SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17) - Page 25

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

WHY? Why every beautiful thing have to end?
Ohh I know the answer still it hurts!

Off to read...

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I will be back😊

And yes I am:

Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗🤗

And finally, it comes to an end, a blazing, fiery end to a passionate tale. Sanskaar finally realised the irony, when Swara surrenders to her allowing him to claim her, in reality she enables him to break all bonds of fear and surrender to the love he has but is afraid to admit.

Yes ..The Tale Ends😕.You got it right about Swara taking up that step ,it was important for Sanskaar to break those barriers ..his underlying fears.

For at times the fear of losing something is far more painful than actually losing it and it would be a tragedy if one lives one's life in that fear. Swara correctly understood it and dealt with it in only way he would understand, showing it to him as to what love meant actually meant. And as you said more than just a physical union it a was actually an union of their souls. What more is needed?

That part of tricky ..I didn't want readers to feel that Sanskaar realized that he loves Swara only after their love making session.It was sort of Sanskaar accepting the fact that he cant do without Swara ..he wants her to be with him forever.Hence the union in every way after realization which comes out in confrontation part at Gulmohar.

Finally Sanskaar realised it, "bhudhu smart bangaya". And a little too smart for her good - after all as he said, he knew all her buttons and could exactly get her to do what he wanted. 😉

😆😆 Oh Yes ..Sanskaar definitely knew what to hit😉 and no doubts he would use this to his advantage😳

Poor Dadi, I loved her here, convinced her poti is all innocence, she is, sort of , guess their definitions are very different.😆

Dadi🤣 Always under misconceptions ..Better keep her that way ..na😆

And their date at the Mandarmani beach - indeed a "Walk to Remember" (I do recall, you loved this book and had mentioned in the Amaranthine thread - I have not yet read the book, and watched the movie in bits and pieces, but I love the title)

A Walk to Remember - I never completed whole book ..though I know the plot ..Because By the time I reach towards end ..I end up crying ..I shut the book ..that's it..But Nicholas Sparks had some amazing books to his credit.I thought it would aptly fit the note with Gift Sunny got for Swara.😳 Glad you connected with it😛

I loved the whole story, but what caught my attention was Sanskaar's reaction - a beautiful mixture of love and relief, mixed with a tinge of awe when Swara says "I love you, Sanskaar" and he realises that she called him Sanskaar not Sunny, and that she had accepted him as Sanskaar and that he could be forgiven for his folly. It was very brief moment, and yet his whole universe hinged on that particular acceptance.

Yes ..That moment which followed heart searing between them was enough to crumble all the walls. During the Span of two months Sanskaar always wished Swara would stay with him even after realising his identity ..They broke apart for the same reason..his identity being kept secret ..but now with Swara accepting him the way he is ..is his undoing which he was carving for.

Looking forward for the epilogue - you would have it in two parts - you did reserve two posts.

I am doubtful..I had plans but .. I don't know..hence mentioned saying If My mind goes for Toss

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I am a little incoherent, will take time to get back😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Smoking, Steaming, Searing, Scorching Hawt. 😳☺️

Ahem...😉 I am caught up in some commitments so will un res on Monday, for a detailed revert. In meantime...this chappie was so intensely combustible. Now where are those fire extinguishers? 😉

I tell you...you've made global warming go up a notch with Fitoor. 😉 Make Sunny pay for a lot of carbon credits...😆 Or make him do some ecological/ nature support work, where he and Swara have to travel together to jungles and savannahs in Kaziranga or Kanha or Serengeti/Masai Mara or Nagarahole/ Bandipur. 😉 Am sure that is just what they want...far from the madding crowd, just the 2 of them in some cottage deep in the woods. For more of those Fitoor moments...Ahem. 😳☺️

Originally posted by: iamreader

Lucky!!!!!
You made me to smile and nearly cry. My heart literally melted reading this one. And the last proposal just constricted my heart with lot of loads on them! 😭 NOT fair dear! I was coping up with the sad news and tried to give a proper farewell our Swasan deserve. But the scene reminded what a special magical bond we're going to miss! 😭 😭

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

Originally posted by: Esha012

awesome update

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Wow it was so good I loved it so much right from the beginning☺️ till the end so good

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Viji🤗

Ahem ..Ok I take your word for that for steams and smokes😆.Well Fitoor was meant to be asanskaari venture ..🤣 Fire extinguishers - I didn't know they would be needed here 😉 I was planning for epilogue ..😆

Cottage Deep wood ..Ecological support ..Fida main kitna kuch karvayaa .. 😆🤣 Hut in Deep jungle..But I have a new FF in mind ..which might fit into cottage and deep woods.Will keep in mind😉

Will wait for your take '

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky dear...

In one day i read two most romantic parts..one from you n other from nyna...which just left me all blushing n grinning like an idiot...love u both..

Talia🤗🤗 Love you too😛 Super glad could make you grin😉

Last part was magical...

😳 Thank you

Such images your words created that i blushed till my roots...

😆☺️

sanky is mydream man..i soowish my hubby to be same like him...i soo wish...the way he love swara..n make her feel extra special...something to be cherished n desired only by him..

I wish and pray you get your dream who would be like sunny in every way

.it made my heart beat with such intensity...that i fear tachycardia ..really... .right from flashback of how sanky find swara ...drunked with lusty men till final part of private moments at beach before engagement..it was sensational...loved the flow..like a fairy tale...thank u...muahhh..im soo happie..tears of joy after reading proposal...ahhh

Fairy tale .. Ahh that made me so so happy Thanks a lot🤗 ..Fairy tale and prince charming had been an integral part of Fitoor.. I am happy I could give it a befitting ending😳 and you loved the flow

Will wait for epi now...

Yet to start working on it ..will do

love

Talia