SWASAN FF - CLIPPED WINGS[part 4 pg ] 10/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
They love each other madly..
But poor they..
What is the reason for his changed behaviour??
Thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Are u going to update today dear?? 😳 If yes, then rushing to res for part 2. 😉


Unresed @ 5. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Harshada 😃. How are u dear. Hope u r doing good. Ye kya Poora golmal hai. Sanskar swara se pyar karta hai par he is majboor. Any big thing behind this majboori. Swara was taking care of him aww
I'm waiting for the suspense to be revealed. Update soon dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Interesting..
Liked both updates..
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45



| PART THREE - SHE LOVES ME A LOT |



Refraining himself from the bunch of thoughts, he quickly wore his clothes and went down for the breakfast. He found, everyone sitting at the dining table.


Sujata walked towards him, checking his forehead by back of her palm asking, "Tum thik ho na? Bukhar utar gaya na?"

Bukhar? What is she talking about? He stood there clueless.


Gently removing her hand from his head, he said, "Yes of course...I am fine...mujhe kya hua?...aur bukhar? Ye aap kya bol rahe ho, Mom?" He was unable to understand what his mother was saying.


Sujata stared at him in disbelief and then glanced at Swara once, who was making breakfast in kitchen. She smiled.

"Matlab tujhe pata hi nahi?...tujhe bukhar tha...Swara took care of you...she was keeping clothes of cold water on your forehead and that's why you are fine now...you are very lucky to have her as your wife" She told him, with a proud smile in her tone for her daughter in law and her care.


He recalled yesterday's night. He remembered, he being wet and sleeping in wet clothes. He looked at her. Everything got cleared to him. It was she. She did everything. That's why she was asking me about how am I in the morning. God! She loves me so much. Why do you love me Swara? This is not right...this is just not right! You gotta forget me because we cannot be together...at least not in this life.


He just nodded at his mom and quickly moved away from her, grabbing his chair. He least wanted to meet his mother's eyes that time who was all happy with her daughter in law and could not stop praising her.

"Mom...aap jaa rahe ho?" he asked her. To be specific, he wanted to confirm it. His parents were leaving for US today.


Sujata nodded while she sat down. Swara came with breakfast and served them.


"Wow beta...palak panir, gajar ka halwa...all Sanskar's favourite things...not bad" Swara lowered her gaze getting naughty winks from her mother in law. Sanskar sighed seeing his mother and at the same time he was feeling guilty for ruining their lives. When his parents will get to know about them, it surely will be a major shock to them.

Sanskar took a bite when he saw his mother staring at him.

"Mom...what?" he asked her annoyingly.

"What what...kaisa bana hai...jaldi batao...your darling wife is waiting" she asked impatiently making Swara to turn red tomato on her constant remarks and teasing.

"Accha hai" he answered fixing his gaze at his plate, not wanting to see his mother's those expressions.


"Swara...you are going to have a hard time dear...because my son and your husband is way too unromantic" Sujata frowned and said in a disappointed tone feeling sorry for Swara.

"It's okay mom...he doesn't need to be romantic...he loves me and that's more than enough for me" she made a statement which widen his eyes. Spoon fell from his hand within no time, making everyone to look at him. He immediately looked at her, and found her staring at him, with her face showing nothing much but still a lot. He definitely had not expected her to say what she did, after the kind of treatment he was giving her, after the kind of ruthlessness he had showed to her, after the kind of hatred he had made her believe he had for her.


He expected at least some anger, complaints and even somewhat hatred for him from her. But there she was! Saying in front of everyone that he loves her! Now this was surely something beyond his understanding.

"What happened Sanskar? You should be happy hearing your wife. Why you look so shocked? Don't you love her?" Sujata, asked seeing her son's weird behaviour and reactions. He indeed was behaving too weird to bear.


Sujata's voice broke his trance, bringing him back to reality. Swara moved forward and picked up the fallen spoon and handed him a new one. "Nothing Mom...Sanskar is just surprised...you see in a pleasant way" Swara spoke on behalf of Sanskar, or can say spoke to save him. He just kept staring at her, unable to process the happenings around him.


Sujata nodded smilingly and they finished their breakfast whereas Sanskar could not eat anything after that. His parents were leaving for USA.


"Beta, take care of yourself and him...you know he don't take care of himself...always work work and work...but now I am going by giving his responsibility to you...Stay blessed and happy always" she put her hand over Swara's head as she bent down to take her blessing followed by his dad's too.



"Yes Mom...don't worry...I am here now...to take care of everything" Swara assured her mother in law, that she would take care of everything...indirectly hinting at Sanskar as she glanced at him.



His parents left. Closing the door, she turned back where she found him, standing next to her and within no time she was pinned to the wall...by him.

He leaned forward, going dangerously close to her, making her breathing uneven.

"What the hell was that?" he asked her furiously, with holding her arm roughly.


"You are hurting me Sanskar" she tried removing his grip on her hand but he was too strong for her.


"Oh really? I am hurting you...haan...I am hurting you...You have hurt me...by marrying me...and how dare you?...how dare you say that I love you haan?...Itna sab tumhe bolne ke bad bhi...You still think that I love you? Seriously? ... Wake up from your dreams...I don't love you, got it? ...Did you hear me? ...I DON"T LOVE YOU" he shouted, tightening the grip on his hand. He was hell infuriated. He wanted her to hate him. He wanted her to leave him and there she was...telling his mother that he loves her.

She pushed him back, getting out of his hold. She walked little ahead. "You don't love me...you don't love me...ohh right...Stop lying to yourself Sanskar...Just stop it...Enough is enough...I can't take this anymore...Just because you don't want to accept it, it doesn't gonna change the fact...and the fact is...You Love Me...as much as I love you" she turned towards him to found him staring at her in disbelief.


"What happened? Ese kyu dekh rahe ho mujhe? Tumhe sach me laga ke tumhare wo sab kehne se...mujhse itna bura bartav karne se...wo sab bakwas karne se, mai wo Maan lungi jo tum chahte ho ke mai Maanu? Ahhh! Seriously Sanskar? You should have used better options you see. I know you better than you know yourself. Tumhe laga bhi kais eke tum koi ghatiya sa naatak karoge mere saamne aakar aur mai use Maan lungi" she said with a smile as she walked towards him.


"Nahi...Ye...Ye galat...galat hai...Mai...nahi" he stumbled over words hearing so much confidence in her voice. Composing himself, he reminded himself and brought the much needed confidence on his face and said, "Nahi karta mai tumse pyar...Suna tumne...Nahi karta mai tumse pyar"

"Still you have guts to lie...impressive...Are tum to behoshi me bhi ye kehte ho ke tum mere bina nahi reh sakte...ke tum mujhse kitna pyar karte ho...Aur tum kehte ho ke tum mujhse pyar nahi karte...you shouldn't have slept in wet clothes you see" she laughed bitterly hearing him.

He closed his eyes in regret. He spit out it in front of her when he was unconscious. Hell! I have complicated things even more.


Before he could say anything, she spoke, "You remember, at one time you were not ready to live without me for a minute"

She recalled her past memory and her words made him remember it as well.

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Maine Kiya Ae Raat Din Bas Tera Hi Intezaar

Tere Bina Aata Nahi Ek Pal Mujhe Ab Karaar

Humdam Mera Mil Gaya

Ham Tum Honge Juda




"I love you Swara...from the time I saw you. I admit I had asked you only for friendship because that time I thought I only like you...but no...I don't like you Swara, I love you. I love you more than anything. I love you beyond anything. I love you till infinity. I have never been so happy in my life the much I am happy when I am around you. I have fallen for you and now I can't imagine even a minute of my life without you...Will you be mine forever? Will you allow me to hold your hand forever? Will you spend your rest of the life with me? Will you be with forever" Sanskar, was confessing his love to Swara, being knelled down in front of the love of his life. There was so much of honesty and love in his eyes that it literally brought tears in her eyes.

"You know, Sanskar...I have always dreamed of a prince charming...My prince Charming...I have always waited for someone for whom I can lose even myself...for whom I can fight the world...for whom I can do anything and I found him. I found my prince charming...in YOU. I love you Sanskar and mark my words I can do anything...anything for you" she gave him her hand, making him stand up. His happiness had no bounds. He couldn't resist but placed a kiss on her forehead before pulling her in his embrace. She hugged him back, getting lost with him, in that moment.



"I love you...I love you so much" he couldn't stop himself from confessing to her again and again. He pulled her little, as he kissed her cheeks and again embraced her.

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"Kuch yaad aaya?" she demanded an answer from him.



His eyes were turning moist. He just kept staring at her, without saying anything.



Precap: Give me a divorce.


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I am extremely sorry for not replying to all the lovely comments for the second chapter. I will do that soon please forgive me for the delay.


Hope you liked the update. Let me know your thoughts after reading and if I should continue this or not.


Love

-Harshada


Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Harshu is this res for the chap. Then I too res 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Dear Harshada,
The update is making the story even more engrossing, I simply love their interactions though I am still very curious to know as to why Sanksaar still refuses to admit that he loves Swara (I get that he feels constrained to do so and wants to make Swara hate him to protect her, you have to let us know from what) but she is not making his life easy.

I like this version of Swara, confident of his love and her love, and not willing to quietly stand by.

Nice story.

Take care and lots of love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Hey!! Chapter 3 was amazing!!
Swara's confidence was amazing!! I love this Swara..!!
Very well written, waiting for more!
Sakshi..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Awesome part
Liked it a lot
Shocking precap
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Read all the 3 parts..
amazing storyline..
Swara's confidence in her love is superb..
I feel ki Sanskaar is doing this under someone's insistence...
Waiting for the next part..

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