SWASAN FF - CLIPPED WINGS[part 4 pg ] 10/11

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rimi

@elsaanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

amazing story line dear..

beautifully written..

don't stop plz..keep writing..

sadly amazing update..

waiting for the happy note..

thanks for the pm..

take care

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Harshada dear...

Nice part..but im confused..one ,why is title clipped wings?? N secondly if sanky loved her so much in past then what changed...why he wanted her to hate him??? Any disease ..hell no??? Or anything else..im clueless.n super curious...loved this confident n determined swara...enjoyed her blunt n abrupt replies ...update soon...

Talia

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Finally you updated it..

Confident swara..loved it

Sujata and swara such a lovely equation they share..

Thanks

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

its lovely update

what is bothering sanskaar

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Res for part 3 Harshu, will try to unres soon. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really loved the equation that Swara and Sujata share. 😳
Oh God! Why is Sanskar behaving like this with Swara, if he really loves her (which he does)?? 😭 Is someone forcing him to behave like this?? If yes then who?? 😕 Or is he suffering from any disease?? (plzz no!) 😕 Shocking precap!! 😲 Plzz update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃 Take care. 🤗
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Hi Harshada ,

I remember reading this story before. I am glad that you have taken it up again to complete. Thank you for your pm.

It is a very intriguing plot. Sanskaar and Swara had a past where they were inseparable lovers. But something happened and Sanskaar didn't want this wedding to take place.

I love the opening scene where we see the apprehension Swara is going through. The fear and anxiety is dripping out of every word.

Angry Sanskaar is my favorite. As long as I have that guy in the FF, I am into that and would love it. I want to see how Swara manages to calm this tempest.

Sujata is a pleasant addition. Though she becomes irritating at times, she seems to be a good woman here.

Continue soon dear and please pm me further updates.

Cheers

Sharon

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Hey guys,
Thank you so very much for all the lovely comments...
I know I have not been able to reply any of them from the second chapter...and I feel really bad about it.

But I cant help this delay. My exams are starting from tomorrow and it will almost take this whole month including my theory papers and practical ones...

I will still try to get back to replies in the free time if I get any. Hope you all will not mind.

Love
- Harshada

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Awsome update
update soon

thnks for pm

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hey guys,
Thank you so very much for all the lovely comments...
I know I have not been able to reply any of them from the second chapter...and I feel really bad about it.

But I cant help this delay. My exams are starting from tomorrow and it will almost take this whole month including my theory papers and practical ones...

I will still try to get back to replies in the free time if I get any. Hope you all will not mind.

Love
- Harshada

Hey Harshu, its okk dear. Studies comes first. 😃 Even my mid semester is going on now... 😳 So All The Very Best For Ur Exam! 👍🏼 Study well and don't take much pressure that will hamper ur health. 😉 Take care dearest. 🤗 Love u!! ❤️

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Advanced res for ch-2 Harshu. 😳
Unresed dearest. 😃
Wow! They love each other so much and care for each other. 😃 But chupke chupke. 😉 😆
Loved they way Sanskar put the blanket over Swara when she was shivering with cold. 😳 And also loved Swara's care and concern for Sanskar. 😳 Heehee! She closed her eyes while changing his clothes. 😳 😆 Then the way Sanskar was staring at Swara, unknown to her. 😳 And the flashback part was superb! Loved it so much. 😃 ❤️ But why is Sanskar pushing Swara away from him and wants her to hate him and go away from him?? 😕 Plzz unravel the mystery soon and let their love blossom again. 😉 Update soon. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

Hey Aheli dear,

Thank you so much...

Indeed! Swasan must love each other na Yeah, here chupke chupke😉

Glad you liked the flashback part dear...

Will reveal everything asap...

Love

-Harshada