SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome.. 👏
Last part was just

Thank you Sneha😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: srividhya87
wow😳😳😳
Sunny is too hot. Swara making war with kitchen tools.. So cute and interesting story line.. Waiting for reaction of Swara when she comes to know about his real name..
Waiting for the next part..

Hi Vidhya

Good to see u here as well ..

Sunny is 😳 and Swara and her War in Kitchen .😆😆. Well First time you enter kitchen it would be war zone na ..😆 Glad you liked the story line ...You will know Swara's Reaction in next update

Thanks Again

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Swara said Yes 😉

I'm saying Res 😈😈🤣

It's wonderful, no less 😳

Fitoor is awesome, as you can guess. 😆

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Hey all

Updated Chapter 4 .. Pm's will be late .. Happy Reading and do drop your thoughts

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Swara said Yes 😉
I'm saying Res 😈😈🤣
It's wonderful, no less 😳
Fitoor is awesome, as you can guess. 😆

😆🤣.Its updated😉

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Re...wow 5s excited to read already

Thanks lucky

Raz

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

I am late

Will be back.

Nyna

I so loved it - surprising - though I could almost feel the ending in the beginning itself, I was simply lost in the flow. Sunny all heart but unwilling to give in. Swara all heart, refusing to think. Both are in love, but then Sunny makes the same mistake, of waiting too long. But it is easy to say, 'you should tell the truth', so difficult to do, when we are scared as to how the other would react. And truth has an unfortunate tendency to reveal itself in the most inopportune times (its timings suck)

But you know what I loved (this is a sure oxymoron, so wait for it) - the beautiful way their heady passionate kisses translated to a very slow sensuous love. Given their last encounter, it was natural to expect a very heated relation but instead it developed to a gentle firm binding of the soul.

Their growing comfort and understanding of each other - by now you must be aware as to how I love these facets of a love story. On a tangential note, how could not the roses bloom so well, they were witness to a beautiful love unfold.

All was well, both poised to confess, till the truth decided to make its appearance, his by accident, hers by anger.😭

It is a small misunderstanding, can be resolved - he has to accept he loves her and is willing to commit, she has to realise that it was only his identity that he kept a secret, his feelings are real.

Would his Bhaiyya and Bhabhi or Ragini help these two lovebirds, or maybe they will find out on their own?

I could not resist leaving a short comment. will be back for a detailed take (I have to do that for the other three - I am truly dead🤢🤢🤢)

love

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: lucky.m

😆🤣.Its updated😉

Lucky 🤗

This was electric and scintillating. 😉 Sanskaar's jealous and possessive reaction when he heard of this handsome stranger who might be bumping into Swara at that function...😆😳 I could envision Steam coming out of his ears and nose 😆

I admired the way Sanskaar told her so clearly what his stand on commitments and relationships were. His viewpoint is not really correct or logical, but one has to respect the fact that he was absolutely upfront about it and did not ever try to mislead her. And Swara, taking the plunge, deciding to live for the present, soak in the joys of the here and now, of being with Sunny. 👏 She realized soon enough, that whatever he may say, he LOVED her. His eyes, his demeanor towards her, his tenderness, his possessiveness...all gave that away.

And then the secret of his real identity comes out of the bag...I liked the Supreme irony here. Sanskaar kept his identity as a business magnate secret, because he wanted to know if Swara was interested in him for himself, wanted him for the person he was. Not his millions in his bank account, his luxury cars and huge bungalows. 😊 But now that he had hidden his true identity, it is Swara who feels that he was merely playing around with her, he was toying with her as a diversion or amusement, till he moved on to someone perhaps from his own elite circle. 😕 😭 One can understand her insecurities and sense of betrayal. No wonder she says..."I love you...and it's over between us" 😭 Delicious, subtle irony in that statement.

Loads of Love

Viji