The Apsaras and the Gandharva-A SwaSan slapstick comedy OS-A/N PG 9

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hey viji... 🤗 ... Dear.. ohh I loved it.. oppsss i know I teSed somewhere i forgot the page no. And I doesn't have enough data to search that. So another comment.. i mean post. Sorry for the inconvenience..

Your sense of humour is awesome.. I laughed throughout.. and I enjoyed it.. how Sanskaar in heaven maids and angels were drooling over him... Ramba and I forgot her name sitting on either thighs.. I laughed imaging it.. and he is dhoti lol.. Swara Jealousy and latha.. man awesome.

That quote women's forgive their husbands when they are wrong.. soo Ture...

I enjoyed I enjoyed, I enjoyed...

Love you a loads...

Kam...

Hey Kam 🤗

Happy Deepawali 🤗

So very thrilled to know you loved this OS, and happy that this made you laugh. 😆 And I was going all 😳 at your warm words about my sense of humor. Means a lot.

Oh yes, I was so happy writing those scenes where Swara gets extremely jealous seeing Sunny surrounded by those drop dead gorgeous Apsaras. Menaka, Rambha , Urvashi , Ghrutachi & Tilottama 😆 Not to mention Cavity also who makes an entry on feed him tangerine slices. 🤣

Very glad to know that you enjoyed reading this so much.

Lots of Love

Viji

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srividhya87

@srividhya87

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

🤣🤣🤣 Couldnt control my giggling yaar..

it is hilarious..

Sanskaar is fully surrounded by beautiful ladies including cavity..

Swara's jealousy is unimaginable while Ragini is praising Sanskaar's goodlooks..

Song is simply superb..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: srividhya87
🤣🤣🤣 Couldnt control my giggling yaar..
it is hilarious..
Sanskaar is fully surrounded by beautiful ladies including cavity..
Swara's jealousy is unimaginable while Ragini is praising Sanskaar's goodlooks..
Song is simply superb..

Hey Srividhya 🤗🤗

Very glad to know that you loved this OS so much, and that it made you laugh a lot. 😆 I was giggling when I wrote this too. 🤣😆

Swara would be burning in jealousy, seeing Sanskaar surrounded by ravishing Apsaras. And Cavity too. 😆 And to add to her jealousy, Ragini states the obvious about Sunny's awesome looks. 😉😃

Glad you loved the modified version of the 'O Susanna' song. 🤣

Lots of Love

Viji

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Omg..what was that...
Amazing
Sara's dream oops nightmare was bang on..

And Ragini,,,,, married to the wrong brother..
Hahaha

Thanks

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Omg..what was that...
Amazing
Sara's dream oops nightmare was bang on..

And Ragini,,,,, married to the wrong brother..
Hahaha

Thanks

Hey Bharadwaj 🤗🤗

Very glad to know you loved this OS.

Cheers

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sneharay
🤣

Glad you loved it, Sneha 🤗

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Viji sorry yar just now saw your PM.. replied to that..Go-ahead use it..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
Viji sorry yar just now saw your PM.. replied to that..Go-ahead use it..

Thanks Leki. 🤗 Need to just figure out how to fit it in to my siggie dabba, as there is a 200 characters limit. I already have my index link and my 'Sanskaar Monologues' wala banner which Lucky made for me. 😳

Where are you these days? Not as active as you used to be...busy kya?

Love

Viji

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Tardis

@DreamOfEndless

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Dear Viji 🤗🤗

It is splendid, hilarious and very entertaining. 🤣😆

I could totally imagine Apsaras, Latha and even Kavita drooling over Sanskar like fangirls... Poor Swara had to tolerate all this😆...But as the saying goes - as you sow, so shall you reap... And what a climax, Ragini talking about Sanskar's blazing eyes😆... Et tu Ragini! The last thing I want is to Swara drown in the river again. But I am sure, just like Lord Krishna put the dream in Swara's head, he put the thought in Ragini's head... After all, it is all Krishna Leela😉.

Please write a second part for this if possible where this over-possessive and jealous Swara confronts Sanskar for his behavior in her dream and Sanskar has no clue about what she is talking about 😆. It would be nice to see how she professes her love to him. 😳

And thank you for writing this amid all this animosity between on-screen SwaSan... Belated Hapy Diwali. Hope you had the best Diwali...😊

- Tia

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Tardis

@DreamOfEndless

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

And yes, how could I forget to mention your awesome jingle about Sunny boy's inner thoughts. Sanskar must be in seventh heaven in the company of so many hot Apsaras.😉

Keep writing. Love you for this.🤗

- Tia

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