The Apsaras and the Gandharva-A SwaSan slapstick comedy OS-A/N PG 9

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: dreamy.tiara
And yes, how could I forget to mention your awesome jingle about Sunny boy's inner thoughts. Sanskar must be in seventh heaven in the company of so many hot Apsaras.😉
Keep writing. Love you for this.🤗

- Tia

Tia 🤗🤗

I had a very pleasant Diwali, thank you. Hope yours was wonderful too. 😊

So very happy to know you loved this light hearted take, and that it made you laugh. I was biting my lips to keep from laughing when I wrote it. 😆

And really glad to know you loved the modified version of ' O Susanna ', sung by Sanskaar as 'O Swara '. 🤣

Second part...yaar I think I might not be able to do that, not right now anyway. I am working on part 2 of the SwaSan 2S I am currently writing, and then have a 4S to complete as well. 😊

Am really touched with your warm words about my writing. You made my evening. 😳🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Viji darling...

This one was a treat..a delicious buffet..i just relish it...soo much...was giggling seeing swara condition...kavity (cavity) she happens to be in heaven too...i was shocked..i was super hillarious..even ragini was drooling over her jethji...i was dead in this part..pure fabulous...what should i say about sanky...not just apsaras...so many other girls like me...just adore him to the point of obsession...ahhh ...love him soo much...thank u for this...

Love

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Viji darling...
This one was a treat..a delicious buffet..i just relish it...soo much...was giggling seeing swara condition...kavity (cavity) she happens to be in heaven too...i was shocked..i was super hillarious..even ragini was drooling over her jethji...i was dead in this part..pure fabulous...what should i say about sanky...not just apsaras...so many other girls like me...just adore him to the point of obsession...ahhh ...love him soo much...thank u for this...

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Talia

Talia my dear 🤗🤗

I am so very happy to know that this made you laugh. 😆 I was giggling and grinning like an idiot all the while I was writing it. 🤣

I couldn't resist making Swara feel all jealous and green eyed with envy, seeing all those dazzlingly, sublimely beautiful apsaras draping themselves over her Sunny. And even Cavity was there, much to Swara's shock and dismay! 🤣 I could just imagine the expression on her face when Cavity yelled "Sanscaaarrr" 😆

Poor Ragini---She does love Lakshya a lot here of course, no doubts on that. She would never even dream of leaving him, ever. But sometimes, especially when Lakshya behaves in a immature and fickle manner, she can't help but have a fleeting thought---whether she fell for the wrong brother. 😉 😆 And she is just acknowledging a factual truth to Swara----that Sanskaar looks smokingly hawt in his angry young man avatar. 😆 No wonder Swara thought 'Et Tu Ragini', after having a dose of nightmares about the 5 Apsaras and Cavity already. 🤣 😆

So glad to know you loved this, dear.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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