SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Res nyna dear
& wishing u a very very happy birthday

Unres

Nice update dear

ohh sanskar forget swara why u distance swara & make her give up even without trying. atleast she can believe her love but i know ur situation swara had a past with her fate. pls patch up between them soon.

loved sanskar letter

update soon dear

bye

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: showrav24
Res nyna dear
& wishing u a very very happy birthday

Dear Showrav,

Thank you for your wishes. Take your time, no rush at all.

love,

Nyna

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Unesed @ 30. 😃

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Unesed @ 30. 😃

Dear Aheli,

Love you loads for the birthday wishes and the beautiful comment. Just give some time and I shall get back, it promises to be a slightly hectic week.

love,

Nyna

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Aheli,

Love you loads for the birthday wishes and the beautiful comment. Just give some time and I shall get back, it promises to be a slightly hectic week.

love,
Nyna

Yes Nynu, take ur time. Will wait for u to revert patiently. 😳

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Nynu...

Unres@ 31...😭

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res 😊
Me first? 😊😉🤗

Nynu 🤗🤗🤗

Well, where do I start...this Chapter was so achingly, poignantly, heart breakingly beautiful. And you know something...it felt far more bittersweet and imbued with genuine pathos, than the movie from which (I presume) you drew the title. "PS I love you" was absolutely lovely in the context of this chapter; the movie itself I didn't care much for. I don't know, somehow...I found the film rather pretentious and artificial. I shall therefore think of this lovely little gem rather than that movie henceforth, whenever I hear those words. 😊

Sunny's letter to Swara---it was so very touching. The way he expressed his emotions, his irrevocable love in such a heartfelt manner. It wasn't sappy at all, Mr Maheshwari (nothing Sunny does could ever be sappy.) 😉

I liked the way he could envision what Swara's reaction to the letter would be...that whole image of her shaking her head at the supposedly mawkishly sentimental lines (given her ferociously mathematical spirit 😆), coupled with her countenance shining with love and joy. 😳 I could practically see Swara myself, at that juncture. 👏👏

But alas...the fates, as you said, had a plan of their own, didn't they? 😭 The "so be it" spirits that said "tathasthu" to that fervent wish of Swara's---for Sunny to be returned to her alive; even if ailing from some impairment. They extracted a heavy price indeed. 😭

They say that the opposite of love is not hate; its indifference. And for Swara, not being recalled by Sanskaar at all, must have been pretty much equal to indifference---a crushing burden from which she simply did not know how to recover, how to fight her way out. As you put so poignantly in that dialogue of hers to Durga Prasad "halaath se ladh sakti hoon, kismat se nahi" 😭 😭

Was lovely to see the way the family was rallying around, doing their best to somehow think through the unexpected and painful situation Swara found herself in. That little nugget of the Sujju---Swara bond, that was very deftly and delicately put.

Sanskar asking "Kavi kaha hai?" must have shattered Swara's heart to a million pieces. 😭 The way she later on asks him (while saying she was Uttara's friend)---about infinity, eternity and forever. 😭 😭 His reply is the same as before, of course...and Swara's reply to him that he had said the same thing before as well, but it is now that she had truly understood the difference between those terms. 😭

The whole sequence where you described how she wore both of their rings together tied in the mouli daaga around her neck; for 6 whole months, before ultimately losing hope that he would ever remember her----that was heart breaking. When her dadi informed her that there was no hope whatsoever of Sanskaar regaining his memory; her gesture was poignant in the extreme. Detaching the rings, putting hers back on, and keeping Sanskaar's ring tied on the daaga round her neck. 😭 Sigh...the sheer pathos of that gesture really hit me hard.

So now she decides she is not going to go back to Kolkata, where so many memories of Sanskaar would swirl around her. She would bury her immense love for him deep within, until she learned not to love him anymore. An impossible task, but one which Swara would feel she had no alternative for...😭

Waiting eagerly to see how the fates conspire to bring them together again. I presume sometime in those 6 months, Sanskaar would have become aware that Kavi was already married to someone else? I feel, somehow, that he is not going to regain his memories of that magical time he and Swara spent together, of those halcyon days when he fell in love with her, and she with him. He is just going to fall for her like a ton of bricks, all over again. 😳 😉

And then, once he has proposed to her, made his potent adoration evident (for the first time as far as he knows; the second time for Swara 😉), wonder if he would somehow recover his lost memories? Or even if he does not recall them, he might see some photos or other memorabilia, of their time together?

Sigh...can't wait to read Chapter 5.

P.S: I Love you. and I love this story. 😳 🤗🤗🤗

----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Sushma Yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#238

ohhh god so emotinal , so powerful, i was trying not to cry, really awsome

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#239

My dear friends,

I am simply embarrassed beyond words,

I have become absolutely tardy with my replies to all the wonderful comments. 😭😭😭

I have read each of them, more than once and adore them, it is just that I have a very hectic work load and a slightly tight deadline and am struggling to find time to reply to the comments and also unres on the posts of the wonderful updates that I have read.

Just give me a couple of days and I shall respond to each of the wonderful comments.

Love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Dear All,

I will start my replies to your wonderful comments, today. I have managed to unres most of my slots except DbC (still crying), Fitoor (still drooling) and Vajra (still composing).

Then I can focus on getting Part 1 of Act III out (it would have Swara and Sanskaar, though not SwaSan)

love,

Nyna