SwaSan 2S 'Delirium'--Part 2 on Pg 2--Happy Bday Nynu!!

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

The stories with Childhood sweethearts is my favourite kind of love stories...and this is so beautiful. Can't wait for next part. 😳

And and and happy birthday in advance nyna. ⭐️ God bless you. 😳

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hello viji. This is the first time I am commenting on ur story but trust me I have read all ur stories and they are out of the world. Laksh and swara are engaged and sanskar loves her. Looks like it will lead to a love triangle. Laksh loves ragini, I believe. Do update the second part. Eagerly waiting to know what's in store for these four. Could u plz pm me ???

Love

Nivi

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Nupur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

😆😆 I thought Sahil and Urvashi would be just perfect as Swara's chacha and chachi. 😉

Glad you loved it, Nupur sweetheart 😊🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

Yes I loved it very much & no surprise on that!

Unresed for Part 1 on page 1 Viji :)

Loads of love to you too <3

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svg98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Hey Viji,
Beautiful os..
Sanskar's affliction was so beautifully portrayed by you..I could sew him burning in the pool of despair, his very own cousin and family responsible for his agony and he couldnt even say anything..
Would love to see Swara's point of view..I knw she is in love with him as much as Sanskar..
So Lakshya kissed Ragini..this might be a turning point..can't wait to read the 2nd part..
Love,
Pia
P.S.will soon try to comment on the other as..I have been through half of the part 4..still sorry for the late comments..

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Interesting start

Looking forward to read more

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: StarySKY
Dear Nynu .. 🤗
Happy birthday in advance ..

Viji my dearest 🤗
I am totally speechless .. no words can describe how I feel right now ..

Res for now ( will Un-Res after part 2 )

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Well Lucky boy it's good that you kissed her and she kissed you back otherwise I would have throttled you for Sanskar's sake.
Will return with a longer comment later dearest...my pc is dead again. I am thinking of arrenging a funeral this time.
Nynu lovely sweetheart...hope you have the joyest of birthdays and a year dusted with stardust ahead!
Loads of love,
Saku

Originally posted by: Helee
The stories with Childhood sweethearts is my favourite kind of love stories...and this is so beautiful. Can't wait for next part. 😳

And and and happy birthday in advance nyna. ⭐️ God bless you. 😳

Dear Khushi, Helee and Saku,

Thank you so much for your lovely wishes - I am sure to have a great day and a great year, that is a given with pals like you.❤️

and

lots of love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Updated Part 2 on Page 2, Friends. 🤗🤗🤗

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Updated Part 2 on Page 2, Friends. 🤗🤗🤗

Okay runs to read 😆😆..Thanks Viji for this super fast TS...I loved part one ..Let me talk after reading part 2

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Res viji😉

Sorry for the late Unres. But had so many pending Unres. Completing them.

Finally laksh is out of the way for sanskar yaaay. I love the sanlak bond. U know it far better than the swaragini bond 🤢. Sanskar the mature one and laksh little child like. Perfect bros. So laksh loves ragini. Loved sanskar's maturity here. And laksh he wants sanskar to enact like the elder people of the family, gosh! On the banks of the Hooghly river, swasan have set up their meeting of can I say a date 😉. Extremely loved the last part. So sanskar was the one whom swara loved from the begining. At last both of them united under the sparkles of fireworks. True sanskar sometimes do behave like an idiot. But I love this idiot 😳.

Childhood love stories are really very cute to read.

Love u loads 🤗

Nivi

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago