SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 15

Nice work dear.
Curious to know about swara life.
I don't understand that Sanskaar love swara or not.
Sanskaar married some one else, it's also shocking.
But I think your story have a big suspens.
Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Nice work dear.
Curious to know about swara life.
I don't understand that Sanskaar love swara or not.
Sanskaar married some one else, it's also shocking.
But I think your story have a big suspens.
Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: showrav24

unres dear

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Originally posted by: showrav24

res dear

unres

Hello nita dear

How r u? I hope all is well

update is beautiful dear

so swasan are friend from childhood like sanskar bed time story about their friendship.

some thing is fishy in ragini swara also noticed difference between ragini & sanskar story telling.

now again swara kidnap it must be ragini pls update soon i can't wait.

pls don't spoiled sanskar surprise.

Thanks for the update dear.

love u

bye

Finally updated Chapter 4 guys..Chapter 4 part one page 1 and part two on page 2..A long update ..Give me your feedbacks ..Waiting for it ..

Res for Chapters 3 and 4. 😊 I loved chapter 3 as you know...and now rushing off to read chapter 4. Will un res soonest I can, dear. Probably Monday or max Tuesday.

Res nita baby..

Hi Nita, 😊
This is the first story by u which I'm going to read as we became buddies recently. 😳
So, res for all the 4 chapters. 😃
Will unres as soon as I finish reading them. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
Unresed.😃
Nice CS.😊
Prologue:-
Sanskar lost his wife and is having a li'l daughter Asha. So his wife's Dida is living with them and taking care of Asha. His friend cum boss is Adarsh. But why did Sanskar changed his name to Arjun??😕 On the other hand Swara was going to get married with Laksh. Though her alliance was fixed with Sanskar (unknown to her) she rejected it. And when she got to know about it, he was already married to someone else. But who stabbed Swara?? And why??😕
Ch 1:-
Sanskar saved Swara but she slipped into coma and lost her memory!😭! Sanskar brought her home and Asha named her as Pari. All Swara could remember that her killed was wearing heels.😕 Slowly Sanskar fell for Swara. Even Swara too. And kissed.😕 But then Sanskar started to run away from his feelings and started avoiding her.
Ch 2:-
Sanskar was still avoiding Swara. Asha told Swara about a pic and after seeing the pic, Swara could remember the names of those in the pic, who happens to be her then would be in-laws or Sanskar's family member (unknown to her/ not in her memory.) So Sanskar misunderstood her that she was acting of ML and wanted her to leave his house.😭 Dida came to rescue. Sanskar understood his mistake and stopped her from leaving.😳 Then he brought her to his house. So everyone thinks that Swara left Laksh on their wedding day? Sanskar was shocked to her that she was going to marry his bro. I'm still confused about Sanskar's reason to leave his family.😕 Then Sanskar got another shock that Pari is actually Swara. Poor Swara, confued due to her ML. He then told them that she was stabbed by someone. But they still believed that she intentionally left Laksh. But who wrote in Swara's handwritting??😕 So Ragini married Laksh instead! And why Ragini is not affected by Swara's ML??😕 She is behaving so weirdly!!😕 Sanskar didn't let Swara stay in MM. He is so protective of her.😃
Ch 3:-
This part was lovely.😊 Sanskar asked Swara to forgive him for hurting her. Finally things setteled between them. Okay, got to know that Sanskar and DP had some issue regarding their family business, that's why they didn't get along. But why they r blaming Sanskar for his wife's death?? And who was his wife??😕 Still little confused with Sanskar's past.😆 Sanskar told Swara about their childhood through Asha's bedtime story.😳 This was so nice. Loved it.😳 Finally SanLak convo, but Laksh is still angry with Sanskar.😕 Liked Uttara and Sanskar's bond.😊 But I didn't like Ragini's way of telling Swara about their parents, themselves and their childhood. It was really very emotionless.😕 And who was following Swara?? Was she kidnapped again?? Who did it and why??😕 I hope Sanskar finds her.😕
Ch 4 A:-
There is something very unusual about Ragini towards her behaviour towards Swara. Even Sanskar can understand it.😕 Finally Sanskar found Swara after a lots of effort. Poor girl, she was unconscious. Finally Swara gained her consciousness.😊 Ragini is really behaving very weirdly. But why??😕Sanskar managed to make Ragini open up a little. Sanskar is suspecting that Ragini hates Swara?! Swara's B'day celebration was nice.😃 Ragini forgot Swara's B'day, which is making me doubt at her!!😕 Yay! Finally Swara could remember a little that she was kidnapped on her wedding day from her house. Good progress for her.😃 Ragini's behaviour is still very confusing. Finally Sanskar let SP and AP know that Swara was kidnapped on her wedding day.
Ch 4 B and C:-
Swara is so sweet. Saving the last piece of her B'day cake for Sanskar.😃 Sanskar again didn't accept her request to give her his heart, coz he thinks that he is not the right person.😭 And what happened to Sanskar's wife??😕 And the another person, except Swasan, who didn't get sleep due to the failures of her perfect plan to harm Swara is her own sweet and loving sister Ragini, right???!!😕 I know its Ragini!!!!!😡🤢 She planned to kill Swara so that she can marry Laksh instead, right?? And she was successful in harming if not killing Swara, and marry Laksh!!!😡 But what problem she is having now?? Oh yeah, when Swara will get back her memory, she can easily recognize her murderer!!😉 That's why, she decided to harm Swara again in the mall!!!😡 But this time also her plan flopped as Swara managed to save herself.(Thank god!!)😃 This has to be Ragini!!😡 I just hope that Swara gets her memory soon, so that SwaSan can expose Ragini infront of everyone.😉 And plzz try to solve Sanskar's wife's death mystery soon.😆
I'm loving this FF so much!!!!❤️ Its so intriguing.😉 Plzz update soon.😳 Eagerly waiting for the next part.😛 And thanks for the pm of this wonderful story.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for Chapters 3 and 4. 😊 I loved chapter 3 as you know...and now rushing off to read chapter 4. Will un res soonest I can, dear. Probably Monday or max Tuesday.

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