SwaSan 3S-FIDAA( completed) - A/N - PG 20 - Page 11

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky ...dear...wow😊

Part 2 was wonderful.👍🏼..i just loved the flow..in this whole update ..you nicely revealed soo many things...sooo main culprit for swasan misunderstanding...seperation was lucky...not you😆...lakshya...idiot ..stupid...ijealous freak..n that witch kavita too...🤢.but how hard sanky hide his feeling for swara by showing his hatred...his love for her still empowers his hatred n that best part..you created different situation..annu n swara part...swasan gradually accepting n giving each other chance..it was so nicely penned..👏now excited for last part..hoping lakshya truth revealed n ragini help them somehow...waiting...🤗

Talia

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And yes - Res for Part 2

Unres for 2

Lucky,🤗🤗🤗

It was beautiful, the way you wove in the idea of the bet - fits in with the theme of them being college students.

So though Swara started off her "friendship" on account of a bet, she forgot about in halfway or maybe even earlier. 😳 She completely fell for him much before she surrendered herself, I would like to think that when she got upset with Sanskaar for his makeover, she was genuine and already in love with him.

But then one has to pay the price and it was a heavy one - she paid it for her silence (she should have told him but then she must have thought, 'I love him now and what difference does it make as to how we started our journey?') And we know how that was misinterpreted - Laksh and Kavita, both selfish and jealous people, who twisted the truth for their own reasons (baseless and spineless). In the video clipping which Sanskaar saw, the one he hears her say " Woh mere layak bilkul nahin hai" I am sure there was the continuation, as to how he is too good to deserve someone as deceptive as her.

Quite cleverly they manipulated both - Laksh does know his cousin quite well - or so he thinks . I hope he has the mobile with Sanskaar's sim in it, the one he used to ensure that the two of them never met - people like him would obviously keep trophies, and Ragini (appears to be positive) would somehow lay her hands to in(I leave it to you.)

And so he waits, to make her his and then starts his revenge - I guess the confrontation in the study is the prologue - where she truly learns his intentions.

In this situation, I like Swara's quiet acceptance, which did serve to actually soften Sanskaar a bit, at least confound him - he is a very different person now broken by her betrayal (As Albert Camus said " Betrayal answers betrayal, the mask of love is answered by the disappearance of love").

Though somewhere, deep down he is still very much in love with her, as he himself admits. And she does know him too, so though she accepts his hatred as a fitting punishment for her "sin" she understands the agony he has gone through and realises that quiet acceptance would not heal them. (AP is quite the protective mother here, and it is her words that let Swara know that extent to which Sanskaar had broken). And she begins her mission (some things never change) - and he does fall asleep peacefully in her arms albeit a bit reluctant, initially😉

But then she would be able to win him over - he has to be convinced of the truth - that she had a bet was only a fact, not a truth. Only this time it is a difficult way ahead, in the first case it was only dry parched earth that his heart was, now Sanskaar's heart is a bed of thorns, both will bleed before they heal.

And I guess they still have Laksh and his jealousy to deal with. (He will never learn, will he - despite his father's very astute observation about both him and Sanskaar)

I love you so much for this story and the amazing way it flows.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Res for Part 1: Off to read now!

Unres:

Did I told you how amazingly brilliant you are as writer? Yes or no, I'm saying again you are really a brilliant!

🤗

I just loved the first part!

Sanskaar is a nerd, labeled as geek! And Swara is the newcomer, a cool personality & became popular!

Perfect combo!

😛

Sanskaar fell for Swara at first sight and Swara fell for him gradually & steadily! They became friends first & then their love bloomed!

Felt bad for Sanskaar as he lost both his parents at the tender age of 4 & brought up by AP-DP! DP is biased towards his own but thankfully AP loved him like her own!

Laksh had to show his true colors of being a foolish, impulsive, jealous jerk! Why I'm not surprised!?

😆 Well guess some people never change😉

Bt I loved how Swara gave a fitting reply to all by declaring Sanskaar as her boyfriend! And what I loved most is she didn't do that to shut people up but bcoz she liked him or we can say already loved him!

So Sanskaar tried to change himself a lil by having a new makeover for Swara even though she loved him just the way he is! Bt he didn't want her friends to tease her for choosing him!

Swara loved his looks bcoz she already noticed before how handsome & charming he is with the most beautiful pair of eye! Bt she got angry with girls for drooling over Sanskaar or more precisely her Handsome Hunk Sanskaar 😉

😳 Yes Sanskaar in any form is drool worthy .. Geek or Greek god😳 and jealosu swara tho banti hain boss😆

That jerk Laksh went ahead & tried to implant the seeds of insecurity & fear of losing Swara on Sanskaar's mind! And he tried to ignore Swara but ofcourse our Swara can't let that happen & confronted him!

Btw I loved how you mingled some of Sanskaar's dialogues here to express his fear, vulnerability & love!

Swara very effectively calmed him down by confessing her love for him! I loved that kiss & love making bcoz of their pure love!

thanks a lot nupur🤗 ..I am super glad you liked it

😳

Now I'm hell curious to know what happened between SwaSan? What made the shy geek Sanskaar Maheshwari to angry, vengeful Sanskaar Maheshwari? Why he wants to make her cry? Did Swara do something or someone else created some misunderstanding between them? Or maybe she was forced to hurt Sanskaar?

And Sanskaar referred her as Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari in prologue where Swara came back to Sanskaar after years?

Were they married before their separation?

I know I have to wait for you to reveal the past & thankfully you are going to post part 2 tomorrow!

So I'm looking forward for that!

Lucky this was a beautiful update!

Loads of love for you <3

P.S: Lucky you have, A FF - Faana, A SS - Fitoor, A TS -Fida & An OS - Carpendiem up your sleeve! So why don't you make an Index? That will give us hope to get some more stories from you :)

Originally posted by: ishanita

lucky
brilliant and with this track forum has got many beautiful stories and urs is among best dear!

love u

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky dearest...

Classic n sensational update...

When you n nyna were talking in fitoor thread i guess... nyna said about giving us fida too..i thought it was just for fun n joke...but you actually created fida...n i just enjoyed reading it as much as i love fanaa n fitoor...you ful filled her dream of fanaa...fitoor n now fida...you are sweetheart.thanks for this surprise...

about update...Whole setup...bubbly popular swara.. geek sanky...friendship..n changes in sanky due to swara presence were remarkable...situations n slow growing feeling of swara...n their confession.which lead to lovemaking..it was fab...cherished it...lucky..why lakshya.?? I know he did something to destroy their relationship..im sure...i just hate him...wondering why is he angry with her??

Will wait to know more...excited...update soon...

Talia

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

It was superb lucky.. soo he was a geek. Who said geeks are boring.. I'm a geek too... Not class topper but next position.. I loved his characterization.. from a geek to a broody man..

She loves him that much trusting him that much which ended up in giving herself to him.. what the heck had happened between them.. is lucky played any hands in that.. if soo tell me I'll send chudali to him.. or nagamani they are free now as ssk is not using them..

Update soonish darling..

I saw your reply.. what naa nowadays it's not registering in my mind what I'm reading.. I have to keep my mind away while reading.. I did read that.. it's not the do with the serial but it didn't registered inyind I made a request.. sorry pal..

Kam..

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Wooowww Lucky!! I loved it! So Sanskaar is a geek..well can sort of relate to him you know!! He is too sweet, I loved his character. Even Swara.!! Both my SwaSan are just amazing!!
And you, my lady, write too well! I just love the way you right!

Res:

Gotta go now, will come back and write more!😃