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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Nyna I'm all in for the story.
Nyna dearest,
🤗. Marvelous one. Indeed it was. Completely awesome. I have become a sadist, I guess. Glad sanskar didn't forgive her. Because some mistakes cannot be forgiven. Her mere sorry can't change the fact that sanskar has endured so much in those 6 months. Her one sorry can't change those sorrows into happiness in a moment, after all. So she waited. Waited till her last breath to be forgiven. She is but can't be called as swara sanskar maheshwari. Oh why she had to chage her name to swara gadodia. She could have kept it swara Bose instead! Gadodia sounds so sickening for me. There are a lot of pious souls in that family, u see. Our swara did not deserve to be in such a pious family. And the last part made me cry. Both swasan died. It was an emotional os, dear. But I'm very happy to have read this.
Love u loads
Nivi

Unressed in blue.

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Viji.

Yep.and the contest of separating gswasan not for 3 or 4 ..for life time ..even after death .. I want sanskaar in midst of ramba urvasi menaka in heaven when swara is stranded with yama and chirthgupt.and watch it in magic mirror and burn ..burn 😈..I think I have lost it .🤣

Fidaa...😆how did I miss out that classic from Aradhana ..hut roop tera baarish .. U got my mind running on those lines ..i imay end up loading fitoor with all those 😆

I will stop here 😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Viji.
Yep.and the contest of separating gswasan not for 3 or 4 ..for life time ..even after death .. I want sanskaar in midst of ramba urvasi menaka in heaven when swara is stranded with yama and chirthgupt.and watch it in magic mirror and burn ..burn 😈..I think I have lost it .🤣

Fidaa...😆how did I miss out that classic from Aradhana ..hut roop tera baarish .. U got my mind running on those lines ..i imay end up loading fitoor with all those 😆

I will stop here 😆

Lucky 🤗🤗

Ermmm...😳 As for Fitoor, Sunny boy is rather more edgy and complex than Rajesh Khanna type chocolate loverboy hero. 😆

So what do you say...perhaps 'Tip Tip Barsa Paani' from Mohra , might suit the scene more in Fitoor? 😳😉 You know best...you wrote 3 rather different versions of Sunny in each of the 'F' series. 😆

I think I should stop here now. This is moving into...ahem...Asanskaari / Sinskaari territory 😉😳

BTW...Sunny surrounded by Urvashi, Rambha , Menaka and Tillotama sounds absolutely a wonderful idea. Please give some space for Deepu of "The Color Green" to dance around him, too. What say? 😉

Love

Viji

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fangirl-swasan

@fangirl-swasan

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I read this on my way home from University. Honestly I kind of really adore tragic stories. They have their own beauty because they remind us that life is,not always full of sunshine and rainbows. Now onto the story so he doesn't absolve her of her guilt and both of them spend their life in isolation. Can I confess that even though it's written from Swara's perspective I still feel more for Sanskar. Maybe it's the girl in me but the way this guy loves Swara always astounds me. To know that he was always,in close proximity to her and would see her everyday or at least hear her soulful songs invokes so many emotions in me. One needs to posses immense strength to live like this and he endured cancer too over the years. I just can't get over his pain. Even in death he comes for her. He is and will forever be her guardian angel. I don't know if I made sense or not but I loved this.

Regards

Sara😊

Edited by fangirl-swasan - 8 years ago

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Nynu... Hassan Hassan I'm not laughing im crying man... How can you kill my Sanskaar...

I yet to read... I have a habit.. I cnt control my curiosity soo I read.. the climax first... Now I'm going to read.. it if I'm not satisfied I'm going to send chudali o you... Be ready to get haunted in your dream...

Angry Kam...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Okay, I'm sobbing. What have you done Nynu? Literally I'm writing this with a tear strained face. Gorgeous!

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Sanya17

@Sanya17

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

I loved this story so much I am really sadistic but the way you wrote it so wonderfully👏 hats off to to u then in the end sanskar living upstairs of sargam 😒 sanskar staying so close to swara but yet so far never coming in front of her😭

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

I wont use that three letter word..But i am here..Will read after i tortured you with my OS

Unres:

I like typing Unres😆... So let get to this amazing OS shall we..Nyna dear.. You literally made me so happy when i read this one..Yeah i know this one was a sad OS or something along the lines of painful one..I know all that but the fact person like me who cant stand a small mu between SwaSan loved this OS shows how much of an sadist i turned into..😉

And for an Sadist heart like mine ..This OS was too perfect.. And i loved it no doubt, i felt Swara pain no doubt .But i loved it too.. It was the perfect OS for my sadist mind.. Though this Os was full on Swara POV..How can i still hurt more for Sanskar and his undying love for her😭..He lived right above her..That him i know..He loves little too perfectly and while i dont doubt Swara love for him..I just believe she takes him for granted but you did answer that in Another one of your OS..When i first read it was Sanskar fault in it i was literally confused for awhile till i read it ..Sure i will unres about that OS there.. My train of thoughts sometime get bit zig zag 😆

I loved it Nyna dear..I who always wanted an happily ever after for my SwaSan as turned into an sadist..Makers better wake up and give me Swara redemption track😡..Or i am done with SwaSan..

Love

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 8 years ago

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Nowadays I have to tagging on you to.read your works... Why not sending pms...
Res for now... I'm with you... Im happy with the sad endings... Than the happy one for this track...

👏

Im satisfied... I cried man you made me cry.. it's still aching hear.. in my hear... You know I switched of the light to hide my tears from my husband...

I thought I have to watch faults in our Stars again to get a sad mood to write next part... Now I'm all sad..😭..

He was living above her... Always listening to her songs.. ohhh how much he is loving her... Nope im not going to waste my time on her... Today episode shit.. she was getting on my nerves... I loved the lrecap.its my life I'll drink liquor or poisons its non of your concern... Wow. Vk...

Mmmuah darling...

Love you a loads and loads..

Kam...

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I will, just promise you are not going to murder me I am going reclaim my title - Empress of Sadists which I had for a very brief time relinquished to Lucky (her fida had a four year separation period.)😈

Seriously how can i not notice it..Lucky held the crown for a brief time😆..You took it back Nynu that too by being so sadistic but girl i dont blame you after watching this week episodes

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