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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: darcyholic
Hi Lucky

The prologue and first part is awesome.Love at first sight for sanskar 😳 .Swara developing love slowly from mere gratitude to study partner to friends to girlfriend is just so romantic and realistic.Because that's how love develops in real .Thank you for the perfect development of such a beautiful emotion.
Sankars back story was quite sad and shows his craving for love.Laksh is going to be the villain in this case I think because the prologue indicated separation.Again marvellous writing. ⭐️
Minerva

Hi Minerva

Thank You😛 for taking out time and reading😊 and Glad you liked slow steady development of Swasan story . Though I am not against Love at first sight , I tend to be biased towards this slow progress of love ..hence I have added Love At first sight angle as well😆. A combination of both 😉

Sanskaar's back story is indeed sad . May be if he didn't loose his parents he might have been as different person.. By now if you read second part you knew who the villain is😉

Thanks once again and would love to know your thoughts on second part

Love

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
And I res 😆😉

Shall un res tomo, Lucky 😊 Just hitting bed. 😊

Lucky...🤗🤗🤗

I felt such a wide array of emotions when I read Chapter 2 today. Immense heartbreak for Sanskaar and Swara...and absolute fury towards Kavita and Lakshya. 😡 🤢

God, it was so gut wrenching to read about the complete heartbreak that Sanskaar went through. He just adored Swara with every last cell and pore in his body...he would have felt that his very life was being ripped out of his body, when he saw that VM.

So Swara took on a rather juvenile bet, but the tragedy is, that this was just the impulse for the beginning of their acquaintance. Her feelings which developed after that were completely genuine and true. She did actually fall very deeply in love with Sanskaar. I have a sneaking suspicion that the video was clipped to cut off the ending. Would Swara have said "Sanskaar mere bilkul laayak nahi hai, in fact he deserves someone much better than me." Or words to that effect? It seems very likely.

It was truly gut wrenching, reading about the prolonged period of depression which Sanskaar went through; and Swara's own pain and anguish, her desperate attempts to reach out to Sanskaar at that point. But Lakshya and Kavita, two sadistic monsters disguised as human beings, worked their vile plans to come between SwaSan. God, I felt such a rage against them I can't even begin to explain. 😡

Lakshya is going to pay, and pay huge---of that I am sure. He had prevented all of Swara's calls and umpteen messages from getting to Sanskaar---and I somehow feel that this sms trail is still there, waiting to be discovered. It is going to blow up in Lakshya's face, and I am going to be so happy to see that happening. Kavita needs to get her just desserts too!

So Sanskaar fills his life with purposeful vengeance and bitterness, resolving that he would come back extremely successful and wealthy; and marry Swara after pretending he was still in love with her. But the pretense was never actually a pretense, was it? Sanskaar was, is, and always would be deeply and genuinely in love with His Swara. Swara is his, and he is hers---its that simple.

They say that the opposite of love is not really hate---its indifference. The reason why Sanskar still felt this powerful attachment to Swara, the desire to make her his in a sense, to tie her to him and him to her, with the sacred bond of marriage---well, he might think it is all out of hate. But it isn't. not by a long shot. He may feel terrible, corrosive bitterness towards her for what he judges to be her perfidy, the way he thinks she stabbed a stake right through his heart. But still, he loves her, can't help loving her.

I really liked the very mature way Swara went about handling this complex issue. She was obviously heartbroken that Sanskaar had become so embittered, he had put on an act, and was planning to make her life a living hell. But she calmly accepted that she had put him through hell as well. That gesture from her side really gave Sanskaar a lot to think about. Her genuine remorse, her concern for him, her resolve to ensure that he felt better----all started chipping away at his rage, didn't it. 😊

The scene between Swara and a maternal, positive Annapurna, was a joy to read. And very canny and astute of Swara to have disposed of the recliner. 😆 Sanskaar tried his best, was extremely reluctant sharing a bed with Swara----but finally could not resist taking her into his arms, slipping into a relaxed slumber after weeks, possibly even years? Had he ever had a relaxing, satisfying night's sleep without Swara by his side? Poor Sunny...😭

Eagerly waiting for the 3rd shot. 😊 To see how all the lingering MU's get resolved----and how the villains of this story get well and truly punished. Please take requests, Lucky! 😊 Your serial name sake should get a broken nose and broken jaw from Sunny. 😆 And a slap from Swara---make that 2 slaps. And one slap from Annapurna as well!

Kavita needs to get a solid couple of slaps from Swara as well! Apart from a short stint in jail for circulating fraudulent and misleading videos. I think that falls under Section 66A or something like that, of the IT Act. 😊 😉

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Viji ..darlin ..you just made my evening .I was just about to reply to your PM..and then I get to read this ..I am giggling like an idiot ..you know how much happy your insightful comments make me ...

I am.planning to kinda take a break for today from.writing and work on some ahem delicious devilish look of sunny boy and that sherwani part of sunny completed. 😳 make some sigs ..

And yes all requests considered ..slaps broken jaw ..😉 ..

Love

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Viji ..darlin ..you just made my evening .I was just about to reply to your PM..and then I get to read this ..I am giggling like an idiot ..you know how much happy your insightful comments make me ...
I am.planning to kinda take a break for today from.writing and work on some ahem delicious devilish look of sunny boy and that sherwani part of sunny completed. 😳 make some sigs ..

And yes all requests considered ..slaps broken jaw ..😉 ..

Love
Lucky

Sherwani collage banner of Sunny will get completed today? 😳 You will post it where? On this thread? Fanaa? Fitoor? Where should I res? Where?! 😆

About the PM...hope you liked my suggestion on who to play Ronnie Verma's role. VK!! Not our Golden boy/ Sunny Boy VK, the other VK. 😉 😆

Love,

----Viji

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Purvi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Awesome wala update... Continue soon...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Purvi97
Awesome wala update... Continue soon...

thanks purvi😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Hey all

I started catching up on comments ..just to let u guys know ..🤗🤗they mean a lot😊

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1005068

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

i loved this very much👍🏼

here also sanky on couch and swara on bed😆 don't know why i laughed here so much

he don't know whole thing, but almost melt ho chuka hai. for revenge this marriage was bad idea for you sanskar but good for both of you😃

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: soumya04
i loved this very much👍🏼
here also sanky on couch and swara on bed😆 don't know why i laughed here so much
he don't know whole thing, but almost melt ho chuka hai. for revenge this marriage was bad idea for you sanskar but good for both of you😃

Hi Soumya

Its always feels great to hear from the new readers. Thanks a lot ..

Sanskaar and Swara's couch & Bed, part and Tum mere upar ho Swara was classic in show😳 . So when I got a chance I just couldn't resist😆

Glad it could make laugh , Swasan are capable of evoking all kinds of emotions in viewers/ Readers

Sanskaar like you said is already melting . His love for Swara will be soon overpowering his hatred but we will have some issues to sort before they get an happy ending😊

Thanks again

Lucky

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Dear Lucky .. 🤗

I think this the first time I comment on one of your stories ..

Sorry for that ..

Usually I don't read the stories with Hindi dialogues as my Hindi is very bad , I can't understand the written one ..

But yours are different .. I like them

So , while reading your stories I would spend a lot of time in trying to pronounce the words or even using the translator ( to understand what are they saying ) .. due to that I take a lot of time in reading it .. and you would update while I am still reading the pervous chapters .. ( actually I am enjoying it )

I think I still have 1 chapter in Fitoor and 5 in Fanaa .. ( I will comment there if I ever catch up on you )

Fida ..

I really love this concept ..

Their love story during collage days was beautiful .. when they broke apart I felt their pain , Sanskar's pain

And he turned to this Sanskar .. he want to hurt her like she did in the past but his love for her is more strong than his hate .. he can't stand seeing her pain ..

And all this is because of Laksh ..

I really loved it .. I hope they find their happiness soon ..

Lucky thank you for this story ..

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 8 years ago