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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 1 and 2 Lucky. 😳
Unresed dearest. 😃
Very scary prologue!! 😕
Ch-1 :-
Poor Sanskar! Lost his parents at the tender age of 4. 😭 DP-AP took care of him, though DP was always partial towards his own son Lakshya, but AP loved Sanskar like her own. 😃 And Laksh! What to say about him???!!! 😡 🤢 Loved how SwaSan's friendship blossomed which gradually converted into love. 😃
Ch-2 :-
Uggghhh! This Laksh and Kavita!!!! 😡 🤬 🤢 SwaSan were separated for 4 years before their marriage? But why? 😕 And that video incident was before their wedding right?? 😕 Ragini seems to be nice here and I think she can feel Laksh's hatred towards SwaSan. 😕 I'm li'l confused with the 2nd chapter dear. I mean the prologue part was before SwaSan's wedding or after?? Coz in the prologue its written that they were separated for years before meeting and Sanskar's scary behavior towards Swara. 😕 But before SwaSan's marriage also they were separated right? 😕 So basically Sanskar married Swara for taking revenge related to that video, right? So what is this separation mentioned in the prologue?? 😕 Is Laksh and Kavita related to SwaSan's separation by causing MU between them?? 😕 God! I totally messed up!! 😆 Hope u won't mind clearing my confusions? 😳 And update soon. 😛 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unresed @12 with so many confusions! 😆 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed @12 with so many confusions! 😆 😳


Aheli🤗

Swara and Sanskaar got separated after that video incident in college.. where sanskaar was broken and taken away from city, ..after 4 years swara and sanskaar get married. On their first night sanskaar brings them to Farm house and he stays in study room..that's when swara comes looking for him and prologue scene happens ..thats when she get to know sanskaar married her for revenge.

hope that clears up😛.get back to me for any more doubts

love
lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: lucky.m



Aheli🤗

Swara and Sanskaar got separated after that video incident in college.. where sanskaar was broken and taken away from city, ..after 4 years swara and sanskaar get married. On their first night sanskaar brings them to Farm house and he stays in study room..that's when swara comes looking for him and prologue scene happens ..thats when she get to know sanskaar married her for revenge.

hope that clears up😛.get back to me for any more doubts

love
lucky


Yeah a li'l bit more. So Swara and AP convo and Swara asking Sanky to sleep on bed with her is after the prologue scene? Am I right ya wrong?? 😕
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Posted: 8 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Dear Lucky .. 🤗

I think this the first time I comment on one of your stories ..
Sorry for that ..

Usually I don't read the stories with Hindi dialogues as my Hindi is very bad , I can't understand the written one ..
But yours are different .. I like them
So , while reading your stories I would spend a lot of time in trying to pronounce the words or even using the translator ( to understand what are they saying ) .. due to that I take a lot of time in reading it .. and you would update while I am still reading the pervous chapters .. ( actually I am enjoying it )
I think I still have 1 chapter in Fitoor and 5 in Fanaa .. ( I will comment there if I ever catch up on you )

Fida ..
I really love this concept ..

Their love story during collage days was beautiful .. when they broke apart I felt their pain , Sanskar's pain
And he turned to this Sanskar .. he want to gurt her like she did in the past but hus love for her is more strong than his hate .. he can't stand seeing her pain ..
And all this is because of Laksh ..

I really loved it .. I hope they find their happiness soon ..

Lucky thank you for this story ..

Love
Khushi


Hi Khushi 🤗

Thanks a lot 😊.. Glad you dropped by ..and its feels great to know you are catching up on fitoor and fanaa... and about Hindi dialogues .. I am trying to minimize them ..but If they help you learn a bit of hindi ..I wouldn't mind😆😉

They will find their happiness soon ..I will ensure that our our swasan will have an happy ending😉😳

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Yeah a li'l bit more. So Swara and AP convo and Swara asking Sanky to sleep on bed with her is after the prologue scene? Am I right ya wrong?? 😕


so chapter 2 starts with basically swara remembering the flashback ..and when sanskaar remembers flashback we will know y they broke up.. that video thing comes them ..

after prologue.. Sanskaar comes back to farm house ..basically the part titled dusk to dawn is present ..
Yes swara ap convo . is after prologue😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Reply 100 - Res for 3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Reply 100 - Res for 3


Nynu🤗🤗

Didn't even notice ... honored sweetheart😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m



so chapter 2 starts with basically swara remembering the flashback ..and when sanskaar remembers flashback we will know y they broke up.. that video thing comes them ..

after prologue.. Sanskaar comes back to farm house ..basically the part titled dusk to dawn is present ..
Yes swara ap convo . is after prologue😊


Lucky! 😃
Thank u darling for clearing my confusions. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lucky ...dear...wow😊
Part 2 was wonderful.👍🏼..i just loved the flow..in this whole update ..you nicely revealed soo many things...sooo main culprit for swasan misunderstanding...seperation was lucky...not you😆...lakshya...idiot ..stupid...ijealous freak..n that witch kavita too...🤢.but how hard sanky hide his feeling for swara by showing his hatred...his love for her still empowers his hatred n that best part..you created different situation..annu n swara part...swasan gradually accepting n giving each other chance..it was so nicely penned..👏now excited for last part..hoping lakshya truth revealed n ragini help them somehow...waiting...🤗

Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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