The Apsaras and the Gandharva-A SwaSan slapstick comedy OS-A/N PG 9

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Viji sanya can be the 7th apsara since 6th place is already booked by me . Sanskar in the heaven is very happy to see me u know 😉 🤣

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Viji sanya can be the 7th apsara since 6th place is already booked by me . Sanskar in the heaven is very happy to see me u know 😉 🤣

Oops, I forgot that you had booked the trip and slot before itself. 😆🤣 Yes of course Nivi...you are the 6th. And I think you will ensure that the initial 5 Apsaras are displaced, pronto. And leave Sunny boy only to you. Till Sanya joins you of course. And some others from the forum too I guess. 😉🤣

Happy trip 😆👍🏼

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Viji,

Guess what! I'm in heaven with sunny boy beside me 😆. And I could not find any of the apsaras here. Guess, they ran away knowing that I have come. Poor souls, what can they do? After all, I'm so sinskari for our sanskari sanskar 😉 . And yeah, there is enough place for other sanskar ki deewanis. But, I have ensured that other deewanis don't take this deewani mastani's place😉 🤣.

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Viji dearest! 🤗
The theme song for our Sunny boy is...!! 🤣 🤣 And very apt too. 😉 😛
A Very Happy And safe Diwali To U And Ur Family Dear!!! 🤗 🤗
With love,
Aheli.

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piccola1

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

😆😆 You have sooo lost it, Viji..And so have we, for loving this new groove !😃😆😆

Haha..can just imagine it ! Thank u for a howlarious Diwali gift 😛 and wish to get many more!

Have a great Diwali !🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: piccola1
😆😆 You have sooo lost it, Viji..And so have we, for loving this new groove !😃😆😆
Haha..can just imagine it ! Thank u for a howlarious Diwali gift 😛 and wish to get many more!

Have a great Diwali !🤗

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Happy Diwali to you and yours. 🤗

Oh I have completely lost it. 😆 I SO wanted to write this, I was getting a kick out of writing Swara burning in jealousy 😆

Also served as a light hearted break from some intense and angst ridden pieces I'd been writing just prior. Very glad you loved it. 😳😊 And thrilled to know I could make you laugh. 😊

Lots of Love

Viji

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Bwahahahaha 🤣😈

I just LOVED making Swara burn and burn----watching Apsaras and then Cavity, drape themselves all over Sunny boy. 😉 😆 Oh yes, he certainly has floored Rambha, Menaka, Urvashi, Ghrutachi, Tilottama and the rest. 😳 😆

Charulatha was always ready to answer exactly what Swara Ji asked, no? 😆 She asked how Cavity dared to try and feed Sanskaar an orange slice from her lips----and Latha promptly told her austerely that after all, it was not an orange, it was a tangerine!! 😆😆 I was actually very happy with that line when I thought of it; I am so thrilled that it met with your seal of approval. 😉

Ahem...Nynu...Dhoti and Angavastra is only later, no? First when he comes out of the river, he is clad in only a damp towel...not a very large one at that. 😛 😳 ☺️ Aow Gawd, what is happening to my imagination!! 😉

As for Ragini---well, she would not be human if she did not wonder that at least a couple of times----whether she had, indeed, married the wrong brother. 😉 And we all know, she is much more of a realist than Swara; who for all her idealism, is rather woolly headed. 😕 But one thing to Ragini's credit, though the thought does strike her; Lucky always remains (to borrow the Idea Cellular jingle) her pumpkin, pumpkin; her honey bunny. 😆 😉

I am so overjoyed to know that you loved this one. Happy Diwali to you and yours, Nynu! And a couple of dozen hugs, kisses, tickles and squeezes, specially for the Cuddle Master. 🤗

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

Was reading it again, savouring it and simply grinning away to glory😆(also mostly visualising Sunny boy - dazzling away minus the angavastram, let the other cloth remain😉, though maybe it could be made a tad smaller😳 and am trying out the colour variations too.

I noticed that you mentioned the Parijata tree (I love those flowers, we had one in our garden in JSR, and would pick the fallen flowers early in the morning, despite the chill) and I cannot help mention - this flower also known as Shefali in Bengali (night flowering jasmine or the coral jasmine) is the official flower of West Bengal. 😊

So Swara had to see Sanskaar, surrounded by apsaras and apparently not missing her to realise her mistake. Even Ragini is sensible in this tale.

Hope the reel Swara realises this (dare we hope???)

And the Swara (Susanne) song is a blast🤣

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Nynu 🤗🤗

Trust you to notice that reference to the parijata tree. 🤗

Yeah...the night jasmine/ pavizha malli (in tamil) is indeed West Bengal's state flower. I had put a reference to this blossom, in 'Second Chances' too. It's one of my favorite flowers...apart from orchids, frangipani and hibiscus. 😊

Swara's realization in the serial. ...I don't know, Nynu. 😕 I don't know why they are showing her acting so combative with and borderline disdainful of Sunny. 😲😕 Some angst . ...some conflicted emotions of whether she had indeed made a monumental error...some pain and anguish seeing his transformation...this needs to be shown sooner rather than later. ...

I want a solid jealousy track for Swara. And not with some creepy, clingy, semi-bipolar weirdo like they made the zombie Cavity. I would like a genuinely smart and nice girl who perhaps Sujju or Ram introduce to Sunny, hoping to get him to move ahead in life. Or Uttara's friend, who used to crush on Sunny in the past. Someone who would awaken the natural possessiveness for Sanskaar within Swara, make her experience that eureka moment (complete with the light bulb emoji 😆😆).

I was toying with the idea of writing a monologue/narrative from Swara's side. Had the beginnings of the draft ready...the title too. But the issue is, my difficulty in connecting with her character just at present. I was able to connect much better with the portrayals of Sanskaar I had done in 'The Color Black' and 'Dark Storm'. Let's see...if I get enough mojo, I might write this one. 😕

About the 'O Swara'...song. 🤣 Yeah, I was convincing people at home that I've gone totally bonkers. 😆 I was grinning like the Cheshire Cat today morning, while framing those lines. 😉

Ahem...on your color choice of the dhoti . ...is it as per the intricate and vibrant color key you had posted for Guardian Angel, Angelic (Ad)Vice ? 😉😃 A Chartreuse one, perhaps? 😆 Or are you sticking with fuchsia pink or Cerulean? 😉

Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Viji dearest! 🤗
The theme song for our Sunny boy is...!! 🤣 🤣 And very apt too. 😉 😛
A Very Happy And safe Diwali To U And Ur Family Dear!!! 🤗 🤗
With love,
Aheli.

Hey Aheli 🤗🤗

Glad you loved the theme rhyme. 😆🤣 Now, whenever I sing 'O Susanna' to my kiddo, I would think of this alternative version. 😆

Lots of Love

Viji

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kamila.

@Seriously.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Hey viji... 🤗 ... Dear.. ohh I loved it.. oppsss i know I teSed somewhere i forgot the page no. And I doesn't have enough data to search that. So another comment.. i mean post. Sorry for the inconvenience..

Your sense of humour is awesome.. I laughed throughout.. and I enjoyed it.. how Sanskaar in heaven maids and angels were drooling over him... Ramba and I forgot her name sitting on either thighs.. I laughed imaging it.. and he is dhoti lol.. Swara Jealousy and latha.. man awesome.

That quote women's forgive their husbands when they are wrong.. soo Ture...

I enjoyed I enjoyed, I enjoyed...

Love you a loads...

Kam...