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Hey Viji,
Part 2 was absolutely awesome..if there would have been anyone else..he somewhat have been happy that his brother loves someone else but Sanskar was hurt thinking how much this is going to hurt his Swara..he truly lover her so so much..at this point I somewhere knew that Swara must have said yes to him but she loves someone else..but u really maintained the suspence to who was he..I knew somewhere it must be Sanskar but still doubted it..what if Swara likes someone else..
And the way then Sanskar feels a tiny flame of happiness in his heart that somewhere there is a chance of Swara being his was so beautiful..this is for the first time I m happy that Ragini and Lakshya love each other..after Lakshya said yes to talk to everybody but the anguish Sanskar felt that how much this can hurt Swara..uncaring for the pain he is enduring is truly..really sometimes he makes me speechless.how can somebody loves someone so much that they can give anything just to see them happy so selfless so giving..
And then when the met..things really spark when they with each other..it was like a dream..Swara knew Lakshya and Ragini liked each other and then without even confessing how she said that it can never by anybody else but Sanskar and this Swara was bold..kissing him like that..it would have been a shock for him..he must have forgot what he was saying..but the way she expressed how she loved him for years..from a time..she can't exactly remember..this story is just so light-hearted and passionate at the same time..and then literally the fireworks erupted into the sky..cebratinf their love..really mesmerizing..
And again hats off to you..I don't think I will ever have enough of your stories..I can read them forever..
Love,
Piya
Part 2 was absolutely awesome..if there would have been anyone else..he somewhat have been happy that his brother loves someone else but Sanskar was hurt thinking how much this is going to hurt his Swara..he truly lover her so so much..at this point I somewhere knew that Swara must have said yes to him but she loves someone else..but u really maintained the suspence to who was he..I knew somewhere it must be Sanskar but still doubted it..what if Swara likes someone else..
And the way then Sanskar feels a tiny flame of happiness in his heart that somewhere there is a chance of Swara being his was so beautiful..this is for the first time I m happy that Ragini and Lakshya love each other..after Lakshya said yes to talk to everybody but the anguish Sanskar felt that how much this can hurt Swara..uncaring for the pain he is enduring is truly..really sometimes he makes me speechless.how can somebody loves someone so much that they can give anything just to see them happy so selfless so giving..
And then when the met..things really spark when they with each other..it was like a dream..Swara knew Lakshya and Ragini liked each other and then without even confessing how she said that it can never by anybody else but Sanskar and this Swara was bold..kissing him like that..it would have been a shock for him..he must have forgot what he was saying..but the way she expressed how she loved him for years..from a time..she can't exactly remember..this story is just so light-hearted and passionate at the same time..and then literally the fireworks erupted into the sky..cebratinf their love..really mesmerizing..
And again hats off to you..I don't think I will ever have enough of your stories..I can read them forever..
Love,
Piya
