in future if I late to reply u know in forum lots of stories going on sometimes I forget what I read or not still pending many stories to read.
Take care dear
Bye
love u buddy.

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

My Dear Soumya 🤗🤗

So happy to know you liked Swara's portrayal here. Well, this is how I envision her and would love to see her----as a person who makes mistakes just like the rest of us, but then realizes it, feels remorseful about it, and does her utmost to make amends. I would love to think that she feels the compelling need to assuage and soothe Sanskaar's pain, the anguish she inflicted on him with her short sighted decision. And I would love to see her showing a lot more of introspection and perspective, reflecting on her role in what went wrong.

Sanskaar's cologne...😉😳. Yeah, I've mentioned it in a few fics, not all. I choose either Hugo Boss 'Man' or 'Blue Energy' of Marks and Spencer, as Sanskaar's scent. 😉 So this would be fairly constant across the fics were I did mention his cologne. 😆

These are my Hubby's favorite colognes...or rather I should say, my favorites which I pick out for him. A recent favorite (of his and mine) is Bvlgari Man in Black Cologne. 😉 It is a rather more intense scent than the previous two, which are more woodsy / spicy. 😉

Loads of Love

Viji

they will never go this deep, i am sure, they can even make sanskar apologize

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello viji dear
what can I say about update I already said in ur new thread that anything u write swasan I will loved it to core.
Just finished part 1 and it's beautiful.u describe swara side nice what I want in the show but I have doubt about it on the show ever show it.loved her trying to bring back sanskar & I loved her dhamki typical wife & sanskar dare to override it after all she is Mrs.sanskar maheshari.
& I like u & Nita convo about swara & sanskar & I agree almost every things.
sorry dear for late reply & my word I not good in talking or convey my feeling I m introvert type person.
Will forgive me in future if I late to reply u know in forum lots of stories going on sometimes I forget what I read or not still pending many stories to read.
Take care dear
Bye
love u buddy.

Originally posted by: soumya04

they will never go this deep, i am sure, they can even make sanskar apologize

but more than anything i have problem with the way they start the track, swara thought sanskar kidnapped lucky? which theory she applied exactly?😕

your hubby's colognes, that explains everything😆

Res for part 2 Viji dear. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Viji, each and every time I read ur works, u make me speechless!! 😳 Such a wonderful and brilliant update. 👏 😉 I loved the slow but gradual progress in SwaSan relation and their reducing anger and ego clash. 😃 Now Sanskar was not that much angry at Swara and Swara took out opportunities to bump on Sanskar on the pretext of Uttara's wedding's planning. 😉 SwaSan staring at each other during Uttara's Sangeet day. 😉 OMG!! Their dress' description! I'm just imagining them in that dress. They will look heavenly in that attire! Oh god! That creepy Ronak!! 🤢 Loved they way Sanskar threatened and broke that creep's fingers for daring to forcefully touch his wife, his Swara!! 😉 Also loved his curt reply to Gayatri. 😛 Then SwaSan's early morning moment in MM's terrace. 😳 OMG! Sanskar's statement when he said that he was setting her free from...and then paused, I felt as if my breathing stopped for a while, thinking that whether he was setting her free from their marriage!! 😲 😳 But felt relief (not complete relief though) when he said that he wanted to give a break to their relation and want both of them realize each other's importance, love, trust and faith in either one's life. Those paragraphs from the book were delight to read. 😳 And Swara's reaction was awesome. I'm so happy with her matured and sensible answer. 😃 And I very much loved the way both were cocooned with each other under the morning sun after sorting out their differences with a new ray of hope from their relationship. I loved the ending very much!! ❤️
Will we get a epilogue too dear?? 😉 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 2 Viji dear. 😳

That was a nice one Viji. A BEAUTIFUL piece of work. Waiting for the next part..😊

Originally posted by: preet_907

That was a nice one Viji. A BEAUTIFUL piece of work. Waiting for the next part..😊

I've never known one could love a piece of writing so much as I love this conclusion...❤️
Will be back 🤗

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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No dear, I will not be writing a 3rd part here.

I might, at some stage, write a sequel in the AU setting I had written earlier...to 'The Color Black' and 'The Color Green'. But I am not certain, the only thing I have decided is the title 'The Color Red'. 😳😉

It will not be in the continuum of 'Solaris Rising' though. It will follow on from where 'The Color Green' ended.

Loads and Loads of Love ❤️

Viji