SWASAN FF - CLIPPED WINGS[part 4 pg ] 10/11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Anu18

Hello Harshada🤗

How are you?

Yea! Read this part before😃Go ahead. Eager to know the reasons for their pain

Thanku for PM

Will wait for next part.

Love

Anu

Hey anu dearest,
I am better dear. ...still not really well ( Hb has been dropped to 6.4 so having some serious headache and terrible weakness )
Glad to know first part has formed your interest in reading further .
Will Update soon

Love
- Harshada

Originally posted by: tithi1812

Hi Harshada..😃Hope u r fine..😳

As usual.. Interesting start.. But painful one.. I thought at 1st it's going to b blissful night..but yeah.. Story me itni jaldi happiness nahi aati hai😭😭 I can't bear pain anymore..waise hi... Anyways.. Great start.. Looking forward to it.. Pls update next part soon.. Thanks for pm🤗

Hey dear,
Well not really but yeah okay enough.
Thanks a lot dear.
Glad you are finding the start interesting.
Hope you will like future updates too.
Will surely update soon dear.

Love
- Harshada

Hey Harshu

How are you? What a powerful start- wow! Full of pain and emotional trauma so well captured on both sides but with that touch of intrigue too which leaves one truly wondering what on earth is happening to bring both SwaSan to that- ouch. When I read he first part I was really not expecting that Sanskaar into the second bit. In fact I was all set to bash him for being a real jerk and verging on abusive and was all ready with gaalis- lol! Then the second part clarified how he suffers so deeply too and that remorseful angst was so potently brought out. Really interesting. Will wait to read more but if I fall behind in commenting do forgive me as I am really struggling with multiple pressures at present but will be here whenever I can:)

Lots of love
Shru xoxo

amazing start dear

Res'ing Harshu dearest. 😉 And thanks for dedicating it to me. 😳 Infact, I was quite surprised with ur pm about SwaSan FF. 😆 Will unress as soon as possible dearest. Love u. ❤️
Unresed darling. 😃 And my apologies for being late. 😳
Wow!! Amazing start. 👏
So both Swara and Sanskar loves each other. 😃 (And I'm satisfied with it coz while reading when that part came where Sanskar termed Swara as "Unwanted", I was very shocked and scared.) 😭
So Swara was forced to do this wedding right?? I mean she loves Sanskar, but she wanted to give him happiness by not agreeing with the wedding. 😕
And Sanskar also loves her. So why he behaved so harshly with Swara? 😕
Try to update soon dear. 😳 Nah nah, don't take pressure. Update only when u feel okay. And thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Harshu

How are you? What a powerful start- wow! Full of pain and emotional trauma so well captured on both sides but with that touch of intrigue too which leaves one truly wondering what on earth is happening to bring both SwaSan to that- ouch. When I read he first part I was really not expecting that Sanskaar into the second bit. In fact I was all set to bash him for being a real jerk and verging on abusive and was all ready with gaalis- lol! Then the second part clarified how he suffers so deeply too and that remorseful angst was so potently brought out. Really interesting. Will wait to read more but if I fall behind in commenting do forgive me as I am really struggling with multiple pressures at present but will be here whenever I can:)

Lots of love
Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: sur1911

amazing start dear

both love each other but he hurt her .why?

want to know more

plz update soon

thanks for the pm

ps - update your rest stories also

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res'ing Harshu dearest. 😉 And thanks for dedicating it to me. 😳 Infact, I was quite surprised with ur pm about SwaSan FF. 😆 Will unress as soon as possible dearest. Love u. ❤️

Awesome...loved it I m new to forum but when I was a non member I had red ur few one shots and I am a fan of them...harshada di ...its mindblowing

Originally posted by: kojagorimalik

Awesome...loved it I m new to forum but when I was a non member I had red ur few one shots and I am a fan of them...harshada di ...its mindblowing

Hello there,
Oh my god, you invested your very first post on my work? Thank you so very much dearest
You have read some works of mine ? 😳 I m glad you enjoyed reading them
Thanks a ton my dear.
Glad you liked this one too.
Hope to see you more on this thread.

love
- harshada



ps: let me know your name if you dont mind .
Welcome to the forum dear