SWASAN FF - CLIPPED WINGS[part 4 pg ] 10/11 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Awesome part

Liked it a lot
Shocking precap



Thank you so much Harshita😳
Glad you liked it...

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: srividhya87

Read all the 3 parts..

amazing storyline..
Swara's confidence in her love is superb..
I feel ki Sanskaar is doing this under someone's insistence...
Waiting for the next part..



Thank you so much Srividhya dear😳
Glad you liked the storyline...
Will update soon.

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: elsaanna

amazing story line dear..

beautifully written..
don't stop plz..keep writing..
sadly amazing update..
waiting for the happy note..
thanks for the pm..
take care



Thanks a lot Tanishka dear,😳
Glad to know you liked it dear...
Sure, I will continue.
Will update soon...

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshada dear...

Nice part..but im confused..one ,why is title clipped wings?? N secondly if sanky loved her so much in past then what changed...why he wanted her to hate him??? Any disease ..hell no??? Or anything else..im clueless.n super curious...loved this confident n determined swara...enjoyed her blunt n abrupt replies ...update soon...

Talia



Hey Talia😳 Thanks dear😊
I was thinking to change the title but not sure if I will do that or not. I was thinking to change it to ' A love so strong'
Clipped wings refers to restrictions, reducing someone's freedom and in this story we will get to see, how people are restricted and forced to do what they do not want to do. Hope I made it clear😳
No No...absolutely not. I have personal hatred towards diseases so in no way, I will introduce any disease track in my any write-up. Never
Glad you liked this version of Swara.
Will update soon.

love
-Harshada

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Finally you updated it..

Confident swara..loved it

Sujata and swara such a lovely equation they share..

Thanks



I took quite long na?😕 Sorry if I made you wait
Thank you 😳 Glad you liked swara here.
They of course do. Sujata loves Swara...

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

its lovely update

what is bothering sanskaar


Thank you so much dear...
Will update soon and let you know.

love
-Harshada






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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much Mystic
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 3 Harshu, will try to unres soon. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really loved the equation that Swara and Sujata share. 😳
Oh God! Why is Sanskar behaving like this with Swara, if he really loves her (which he does)?? 😭 Is someone forcing him to behave like this?? If yes then who?? 😕 Or is he suffering from any disease?? (plzz no!) 😕 Shocking precap!! 😲 Plzz update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃 Take care. 🤗
With love,
Aheli.



There is no problem about the unres dearest...You always, do take your time. Don't rush please. I understand😳
Thank you so much...
Glad you liked sujata and swara's bond.
I guess he does😃
As I just replied to Talia also, There is NO DISEASE thing for sure
I have personal HATRED for this word.
Will update soon dear...

Loads of love
-Harshada
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Harshada ,

I remember reading this story before. I am glad that you have taken it up again to complete. Thank you for your pm.

It is a very intriguing plot. Sanskaar and Swara had a past where they were inseparable lovers. But something happened and Sanskaar didn't want this wedding to take place.

I love the opening scene where we see the apprehension Swara is going through. The fear and anxiety is dripping out of every word.

Angry Sanskaar is my favorite. As long as I have that guy in the FF, I am into that and would love it. I want to see how Swara manages to calm this tempest.

Sujata is a pleasant addition. Though she becomes irritating at times, she seems to be a good woman here.

Continue soon dear and please pm me further updates.

Cheers
Sharon



Hey Sharon🤗 So glad to see you here dear😳
Thank you so much... Yes I will complete this.
You are welcome, always sharon😳

Glad you are finding this intriguing enough to invest your time in reading this one. Yes they had a past but that also has a mystery in it😆😉 You are right. Sanskar didn't want Swara to marry him.

Really? I am so very glad you liked that introductory scene. I was worried if it came out nicely or not.

You like angry Sanskar? I love romantic, cute and protective Mr. Maheshwari for Mrs. Maheshwari Accha? But, angry Sanskar won't last for long. But I hope you will like it after that too.

Sujata's role was this much only, for now. Even I don't know if she will make an sudden entry again😉

Will update soon and surely will pm you dear.
Thanks for this lovely feedback.

Love
-harshada








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Posted: 8 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome update
update soon

thnks for pm



Thank you so much anu dear.

Will update soon

Lots of love
-Harshada

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