The Apsaras and the Gandharva-A SwaSan slapstick comedy OS-A/N PG 9

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
This is an epic piece.
What a unique way of realizing!!!

Niki

Hey Niki 🤗🤗

So very glad to know you loved it. 😳 Good way for Swara to realize! 😆 I so wanted to make her burn, burn, burn in jealousy and envy! 😆 😈 😈

Love,

---Viji

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

OH GOD!

What is this Viji? Do you want me to die out of laughing?

God, I can't stop laughing!

Wasn't Deepu enough that you surrounded Sanskaar 'Dev' Maheshwari with Devis, Apsaras of Heavens!!!

Not to forget Cavity screaming 'Sanscaarrr' on top of her voice!

Swara's luck was really bad that after coming out of that exquisitely beautiful nightmare, she had to listen her pyari behna Ragini gushing over her pati ;)

Ooohhh lala, Swara burning with jealousy!

And decided to go to MM to woo Sanskaar back!

Tough job this time but atleast uski aakal toh thikane pe ayi...pata nehi show pe kab ayega!

Viji, this was truly EPIC! And if I die today you are to be blamed!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Helee
Hayeee...

😆 😉 That is exactly the same reaction all the apsaras have 😳

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

<font size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">He certainly is very dashing, no?😉No wonder all the Apsaras are flat for him!😆</font>

Even I'm flat on him!!! ☺️ ☺️

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Even I'm flat on him!!! ☺️ ☺️

Competition tight hai yaar. Menaka, Rambha, Urvashi, Ghrutachi , Tilottama, Cavity, Charulatha and even Deepa (from the Color Green). 😆

If Swara doesn't do something now, then she might have to weep and wave bye bye to Sunny...😈😈

Imagine Sunny singing to Swara (in the tune of O Susanna ):

O Swara, O Don't you cry for me,

I'm going to Amaravati, where everyone loves me

O Swara , O Don't you cry for me,

I'm leaving mental mansion, where no one deserves me!

😆🤣

OK now I've officially lost it. 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Nupur sweetheart 🤗🤗

So glad I could make you laugh. 😆 I was biting my lips to stop laughing, when I was writing this. 😆🤣

Will revert in detail over weekend...in meantime, your warm words really made my evening. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Competition tight hai yaar. Menaka, Rambha, Urvashi, Ghrutachi , Tilottama, Cavity, Charulatha and even Deepa (from the Color Green).😆

If Swara doesn't do something now, then she might have to weep and wave bye bye to Sunny...😈😈

Imagine Sunny singing to Swara (in the tune of O Susanna ):

O Swara, O Don't you cry for me,
I'm going to Amaravati, where everyone loves me

O Swara , O Don't you cry for me,
I'm leaving mental mansion, where no one deserves me!

😆🤣

OK now I've officially lost it.😆

Oh Viji!! U r too funny! 😆 And the song!! 🤣 I love u siso!!! 🤗

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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srkfann

@srkfann

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

like is it for real 😆
sorry to say but u ought to be completely insane to write such stuff roflmao oh god hats off to ur imagination dear this is something really fabulous I had been so fond of ur writings but after today ok I can just sing...mai tera haye re jabra hoye re jabra fan ho gya 😳 ...i just can't imagine how did u even manage to write it fully gosh I literally almost fell off my bed rolling & laughing...hahah my mom think I have turned out to be a maniac laughing like that holding my phone...i so wish vk reads this yaar this piece of writing needs to get his attention atleast...
& yeahh wishing u a very happy dhanteras & Diwali...here's wishing u loads of happiness, prosperity, & good health ...
love
Meg

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showrav

@showrav24

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Hi viji dear
Will let you know about it as soon as I can

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Competition tight hai yaar. Menaka, Rambha, Urvashi, Ghrutachi , Tilottama, Cavity, Charulatha and even Deepa (from the Color Green). 😆

If Swara doesn't do something now, then she might have to weep and wave bye bye to Sunny...😈😈

Imagine Sunny singing to Swara (in the tune of O Susanna ):

O Swara, O Don't you cry for me,
I'm going to Amaravati, where everyone loves me

O Swara , O Don't you cry for me,
I'm leaving mental mansion, where no one deserves me!

😆🤣

OK now I've officially lost it. 😆