Happy Birthday In Advance Nynu :)
Unres for Part 1:
Hey Viji 😊
No surprise that you came up with another beautiful SwaSan piece & needless to say I loved it very much!
I was surprised reading that Swara is the only child of her parents & was thinking where is Ragini? If we are free from Ragini here?
Bt Ragini made her entry as Swara's cousin and a accompanist of Swa-----Lak shopping ventures!
Gadodias & Maheshwaris are friends, business partners & neighbors; hence their kids are friends from childhood as well.
SwaSan are friends from childhood & Sanskaar fall for her! And Swara consider Sanskaar as her best friend among Adarsh, Laksh & Sanskaar & more friendly with him - according to Sanskaar!
Bt I have a feeling that she also loves Sanskaar!
Oh Laksh messed up with relations here as well? This is the only thing for I have full faith on LakshJi! And Ragini didn't disappoint either regarding her feelings for Laksh!
Ohh how much I rely on these 2 to make the path clear for SwaSan 😉
Bt trust Sanskaar & Swara to make things difficult! Sanskaar things he is not suitable for Swara bcoz of his profession! (Btw Mr. Maheshwari I love your this profession more than Business, though I like Business field as well being a Business Studies student myself! Bt I love adventures)
Why Swara is going on with this relationship with Laksh? I'm sure she don't have any feelings for him but Sanskaar! Then why she is not saying it? Is she under impression that Sanskaar don't have feelings for her?
Oh GOD, what to do with these two!!?
Btw why I had the feeling that Swara was intentionally leaning towards front seats in a pretence of talking to Ragini & actually wanted to be close to Sanskaar? 😉
Viji please update soon, I'm eager to know Sanskaar's reaction after hearing that his bratty cousin actually kissed Ragini not Swara! I'm sure he will be close to do a hulla dance out of happiness 😆
I absolutely loved how you used the portion of Pride & Prejudice here regarding Sanskaar's love realization!
Pride & Prejudice is one of my most fav & I love Mr. Darcy's quotes! And the one you used is so lovely & so apt for Sanskaar! Though my most fav will always be Sanskaar's drunken confession & his - 'Main tumse pyar karne laga hu Swara! Kab, kaha, kaise...nehi pata; tumhise kiyu hua...nehi pata; iss pyar ki koyi manzil hain bhi ya nehi...nehi pata! Per main tumhare bina apne jindegi jine ki bare mein soch bhi nehi sakti! I love you Swara!' 😳
Bt this version touched my heart as well bcoz I clearly can visualize Sanskaar saying Mr. Darcy's lines perfectly 😳
Waiting for Part 2 to know how you will unite Swara & Sanskaar!
Wonderful piece Viji, loved it very much!
Edited by Nupur_5 - 8 years ago
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