SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 65

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting..

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Nita...🤗🤗🤗Viji dearest 🤗 🤗 🤗

I am so thrilled today, I am un resing on 10 finally, so this means I am right ready to res on 11 whenever you update it. 😊I am so thrilled too that finally gotten around to reply back to this lovely comment

Coming to the chapter itself, it was a very piquant, bittersweet and emotional one. 😭 The pangs of separation, but at the same time, the knowledge that Sanskaar is urging Swara to go, to ensure her safety. 😊 Thank God no MU here, I would have literally wept and sobbed for hours, had Swara not understood why he is sending her away. 😊...Well MU.You know how much i hate it right😡.. I can only handle it stories from yours or other in forum.Though i do have the habit of torturing you till you clear it out😉.In the show it my worst nightmare😆... I hate MU..So i dont even tread on it 😆... So swara had to know why she is going..😉

Hats off to Ragini for intuitively guessing that SanLak were keeping something from Swara and her. She certainly is one sharp, suspicious person. 😆 I liked the SwaRagini bonding here, though. I still am not very sure about Ragini's emotions towards Swara...but I don't think she is the killer (Ms X) anymore...at least, I am 99.5% sure she is not. 😆 I think you've mentioned that the killer is not part of the family...so though I am quite certain its not Ragini, still sometimes I catch myself wondering if you might throw in a monster twist/ loophole somewhere. 😉 Oh Ragini as an character can be interesting, intelligent and even sharp in our fics..Let us just not think about her character on the show😆... She is not the killer😳..And yeah Ragini is bit complex...She likes her sister but maybe not like how her sister like her..No one can compete with Swara in that 😉... Monster twist/loophole will be something that wont happen.😆... I am not that genius to confuse everyone

I just loved Sanskaar's concern for Swara. It is like he wants to envelop her in warmth and safety and love and peace...and ensure nothing bad ever happens to her. 😊 😳 His explanation of how the kidnapper had died was chilling. 😲 😕 This Ms X really is a dangerous, obsessive, psychotic dame! 😡 🤢 😲Miss X is psycho for sure. Well Sanskar concern for Swara is something i adore in that show too ..And we know he will go to any extents for her..

I found your portrayal of the RagLak dynamic, the arguments between them, to be very realistic; and a nice, subtle way of exploring the difference in the bonds between the respective pairs. The SwaSan bond is like the flow of a river, in a sense. There is turmoil and strife all around them, but their relationship is like the steady, rippling gush of a river, determined in its journey from a mountain top glacier till it reaches the wide ocean. There is a purpose, a resolve, an unshakable, unswerving will in that relationship. It is like a force of nature, I guess.Aww..You explained it so much better.. And that why you are such an awesome writer.. It suits them perfect and that how i envisoned them to be even from the start..SwaSan has troubles but they will be like a rock nothing can shake them up while Raglak troubles are caused by themselves and how they deal with it is their story..

The RagLak bond...it is like oil and fire. 😆 Or fire and gunpowder! Sparkle and light, sound and fury. 😆 Very volatile, and potentially dangerous----may cause quite a few singes unless one is careful, even as it provides an extremely beautiful appearance. 😆 😉 I liked how Lakshya wanted to be there along with Ragini...his intention appears to be very sincere. He wants to bridge this gap, wants to make this marriage work. Or at least, to give it a honest to goodness shot of making it a happy, successful marriage. But Ragini wanted her space for now, she did not want Lakshya along. I feel she will realize on this trip how much she misses him...and wants him to be by her side always? Maybe? 😉Yep Oil and Fire..I like Fire and Gunpowder too.. Sparkle and light who is sparkle and who is light i wonder😆... Well read chapter 11 find out 😉... And yeah you were spot on with thier relationship it either can work out or not

BTW...I L.O.V.E New York. 😳 I've been there twice on holiday, and I feel it is one of the most vibrant, colorful cities. I even have 2 "I Love NY' t shirts. 😆..You know all the researches for Soulmate honeymoon trip made me love NewYork..My mind just goes their for all trips😳..I want to visit New York too and i want to talk about how much i love new york in your 3S which i have yet to unres

That moment between SwaSan before Swara left...😭😭 Sigh...I hate goodbyes. It made me very emotional. The way Swara said that she wanted to live...really live her life, without all this fear and worry...that was so poignant. She is so fed up of hiding all the time, being scared and tense, no? I hope she manages to give a few tight slaps to Ms X when the time comes! Asha's tearful, heartbreaking goodbye was so very emotional, too. 😭Goodbye are hard..And especially when it of SwaSan my heart aches... Yep even without her memory of hiding for two years ..She is fed up imagine having those memories she would be so sad😭... Few Slaps done.. Well Asha will get back her pari aunty soon..I will make sure of that i am not cruel enough to make the little girl suffer..

I have one fear though...Ms X, you have indicated, is not part of the families (I think), but she is keeping a close watch on them? Wouldn't she come to know somehow that SwaRagini have left to go somewhere? She might even keep track and figure out where they are? I wonder if that is Sanskaar's plan all along? He might actually go to NY too, but in secret. He might be shadowing Swara all the time, keeping a close watch as to who might be following her, or doing a reconnaissance around where she is staying?..She will know they left..And she will try to find out.. But that all i can say now😉...Well he didnt go to NY as he was busy trying to find Miss X... Sorry to disappoint you there..How can he leave Asha alone..

And just when Ms X gets ready to strike 😡 🤢, our hero will blow her cover to smithereens! One request---before handing her over to the cops, Swara to get a chance to slap her, at least a half dozen times, please!!You so want slap..deal i will make Swara slap miss x.. Our hero or heroine might blow her cover.😉...

Now waiting for 11. 😉Posted 11 and Viji dear..Thank you so much for your lovely comment.. Comments from you make one very very happy person

Loads of Love,

------Viji

Lots of Love

Nita

Originally posted by: StarySKY

I am the first .. 😈

Bring it on Nita ..

Originally posted by: StarySKY

I am the first .. 😈

Bring it on Nita ..